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Among Snowflakes - El

my birth was among snowflakes thus for winter my soul aches and of icy scenes I dream standing by a frozen stream while the earth is serene still and brave birds in the sky trill my birth was among snowflakes _____________________ July 6, 2021 Poetry/Elemental Form/Haiku/among snowflakes - EL Copyright Protected, ID 07-1369-303-06 All Rights Reserved, 2021, Constance La France Written for the Standard contest, Elemental (Charlie's Created Form) sponsor, Charles Messina, Judged 07/31/2021 First Place

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Joanna Daniel

Date: 8/1/2021 11:16:00 PM

Beautiful write, Constance, congratulations:)

Constance La France
Date: 8/2/2021 2:50:00 PM

Jo, thank you for the compliment and the congratulations ~ serenity and love _Constance

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 7/31/2021 7:10:00 PM

Back to congratulate you, sweet friend. God bless you always. Love, Gina

Constance La France
Date: 8/1/2021 8:45:00 AM

Gina, thank you for the congratulations, appreciate ~ love and serenity _Constance

Bhawana Pant

Date: 7/31/2021 9:28:00 AM

Congratulations on your first placement. Great.

Constance La France
Date: 7/31/2021 11:42:00 AM

Bhawana, thank you for the congratulations ~ friendship and harmony _Constance

Sotto Poet

Date: 7/31/2021 8:22:00 AM

Congratulations on your contest top win, Constance. You deserve it with this great poem

Constance La France
Date: 7/31/2021 11:43:00 AM

Lasaad, thank you for the compliment ~ peace and tranquility _Constance

Krish Radhakrishna

Date: 7/31/2021 6:04:00 AM

great poem!!congrats on your top win!!

Constance La France
Date: 7/31/2021 11:44:00 AM

Krish, thanks for the compliment and congrats _Constance

Christuraj Alex

Date: 7/31/2021 4:14:00 AM

A Very beautiful work. Congratulations on your First Placing!

Constance La France
Date: 7/31/2021 11:44:00 AM

Christuraj, thanks for the compliment and congratulations ~ peace and tranquility _ Constance

Charles Messina

Date: 7/31/2021 3:52:00 AM

Beautifully written, Constance. Congratulations on your top win. Love this! ~Charlie

Constance La France
Date: 7/31/2021 11:45:00 AM

Charlie, thanks for the inspiration, the form and the contest and my great placement and the compliment and congratulations, appreciate ~ peace and tranquility _Constance

Jan Allison

Date: 7/7/2021 9:05:00 AM

you wove the elements in so beautifully Constance:-) hugs Jan xx

Constance La France
Date: 7/7/2021 10:36:00 AM

Jan, thanks for the visit and the compliment ~ love and serenity _Constance

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 7/6/2021 12:00:00 PM

Love it! God bless you with a win. Love, Gina

Constance La France
Date: 7/7/2021 8:41:00 AM

Gina, thank you for the compliment ~ love and serenity _Constance