An Abundant Life Pill

This pill will offer more abundant life
Just take it by inviting the Spirit in
The Spirit pill frees you from life of strife
A pill like this frees one a new life begin

The Spirit will guide one upon straight pathway
The pathway can be narrow, rocky_steep
The many blessings that flow on this highway
A Spirit pill guide takes the soul deep_deep

Deep into the soul searches, ridding dearth
Filliing the hollows with His Living Word
A human learning of his unique worth
This pill of life offers the best; its preferred

This Spirit pill offers abundant life
Swallow it to live life free of strife  

Sponsor: Russell Sivey
Contest:Pill Of Life
Written: February 12, 2013
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Jones Avatar
February 26, 2013 at 4:16 PM
Congratulations Sara
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February 26, 2013 at 1:54 PM
Sara, this pill is a must, a nice winning poem..thank you for sharing..LINDA
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
February 24, 2013 at 10:07 AM
Many congratulations Sara luv xx
Roberts Avatar
February 23, 2013 at 8:00 PM
Congratlations Sara ....Seren
Lwele Avatar
February 16, 2013 at 2:13 AM
I LOVE IT.
Gasun Avatar
February 13, 2013 at 10:12 AM
I extremely love your poem my dear friend, Sara. This is a great masterpiece and I'm including it in my fav. list if you don't mind. A winner for me. Thank you so much for sharing and good luck always! Have a blessed day always! love and big hugs, Leonora
Horne Avatar
February 13, 2013 at 8:14 AM
lovely sonnet, my friend. Hope all is well there x
Veetil Avatar
February 12, 2013 at 9:31 PM
Enlightening... I think it needs be reminded to the busy world at times to embrace divinity and spirituality...thanks for sharing this and good luck in the contest...
Manassian Avatar
February 12, 2013 at 7:54 PM
Very uplifting and true! Thanks, Sara, for the reminder that we need to be Spirit filled believers! God bless you!
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