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AMIDST POUNDS OF FORCE and FURY Conscious cold clouds sweeping, killing softly the suns bright, romancing evocatively with the winds, aghast it blows! Blows! Gray to black are the skies shadows. Shafts of light longer, they tantalize in between blows joined clear by a decibel bang! Frightened golden grains for harvest, helpless! They bend down and so are the piteous bushes, unashamed, waving their arms as if crying out for immediate rescue but no one is there... Drops to dagger liquid sequins fall heavily unto them nonstop. Amidst pounds of force and fury from the natural forces, I, glad to be cocooned by the rhythmic rise and fall of his chest. Wrapped tight to his arms, my heart is soaking with contentment, his drizzling caresses flood my nerves, I am all giddy inside... ________________________________________________________________ ***Picture #2 6:00 pm, November 19, 2015

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Ralph Sergi

Date: 12/6/2015 3:56:00 PM

Hi Olive: Congratulations on a beautifully worded poem. It certainly evoked the storm' strength.

James Inman

Date: 12/5/2015 10:33:00 AM

Beautiful write Olive, love the line "Drops to dagger liquid sequins..."

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 12/5/2015 12:49:00 AM

Wonderful poem and win dear Olive ... big congrats!

Skat A

Date: 12/4/2015 11:50:00 PM

Olive, Congrats on your "Epic Sighting" Love SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/4/2015 11:08:00 PM

Olive, thank you for supporting my contest "Epic Sighting." Stop by my latest blog --Abandon-- if you'd like. Have a nice day. Love ~LINDA~

Scott Thirtyseven

Date: 11/23/2015 7:21:00 AM

Fabulous imagery, and the way in which you knit in your romantic intent is magical. Great write.

Kp Nunez

Date: 11/21/2015 6:44:00 PM

Powerful imagery, uplifting message and evocative word choices make this a very engaging read. Write on, Olive. hugs!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/21/2015 3:38:00 PM

- A very well written and wonderful poem, Olive - I wish you a great and peaceful weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 12/25/2015 5:39:00 AM

Thank you so much Anne Lise.. =`) I am glad you find it wonderful!~Olive Eloisa =`)

James Fraser

Date: 11/20/2015 4:06:00 PM

Love being amidst of your poetry Olive and the ideas we share. Soon we'll be writing inches apart instead of miles. So love this piece little one, and to my fav's it goes xx // hugs // James xxxx

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 11/28/2015 8:23:00 PM

Thank you so much JAmes.. =`) weeeee I love sharing my poetry with you.. =`)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 11/20/2015 9:16:00 AM

your creative side is on fire, eloi... daunting and dreamy.. galeng!..huggs

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 11/27/2015 1:54:00 AM

Thank you so much NEtte.. =`)

David Meade

Date: 11/19/2015 9:30:00 PM

Looks like a storm is brewing . . . the one outside looks threatening but the one inside is wild with passionate glee!! Nicely done.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 11/25/2015 6:33:00 AM

Thanks much David, like I said down I do not like to end my poems as much as possible in sad tone... =`)thanks much!

Etienne Lariviere

Date: 11/19/2015 4:14:00 PM

Majestical and magical wonderful poem!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 11/24/2015 8:17:00 PM

thanks much Etienne.. =`)

Afolabi Muideen

Date: 11/19/2015 4:14:00 PM

Wow! This is great. I love the breathe of nature. Excellent..........A.M.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 11/22/2015 9:28:00 PM

Thanks much Afolabi.. =`) I am glad you like it.. =`)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/19/2015 4:02:00 PM

wow, you ended it on a very romantic note!! Great imagery as always, Nette. I liked your bushes piteous and waving their arms. I love personification!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 11/22/2015 9:24:00 PM

Andie thanks much.. =`) I welcome this encouraging remark.. =`)

Lu Loo

Date: 11/19/2015 9:17:00 AM

*love* :)- lu xx

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 11/21/2015 5:11:00 AM

thank you for your lovely comment.. =` )

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/19/2015 8:01:00 AM

A change in mood in the last stanza set your work to a different note..Enjoyed reading your very descriptive work..Thanks for the visit to my page..I appreciate the time spent there..Sara

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 11/20/2015 2:07:00 AM

Sara, I really like sad endings and tragic ones, I rarely write in that theme, and this the one I want to end it quite calm contradicting the raging storm out.. ~Olive Eloisa =`)