Amid the Jagged Shadows

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"Amid the jagged shadows of mossy leafless boughs; "
                                                       -  Samuel Taylor Coleridge

Where demon seed, long cast o’er hallowed ground
pierces the death hardened soil,
thorn and bramble gather over darkened culverts
as a magpie peers from a barren branch,
seeking chain and splint, shards of the  past and refuse
cast along greasy curbs, urine stained and flocked

Street lamps flicker, spitting kerosene among
dampened dreams of misty prophecies,
dripping senseless feelings ‘pon
fractured sidewalks while muted footprints wander,
muddied tracks woven in the darkness
of another’s hope, disappearing beyond the rusted gate

And I, fearless in the cold, frigid winds
gusting towards a tomorrow’d passion,
a bough of moss creaking along desolate twigs,
tortured thoughts and worried chapters,
leafless in this winter of no vacancy
and spoiled apples call…

for I am the Night Keeper, the harbinger of moons,
restless on this eve of starless wishes,
broker of destitute destinations, waiting in
these jagged shadows of your own making
midst crying vestiges of failures found,
to lead you into the depths… 

                                 …of your deserved delusions


11/22/19

Writing Challenge 3, November - Any Form

Sponsor, Dear Heart - Wisshkobi Ode
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Hamilton Avatar
December 6, 2019 at 9:37 AM
Hey Chris nice to see this one in top ten new poems, where it should be!
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December 6, 2019 at 9:42 AM
Thank John. I hadn't noticed but I am glad you did. I really appreciate you my friend, your comments are always so encouraging to me. Thank you again and again.
La France Avatar
December 5, 2019 at 6:32 PM
Chris congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this wonderful poem!
Green Avatar
December 6, 2019 at 7:37 AM
Thank you so much. I am thrilled you liked this one so much.
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December 4, 2019 at 12:39 PM
- Congratulations so much on your winning poem, Chris :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Green Avatar
December 4, 2019 at 12:53 PM
Thank you so very much my friend.
Marcum Wong Avatar
December 4, 2019 at 4:11 AM
Visions of a soul drowning in the depths of sorrow.....wow this is great Chris. It is written with the darkness of Mr. Poe. Congratulations on your win which is a top winner for me! : ) xxoo
Green Avatar
December 4, 2019 at 8:16 AM
Thank you Connie for always being so nice to me. I am happy you enjoyed this one.
Na Avatar
December 3, 2019 at 8:33 PM
Congrats on your winning poem Chris
Green Avatar
December 4, 2019 at 8:15 AM
Thanks so very much Greg.
Adams Avatar
December 3, 2019 at 6:50 PM
to me all your writes are winners, congratulations on your win Chris... hugs
Green Avatar
December 4, 2019 at 8:15 AM
Thank you so much my friend. Your kind words are always so encouraging and uplifting and bring a smile to my face.
Hamilton Avatar
December 3, 2019 at 5:53 PM
Harbinger of moons...destitute destinations...just Wow!
Green Avatar
December 4, 2019 at 8:14 AM
:)
Hamilton Avatar
December 3, 2019 at 5:52 PM
I missed this one whew...glad I found it! Chris...Chris...Chris do you know what you've wrote? This is a masterpiece, I'm stunned it wasn't higher but to each his own. This is a classic write...I mean it reads like thoughts and expressions of bygone eras...gave me chills really. Another Chris Green fave! I think I have to make a book of faves for you and for G Barden two of the soups finest!
Green Avatar
December 4, 2019 at 8:14 AM
Thanks so much John. Hey, 24th place isn't too bad. : ) I am thrilled you enjoyed this one so much
Chiri Avatar
December 3, 2019 at 12:05 PM
Chris congratulations on your win! simply amazing words your write! ;)
Green Avatar
December 3, 2019 at 12:49 PM
Thanks Brenda
Roper Avatar
November 27, 2019 at 12:25 AM
Wow, amazing , Chris, this is a fabulous write a top win, Dear Heart will love it. I still don't know what to write.
Green Avatar
November 27, 2019 at 6:55 AM
Thank you so much my friend. I am sure you will come up with something fantastic.
Leiser Avatar
November 25, 2019 at 1:29 PM
Outstanding poem, Chris! What depth, what passion in your wildly descriptive imagery...a winner and a fave from me!!
Green Avatar
November 25, 2019 at 1:51 PM
Thanks so much Laura. I am thrilled you liked this one.
Wolf Avatar
November 23, 2019 at 7:40 PM
Exceeds all expectations, even STC's! Bravo, Poet. A FAVE for sure. Very, very, impressive. Cheers, Gershon
Green Avatar
November 25, 2019 at 8:01 AM
Thanks my friend. I am glad you liked this one.
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November 23, 2019 at 7:13 AM
I think there are many winners in this contest already; yours is going to be one I would wager. You have such a mastery of words.
Green Avatar
November 25, 2019 at 8:00 AM
Thank you so very much Caren for your always kind words about my poetry
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November 22, 2019 at 11:06 PM
A wonderful write. I enjoyed reading and wish you all the best in the contest. Love and prayers, Gina
Green Avatar
November 25, 2019 at 8:00 AM
Thanks so very much Gina. I am glad you liked this one.
Na Avatar
November 22, 2019 at 7:09 PM
Hi Chris well done my friend. You brushed the paiting well and flowered the portrait onto the canvas. When you spelled Passionn 3rd paragraph 2nd line is it meant for ( Passion ) ? I do it all the time mispell my words when I`m in a hurry. Other than that you did well. Thanks for sharing
Green Avatar
November 25, 2019 at 7:55 AM
Just a misspelling that got past me but I wish it had so kind of special meaning, no such luck. Thanks so much my friend.
Adams Avatar
November 22, 2019 at 6:51 PM
excellent penning Chris...good luck in the contest, though i doubt you need luck...
Green Avatar
November 25, 2019 at 7:54 AM
Thank you so very much my sweet friend for all of the kindness you always show to me.
Sands Avatar
November 22, 2019 at 4:11 PM
Wow, excellent poem Chris. When I first started reading, the song Sound of Silence came into my mind. This poem pulls the reader right into it :)
Green Avatar
November 22, 2019 at 4:41 PM
Thank you Heidi. I really got into this one, I could have gone on forever. I appreciate you my friend.
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November 22, 2019 at 3:52 PM
and spoiled apples... that is my favorite line. Excellent write. Ann
Green Avatar
November 22, 2019 at 4:41 PM
Thanks so much Ann. I am glad you liked this
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