'amity' - Peace

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This piece was inspired by a friend who was going to a very confusing time in his life. I wrote this and send it to him via text message. Never actually posted it anywhere

You know how we sometimes analyze too much and forget to feel? It’s okay to feel - whether it be confusion pain sadness anger or you just want to cry - even the strong ones like us get lost we don't always say what we really need, we hide behind things we end up being the go between and supporter to everyone.. So tonight if you're lost know that in your silence you can still liaise with your Maker... He sees beyond what you ever imagined and most importantly He gives you the peace and guidance you sometimes seek in others... ©134403112014

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Liam Mcdaid

Date: 11/6/2014 6:33:00 PM

powerful piece of writing wilma excellent pen

Pace Ink-U-Script

Date: 11/6/2014 5:32:00 AM

Welcome back....it's good to hear and read your latest work. I find this very helpful...a strong write for those who feel weak at times.