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Amid the Jagged Shadows

"Amid the jagged shadows of mossy leafless boughs"- Samuel Taylor Coleridge ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Encompassed by autumn's gloam Naked limbs reach for the sky But it's just the season in which they call home As they endure till spring is nigh In the tangled obscurity of distant thought We may find our season of gloom Lost within memories the winds have brought From melancholy to the joy of a spring bloom These sentiments are not rooted in the mind But float freely as through them we browse And answers we seek we may yet find, "Amid the jagged shadows of mossy leafless boughs" 11-26-19 Writing Challenge 3, November - Any Form Sponsor: Dear Heart - Wiishkobi Ode “The soul becomes dyed with the colour of its thoughts.” -- Marcus Aurelius --

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Date: 5/21/2020 6:48:00 AM
Your poetry is always impeccably good. I can see why you deserve a congratulations on this one. Keep up the great writes dear Joseph, xo
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Date: 12/9/2019 1:42:00 PM
Congratulations Joseph - you write so well, so subject related and always well crafted. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 12/8/2019 2:55:00 PM
That is a great first stanza...you did a great poem for this theme..
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Date: 12/5/2019 6:29:00 PM
Joseph congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this beautiful poem!
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Date: 12/4/2019 3:00:00 PM
this is so lovely. Congrats on the win.
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Date: 12/4/2019 12:41:00 PM
- Congratulations so much on your winning poem, Joseph :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/4/2019 4:56:00 AM
Your entry is a Fave for me Joseph. Congratulations your wonderful win! xxoo
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Date: 12/3/2019 8:34:00 PM
Congrats on your winning poem Joseph
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Date: 12/3/2019 12:03:00 PM
Aha see I knew it was s winner Joseph congratulations on your top win!;)
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Date: 12/2/2019 6:12:00 PM
wow, I think you did an amazing job with your entry, Joseph. Love this.
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Date: 12/1/2019 9:00:00 AM
This has a surreal feeling "loat freely as through them we browse And answers we seek we may yet find," - a cosmic original Joseph.
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Date: 11/28/2019 7:52:00 AM
My thanks to all who comment on this poem, and a special thanks to those who made it a fave.Your comments are much appreciated.
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Date: 11/27/2019 10:28:00 PM
"Naked limbs reach for the sky" Exactly, and that is what they are supposed to do- this time of year. You have Created a Masterpiece. Another favorite for me. :) Brandy
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Date: 11/26/2019 9:25:00 PM
Oh wow Joseph this was simply beautiful! I see I need to visit more often! Love this!;)
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Date: 11/26/2019 9:21:00 AM
Very nicely composed Joseph, best wishes for the contest, I think this will place high!
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Date: 11/26/2019 8:00:00 AM
Gorgeous piece Joseph! A winner for me, my best to you, xomo
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Date: 11/26/2019 7:33:00 AM
- Great written, Joseph - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/26/2019 6:30:00 AM
Enjoyed the flow of your poem, Joseph--excellent write worthy of a top win.
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