Among the Single-Digit Numbers

Unlike the number one which stands as one straight line,
the number I am thinking of supports three other lines on top of it,
and these three other lines are also straight.
We see no curving lines like which appear in numbers
zero, two, three, five , nine, and in double-bubble eight!
Number seven has one short line jutting from its tall leg,
but the number I am thinking of
on just one leg is balancing three lines of equal length,
which if you were to finish them off, would form a perfect square.

Fair and square, this number means stability.
It’s safety, security and strength.
How strong is its foundation to offer the calmness
we would find inside the walls of our own homes!
Embodying the number of those things we most depend on -
our seasons, our directons, and the elements -
how special is this number I describe.
A number of spirituality too, it stands unique among
the single-digit numbers.

Feb. 10, 2020
For Juliet Ligon's What's in a Number Poetry Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Ligon Avatar
February 29, 2020 at 7:53 PM
Congratulations on your placement in my "What's In A Number" contest! I could envision the number itself as well as some of its unique qualities.
Allison Avatar
February 29, 2020 at 7:36 PM
I got confused by the first stanza but in the second stanza four comes to the fore! Congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
One Avatar
February 15, 2020 at 7:57 AM
You did this very well Andrea..
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 13, 2020 at 11:15 PM
You deserve a lot of credit for this poem Andrea. I got a little lost in the first stanza. The seasons gives the number away. This has got to be a Top winner. Kudos! xxoo
Watt Avatar
February 13, 2020 at 2:58 PM
Fun to see you stretching your free verse muscles! I can tell this took a lot of fourthought, nyuk nyuk
Theraven Avatar
February 11, 2020 at 10:17 PM
Andrea, This is a tricky contest. What is this poem four? -Richard
Dietrich Avatar
February 11, 2020 at 11:41 PM
ha!
Poetry Avatar
February 11, 2020 at 7:47 PM
I heard it yelled when walking by the golf course...it has always been a lucky number for me
Dietrich Avatar
February 11, 2020 at 11:42 PM
not one of my numbers but I have many friends that have it in their numerology. they are usually "gate keeper" types, who value society and its rules, also they make good teachers and are good at puzzles usually.
Cheney Avatar
February 11, 2020 at 3:39 PM
The number was in the fore of my mind and somehow I don't know what for. Interesting write. Enjoyed it.
Theraven Avatar
February 12, 2020 at 11:36 PM
Kenneth, I see what ya did there. We'll the fourth time I read it anyway. -R
Bayles Avatar
February 11, 2020 at 2:26 PM
Very nice, Andrea.
Kgaswane Avatar
February 11, 2020 at 12:45 PM
Hello Andrea This is an interesting poem and I am still working it out. It stimulates one's imagination. Regards Mpho Kgaswane.
Dietrich Avatar
February 11, 2020 at 3:26 PM
thanks, to know the number just read and see the one that I never mentioned. This was for a contest and at the contest it tells us to write about this particular number without saying what it is. I guess I still did not describe it well enough. On the keyboard the three lines formed on top of its leg come together but really, they should be open.
Faulkner Avatar
February 11, 2020 at 11:09 AM
I love 'double bubble eight' - it is my favorite number - but I admire the spiritual aspects you describe in the number four-
Dietrich Avatar
February 11, 2020 at 3:27 PM
I wonder if your numerology has 8 in it. My three numbers are 1, 5 and 7. I love 5 and 7!!! 5 is even lucky for me.
Dietrich Avatar
February 11, 2020 at 8:25 AM
are people not getting my number??
Michael Avatar
February 11, 2020 at 7:19 AM
It is also the loneliest number you would ever know...Nice write
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