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An Accident

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a small train derailed there was no casualty a millipede ( Inspired by Basho)

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/20/2024 7:47:00 AM

Oh!! I wonder if the millipede was crawling on the tract or on the overturned train or what. It made me think. Thanks for sharing and for stopping by my page. Sara K

Marshall Iftekhar Ahmed

Date: 1/13/2022 7:06:00 AM

I'd say, glorious observation, interpretation of nature! Impressed I am! Thanks - Marshall.

Paghunda Zahid

Date: 1/12/2022 6:02:00 AM

Cute.. Good luck in the contest.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 1/11/2022 7:10:00 PM

Just perfect, Valsa! As good as a haiku can get. FAVE time for me. Thanks, Gershon

Brian Sambourne

Date: 1/11/2022 5:05:00 PM

Another perfectly crafted Haiku (after Basho). Congratulations on another gem! Brian

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/11/2022 3:45:00 PM

so cute with the picture!!!!

Debra L Brown

Date: 1/11/2022 2:53:00 PM

Awh! Valsa This was fantastic, and I couldn't stop smiling the entire time. Excellent write. Blessings ~ Debra

Sotto Poet

Date: 1/11/2022 6:58:00 AM

Valsa, you've created a beautiful Haiku that's been well constructed. Very well done.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 1/11/2022 2:08:00 AM

Craftily composed. Well done. I had a fault in my internet, so Ii apologize if I missed some poems.

Anil Deo

Date: 1/10/2022 10:24:00 PM

Yes! The art, the twist, the surprise in senryu / haiku. Poetry lovers can work in and on on perfecting craft, thanks for everything VG. Shalom shalom in Jesus