Kurt Ravidas Poet Haibun

An Accident

You can open your eyes now, darling. Surpise! I bought it two days ago. This is a living room. There will be nursery. There's no furniture in a here yet, except that vase on the floor. Please, put this beautiful white rose in it. One day there will be a hundred of them for the number of years we spend together. And now I suggest we go to a restaurant to celebrate our one-year anniversary. Yep, a bit. Nope, I had only a glass of wine. All right, you drive, sweety.

black rot in the vase
dry rose petals on the floor
dark boarded-up house


27.10.2019
Writing Challenge, October- Flower Or Flowers- Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Dear Heart- Wiishkobe Ode

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Constance La France November 3, 2019 at 12:51 PM Kurt congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this beautiful and emotional poem! Kurt Ravidas November 15, 2019 at 9:18 AM Thank you very much, D.H.W.O. God bless you, your contests and your contestants. Lays of love)

Jan Allison November 1, 2019 at 4:51 PM love the take on the flower theme, a fabulous haibun, many congrats Kurt:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen November 1, 2019 at 3:16 PM - Congratulations on your beautiful poem, Kurt :) - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kim Rodrigues November 1, 2019 at 9:04 AM Oh this is so sad! Well done and congratulations!

Brenda Chiri November 1, 2019 at 8:56 AM Kurt congrats on a well deserved win!;)

Michelle Faulkner October 28, 2019 at 7:31 PM A shining start devolves into ominous shadows - love the mystery, Kurt, best wishes for the contest! Kurt Ravidas October 29, 2019 at 12:13 PM Thank you, Michelle. Rays of love)