An Abundant Life Pill

This pill will offer more abundant life
Just take it by inviting the Spirit in
The Spirit pill frees you from life of strife
A pill like this frees one a new life begin

The Spirit will guide one upon straight pathway
The pathway can be narrow, rocky_steep
The many blessings that flow on this highway
A Spirit pill guide takes the soul deep_deep

Deep into the soul searches, ridding dearth
Filliing the hollows with His Living Word
A human learning of his unique worth
This pill of life offers the best; its preferred

This Spirit pill offers abundant life
Swallow it to live life free of strife  

Sponsor: Russell Sivey
Contest:Pill Of Life
Written: February 12, 2013

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 2/26/2013 4:16:00 PM
Congratulations Sara
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Date: 2/26/2013 1:54:00 PM
Sara, this pill is a must, a nice winning poem..thank you for sharing..LINDA
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Date: 2/24/2013 10:07:00 AM
Many congratulations Sara luv xx
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Date: 2/23/2013 8:00:00 PM
Congratlations Sara ....Seren
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Date: 2/16/2013 2:13:00 AM
I LOVE IT.
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Date: 2/13/2013 10:12:00 AM
I extremely love your poem my dear friend, Sara. This is a great masterpiece and I'm including it in my fav. list if you don't mind. A winner for me. Thank you so much for sharing and good luck always! Have a blessed day always! love and big hugs, Leonora
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Date: 2/13/2013 8:14:00 AM
lovely sonnet, my friend. Hope all is well there x
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Date: 2/12/2013 9:31:00 PM
Enlightening... I think it needs be reminded to the busy world at times to embrace divinity and spirituality...thanks for sharing this and good luck in the contest...
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Date: 2/12/2013 7:54:00 PM
Very uplifting and true! Thanks, Sara, for the reminder that we need to be Spirit filled believers! God bless you!
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