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a small train derailed there was no casualty a millipede
( Inspired by Basho)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022




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Date: 1/13/2022 7:06:00 AM
I'd say, glorious observation, interpretation of nature! Impressed I am! Thanks - Marshall.
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Date: 1/12/2022 6:02:00 AM
Cute.. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 1/11/2022 7:10:00 PM
Just perfect, Valsa! As good as a haiku can get. FAVE time for me. Thanks, Gershon
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Date: 1/11/2022 5:05:00 PM
Another perfectly crafted Haiku (after Basho). Congratulations on another gem! Brian
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Date: 1/11/2022 3:45:00 PM
so cute with the picture!!!!
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Date: 1/11/2022 2:53:00 PM
Awh! Valsa This was fantastic, and I couldn't stop smiling the entire time. Excellent write. Blessings ~ Debra
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Date: 1/11/2022 6:58:00 AM
Valsa, you've created a beautiful Haiku that's been well constructed. Very well done.
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Date: 1/11/2022 2:08:00 AM
Craftily composed. Well done. I had a fault in my internet, so Ii apologize if I missed some poems.
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Date: 1/10/2022 10:24:00 PM
Yes! The art, the twist, the surprise in senryu / haiku. Poetry lovers can work in and on on perfecting craft, thanks for everything VG. Shalom shalom in Jesus
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