Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Poet Personification

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Amidst Pounds of Force and Fury

AMIDST POUNDS OF FORCE and FURY

Conscious cold clouds sweeping, killing softly the suns bright,
romancing evocatively with the winds, aghast it blows! Blows!
Gray to black are the skies shadows. Shafts of light longer,
they tantalize in between blows joined clear by a decibel bang!

Frightened golden grains for harvest, helpless! They bend down
and so are the  piteous bushes, unashamed, waving their arms
as if crying out for immediate rescue but no one is there...
Drops to dagger liquid sequins fall heavily unto them nonstop.

Amidst pounds of force and fury from the natural forces,
I, glad to be cocooned by the rhythmic rise and fall of his chest.
Wrapped tight to his arms, my heart is soaking with contentment,
his drizzling caresses flood my nerves, I am all giddy inside...
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6:00 pm, November 19, 2015

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Ralph Sergi December 6, 2015 at 3:56 PM Hi Olive: Congratulations on a beautifully worded poem. It certainly evoked the storm' strength.

James Inman December 5, 2015 at 10:33 AM Beautiful write Olive, love the line "Drops to dagger liquid sequins..."

Dr. Upma A. Sharma December 5, 2015 at 12:49 AM Wonderful poem and win dear Olive ... big congrats!

Skat A December 4, 2015 at 11:50 PM Olive, Congrats on your "Epic Sighting" Love SKAT

Poet Destroyer A December 4, 2015 at 11:08 PM Olive, thank you for supporting my contest "Epic Sighting." Stop by my latest blog --Abandon-- if you'd like. Have a nice day. Love ~LINDA~

Scott Thirtyseven November 23, 2015 at 7:21 AM Fabulous imagery, and the way in which you knit in your romantic intent is magical. Great write.

Kp Nunez November 21, 2015 at 6:44 PM Powerful imagery, uplifting message and evocative word choices make this a very engaging read. Write on, Olive. hugs!

Anne-Lise Andresen November 21, 2015 at 3:38 PM - A very well written and wonderful poem, Olive - I wish you a great and peaceful weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser December 25, 2015 at 5:39 AM Thank you so much Anne Lise.. =`) I am glad you find it wonderful!~Olive Eloisa =`)

James Fraser November 20, 2015 at 4:06 PM Love being amidst of your poetry Olive and the ideas we share. Soon we'll be writing inches apart instead of miles. So love this piece little one, and to my fav's it goes xx // hugs // James xxxx Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser November 28, 2015 at 8:23 PM Thank you so much JAmes.. =`) weeeee I love sharing my poetry with you.. =`)

Nette Onclaud November 20, 2015 at 9:16 AM your creative side is on fire, eloi... daunting and dreamy.. galeng!..huggs Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser November 27, 2015 at 1:54 AM Thank you so much NEtte.. =`)

David Meade November 19, 2015 at 9:30 PM Looks like a storm is brewing . . . the one outside looks threatening but the one inside is wild with passionate glee!! Nicely done. Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser November 25, 2015 at 6:33 AM Thanks much David, like I said down I do not like to end my poems as much as possible in sad tone... =`)thanks much!

Afolabi Muideen November 19, 2015 at 4:14 PM Wow! This is great. I love the breathe of nature. Excellent..........A.M. Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser November 22, 2015 at 9:28 PM Thanks much Afolabi.. =`) I am glad you like it.. =`)

Etienne Lariviere November 19, 2015 at 4:14 PM Majestical and magical wonderful poem! Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser November 24, 2015 at 8:17 PM thanks much Etienne.. =`)

Andrea Dietrich November 19, 2015 at 4:02 PM wow, you ended it on a very romantic note!! Great imagery as always, Nette. I liked your bushes piteous and waving their arms. I love personification! Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser November 22, 2015 at 9:24 PM Andie thanks much.. =`) I welcome this encouraging remark.. =`)

Beautiful Scars November 19, 2015 at 9:17 AM *love* :)- lu xx Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser November 21, 2015 at 5:11 AM thank you for your lovely comment.. =` )

Sara Kendrick November 19, 2015 at 8:01 AM A change in mood in the last stanza set your work to a different note..Enjoyed reading your very descriptive work..Thanks for the visit to my page..I appreciate the time spent there..Sara Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser November 20, 2015 at 2:07 AM Sara, I really like sad endings and tragic ones, I rarely write in that theme, and this the one I want to end it quite calm contradicting the raging storm out.. ~Olive Eloisa =`)