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An Accident

a small train derailed there was no casualty a millipede
( Inspired by Basho)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Kendrick Avatar
February 20, 2024 at 7:47 AM
Oh!! I wonder if the millipede was crawling on the tract or on the overturned train or what. It made me think. Thanks for sharing and for stopping by my page. Sara K
Ahmed Avatar
January 13, 2022 at 7:06 AM
I'd say, glorious observation, interpretation of nature! Impressed I am! Thanks - Marshall.
Zahid Avatar
January 12, 2022 at 6:02 AM
Cute.. Good luck in the contest.
Wolf Avatar
January 11, 2022 at 7:10 PM
Just perfect, Valsa! As good as a haiku can get. FAVE time for me. Thanks, Gershon
Sambourne Avatar
January 11, 2022 at 5:05 PM
Another perfectly crafted Haiku (after Basho). Congratulations on another gem! Brian
Dietrich Avatar
January 11, 2022 at 3:45 PM
so cute with the picture!!!!
Brown Avatar
January 11, 2022 at 2:53 PM
Awh! Valsa This was fantastic, and I couldn't stop smiling the entire time. Excellent write. Blessings ~ Debra
Poet Avatar
January 11, 2022 at 6:58 AM
Valsa, you've created a beautiful Haiku that's been well constructed. Very well done.
Buhagiar Avatar
January 11, 2022 at 2:08 AM
Craftily composed. Well done. I had a fault in my internet, so Ii apologize if I missed some poems.
Deo Avatar
January 10, 2022 at 10:24 PM
Yes! The art, the twist, the surprise in senryu / haiku. Poetry lovers can work in and on on perfecting craft, thanks for everything VG. Shalom shalom in Jesus
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