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You can open your eyes now, darling. Surpise! I bought it two days ago. This is a living room. There will be nursery. There's no furniture in a here yet, except that vase on the floor. Please, put this beautiful white rose in it. One day there will be a hundred of them for the number of years we spend together. And now I suggest we go to a restaurant to celebrate our one-year anniversary. Yep, a bit. Nope, I had only a glass of wine. All right, you drive, sweety. black rot in the vase dry rose petals on the floor dark boarded-up house 27.10.2019 Writing Challenge, October- Flower Or Flowers- Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Dear Heart- Wiishkobe Ode

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Date: 11/3/2019 12:51:00 PM
Kurt congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this beautiful and emotional poem!
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Kurt Ravidas
Date: 11/15/2019 9:18:00 AM
Thank you very much, D.H.W.O. God bless you, your contests and your contestants. Lays of love)
Date: 11/1/2019 4:51:00 PM
love the take on the flower theme, a fabulous haibun, many congrats Kurt:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 11/1/2019 3:16:00 PM
- Congratulations on your beautiful poem, Kurt :) - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/1/2019 9:04:00 AM
Oh this is so sad! Well done and congratulations!
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Date: 11/1/2019 8:56:00 AM
Kurt congrats on a well deserved win!;)
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Date: 10/28/2019 7:31:00 PM
A shining start devolves into ominous shadows - love the mystery, Kurt, best wishes for the contest!
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Kurt Ravidas
Date: 10/29/2019 12:13:00 PM
Thank you, Michelle. Rays of love)