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Written i August 2026

Placed Third in :  Eight by Eight Poetry Contest oF Nette Oncllaud 

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Amidst the Fog


Soft grey veils descend on the plains,
The world grows quiet, hushed and blurred;
I stroll back home amidst the fog
 Without a sense of direction.

My breath makes cold and hazy clouds,
Lost in this murky frosty shroud,
My thoughts start to roam far and wide
Where worries waltz and fade away.
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Dietrich Avatar
August 6, 2026 at 1:46 AM
Back with congrats. Way to go, Krish
George Avatar
August 6, 2026 at 1:36 AM
Beautiful portrayal of fog. I like your entry more than mine. When the veil of fog overshadows us, it is natural that we lose our direction. Congratulations on your win.
Dietrich Avatar
August 4, 2026 at 11:43 PM
I really like how you portrayed fog here, Krish.
Jones Avatar
August 2, 2026 at 3:39 AM
Beautiful imagery! Like how you put this together! Best wishes!
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