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An Abandoned House Awaits

"Can you feel the soul of an abandoned house; can you hear the whispering? " Quote by _Constance La France When an animal knows they are going to die, they find a comfortable place to curl up and they wait. So is it suitable that an abandoned house would be the final respite of a sinner like me! The air would be cool and the noises would be unfamiliar, perhaps a family of raccoons have made their home here? It just so happens I've walked the county over the last year, capturing in my mind all the homes and landscapes that are open. Open in the sense that they are abandoned and no one would know... Absolutely no knowledge of ones presence. It wouldn't take long for hunger to set in and the walls to begin to close in, welcoming death. As I lay down, I would hear the pigeons in the attic cooing, The house would be creaking and I'd imagine spiders in their webs spinning! I could also hear the whispering from my demons in these places, "It's time to come home, prepare to burn!" Thursday May 25, 2023 Writing Challenge - C Quotes - Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Constance La France
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Andresen Avatar
June 6, 2023 at 5:46 AM
- Woow, this was a bit scary, Robert ... but, what do we really know what's hiding in this old building - Well written - Congratulations on your win :) -
Kendrick Avatar
June 6, 2023 at 4:00 AM
Congratulations on this winner in Constance's contest. Way to go. I don't think I would want to be there with those demons. Thanks for sharing this one with us. Sara
Alex Avatar
June 4, 2023 at 12:56 AM
"As I lay down, I would hear the pigeons in the attic cooing, The house would be creaking and I'd imagine spiders in their webs spinning!" - Very beautiful poem. Congratulations!
La France Avatar
June 3, 2023 at 7:00 PM
Robert, thank you so much for sharing your wonderful poem with us in my Writing Challenge congratulations and well done !
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