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Amidst the Mists

Amidst the mists and coldest frosts, With naked wrists and darkest souls, She slams her fists against the bars, And still she screams she sees the ghosts. Through summer days and autumn nights, Through season’s end and blinded sights, They keep her down and clip her wings, To mute the lovely song she sings. In troubled times for modest lives, To see the truth beyond the lies, As time goes by and death comes 'round, Her body’s cast upon the ground. Through hearts of ice and hands of stone, The devil’s wife’s possessed the throne. But even though pain’s at it’s most, She’ll still admit she’s seen the ghosts.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 4/8/2011 5:38:00 AM
:D This is my first poem with over 100 views!! It's so exciting to me that at least 100 people have viewed this exact poem... It's such an encouragement to me. My family squashes the arts, and PoetrySoup is the scream that I lost long, long ago. It makes me happy. ^.^
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Date: 3/4/2011 6:34:00 AM
Absolutely fantastic lines here, Mandy!
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Date: 3/2/2011 6:04:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured on PoetrySoup this week Mandy. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/1/2011 9:13:00 AM
Hey Mandy, I really like this poem. Really rocks :) wel done:):) Ryan j.
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Date: 2/2/2011 5:53:00 AM
The you Debbie! :) I don't fully understand the way that the forms work, so I really do need all the help I can get. :)) (I liked the way Quatrain sounded) Thanks for the help!!!
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Date: 1/30/2011 2:18:00 PM
What a marvelous 1ST write, well you could call it Verse or Rhyme or Quatrain, and BOy have you got meter!!! [Welcome to the Soup, I will help you "name" your forms, if you don't want help just Soup Mail me Deb GO AWAY! ;)] Light & Love
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Date: 1/17/2011 4:35:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Mandy. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors this year. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information about PoetrySoup. If you don't find what you are looking for ask any poet here. Everyone is willing to help. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/16/2011 12:23:00 PM
Welcome to PS....Very nice poem...Jimmy
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Date: 1/15/2011 10:05:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your creative write tonight .. hope your time on Soup will be filled with sharing with luv.. check out the contests too.. good luck with luv..
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