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AMIDST POUNDS OF FORCE and FURY Conscious cold clouds sweeping, killing softly the suns bright, romancing evocatively with the winds, aghast it blows! Blows! Gray to black are the skies shadows. Shafts of light longer, they tantalize in between blows joined clear by a decibel bang! Frightened golden grains for harvest, helpless! They bend down and so are the piteous bushes, unashamed, waving their arms as if crying out for immediate rescue but no one is there... Drops to dagger liquid sequins fall heavily unto them nonstop. Amidst pounds of force and fury from the natural forces, I, glad to be cocooned by the rhythmic rise and fall of his chest. Wrapped tight to his arms, my heart is soaking with contentment, his drizzling caresses flood my nerves, I am all giddy inside... ________________________________________________________________ ***Picture #2 6:00 pm, November 19, 2015

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Date: 12/6/2015 3:56:00 PM
Hi Olive: Congratulations on a beautifully worded poem. It certainly evoked the storm' strength.
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Date: 12/5/2015 10:33:00 AM
Beautiful write Olive, love the line "Drops to dagger liquid sequins..."
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Date: 12/5/2015 12:49:00 AM
Wonderful poem and win dear Olive ... big congrats!
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Date: 12/4/2015 11:50:00 PM
Olive, Congrats on your "Epic Sighting" Love SKAT
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Date: 12/4/2015 11:08:00 PM
Olive, thank you for supporting my contest "Epic Sighting." Stop by my latest blog --Abandon-- if you'd like. Have a nice day. Love ~LINDA~
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Date: 11/23/2015 7:21:00 AM
Fabulous imagery, and the way in which you knit in your romantic intent is magical. Great write.
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Date: 11/21/2015 6:44:00 PM
Powerful imagery, uplifting message and evocative word choices make this a very engaging read. Write on, Olive. hugs!
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Date: 11/21/2015 3:38:00 PM
- A very well written and wonderful poem, Olive - I wish you a great and peaceful weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/25/2015 5:39:00 AM
Thank you so much Anne Lise.. =`) I am glad you find it wonderful!~Olive Eloisa =`)
Date: 11/20/2015 4:06:00 PM
Love being amidst of your poetry Olive and the ideas we share. Soon we'll be writing inches apart instead of miles. So love this piece little one, and to my fav's it goes xx // hugs // James xxxx
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Date: 11/28/2015 8:23:00 PM
Thank you so much JAmes.. =`) weeeee I love sharing my poetry with you.. =`)
Date: 11/20/2015 9:16:00 AM
your creative side is on fire, eloi... daunting and dreamy.. galeng!..huggs
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Date: 11/27/2015 1:54:00 AM
Thank you so much NEtte.. =`)
Date: 11/19/2015 9:30:00 PM
Looks like a storm is brewing . . . the one outside looks threatening but the one inside is wild with passionate glee!! Nicely done.
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Date: 11/25/2015 6:33:00 AM
Thanks much David, like I said down I do not like to end my poems as much as possible in sad tone... =`)thanks much!
Date: 11/19/2015 4:14:00 PM
Majestical and magical wonderful poem!
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Date: 11/24/2015 8:17:00 PM
thanks much Etienne.. =`)
Date: 11/19/2015 4:14:00 PM
Wow! This is great. I love the breathe of nature. Excellent..........A.M.
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Date: 11/22/2015 9:28:00 PM
Thanks much Afolabi.. =`) I am glad you like it.. =`)
Date: 11/19/2015 4:02:00 PM
wow, you ended it on a very romantic note!! Great imagery as always, Nette. I liked your bushes piteous and waving their arms. I love personification!
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Date: 11/22/2015 9:24:00 PM
Andie thanks much.. =`) I welcome this encouraging remark.. =`)
Date: 11/19/2015 9:17:00 AM
*love* :)- lu xx
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Date: 11/21/2015 5:11:00 AM
thank you for your lovely comment.. =` )
Date: 11/19/2015 8:01:00 AM
A change in mood in the last stanza set your work to a different note..Enjoyed reading your very descriptive work..Thanks for the visit to my page..I appreciate the time spent there..Sara
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Date: 11/20/2015 2:07:00 AM
Sara, I really like sad endings and tragic ones, I rarely write in that theme, and this the one I want to end it quite calm contradicting the raging storm out.. ~Olive Eloisa =`)
Date: 11/19/2015 4:59:00 AM
A lovely poem, Olive Eloisa. I love the way the verses flow from forces of nature to gentleness of mood. T.J
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Date: 11/19/2015 9:36:00 AM
TJ as much as i want to portray the harshness of sorms, I also want to include the beauty in it that is esp when you are with your love one.. storms bring people closer... or otherwise the one we didnt like.. ~Olive Eloisa. =`)