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Amidst Pounds of Force and Fury

AMIDST POUNDS OF FORCE and FURY

Conscious cold clouds sweeping, killing softly the suns bright,
romancing evocatively with the winds, aghast it blows! Blows!
Gray to black are the skies shadows. Shafts of light longer,
they tantalize in between blows joined clear by a decibel bang!

Frightened golden grains for harvest, helpless! They bend down
and so are the  piteous bushes, unashamed, waving their arms
as if crying out for immediate rescue but no one is there...
Drops to dagger liquid sequins fall heavily unto them nonstop.

Amidst pounds of force and fury from the natural forces,
I, glad to be cocooned by the rhythmic rise and fall of his chest.
Wrapped tight to his arms, my heart is soaking with contentment,
his drizzling caresses flood my nerves, I am all giddy inside...
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***Picture #2
6:00 pm, November 19, 2015

Copyright © Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser | Year Posted 2015

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Ralph Sergi Date: 12/6/2015 3:56:00 PM Hi Olive: Congratulations on a beautifully worded poem. It certainly evoked the storm' strength. Login to Reply

James Inman Date: 12/5/2015 10:33:00 AM Beautiful write Olive, love the line "Drops to dagger liquid sequins..." Login to Reply

Dr. Upma A. Sharma Date: 12/5/2015 12:49:00 AM Wonderful poem and win dear Olive ... big congrats! Login to Reply

Skat A Date: 12/4/2015 11:50:00 PM Olive, Congrats on your "Epic Sighting" Love SKAT Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 12/4/2015 11:08:00 PM Olive, thank you for supporting my contest "Epic Sighting." Stop by my latest blog --Abandon-- if you'd like. Have a nice day. Love ~LINDA~ Login to Reply

Scott Thirtyseven Date: 11/23/2015 7:21:00 AM Fabulous imagery, and the way in which you knit in your romantic intent is magical. Great write. Login to Reply

Kp Nunez Date: 11/21/2015 6:44:00 PM Powerful imagery, uplifting message and evocative word choices make this a very engaging read. Write on, Olive. hugs! Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 11/21/2015 3:38:00 PM - A very well written and wonderful poem, Olive - I wish you a great and peaceful weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 12/25/2015 5:39:00 AM Thank you so much Anne Lise.. =`) I am glad you find it wonderful!~Olive Eloisa =`)

James Fraser Date: 11/20/2015 4:06:00 PM Love being amidst of your poetry Olive and the ideas we share. Soon we'll be writing inches apart instead of miles. So love this piece little one, and to my fav's it goes xx // hugs // James xxxx Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 11/28/2015 8:23:00 PM Thank you so much JAmes.. =`) weeeee I love sharing my poetry with you.. =`)

Nette Onclaud Date: 11/20/2015 9:16:00 AM your creative side is on fire, eloi... daunting and dreamy.. galeng!..huggs Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 11/27/2015 1:54:00 AM Thank you so much NEtte.. =`)

David Meade Date: 11/19/2015 9:30:00 PM Looks like a storm is brewing . . . the one outside looks threatening but the one inside is wild with passionate glee!! Nicely done. Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 11/25/2015 6:33:00 AM Thanks much David, like I said down I do not like to end my poems as much as possible in sad tone... =`)thanks much!

Etienne Lariviere Date: 11/19/2015 4:14:00 PM Majestical and magical wonderful poem! Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 11/24/2015 8:17:00 PM thanks much Etienne.. =`)

Afolabi Muideen Date: 11/19/2015 4:14:00 PM Wow! This is great. I love the breathe of nature. Excellent..........A.M. Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 11/22/2015 9:28:00 PM Thanks much Afolabi.. =`) I am glad you like it.. =`)

Andrea Dietrich Date: 11/19/2015 4:02:00 PM wow, you ended it on a very romantic note!! Great imagery as always, Nette. I liked your bushes piteous and waving their arms. I love personification! Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 11/22/2015 9:24:00 PM Andie thanks much.. =`) I welcome this encouraging remark.. =`)

Beautiful Scars Date: 11/19/2015 9:17:00 AM *love* :)- lu xx Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 11/21/2015 5:11:00 AM thank you for your lovely comment.. =` )

Sara Kendrick Date: 11/19/2015 8:01:00 AM A change in mood in the last stanza set your work to a different note..Enjoyed reading your very descriptive work..Thanks for the visit to my page..I appreciate the time spent there..Sara Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 11/20/2015 2:07:00 AM Sara, I really like sad endings and tragic ones, I rarely write in that theme, and this the one I want to end it quite calm contradicting the raging storm out.. ~Olive Eloisa =`)