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Amid Falling Leaves

Sitting next to me, you turn pages of our album Unfolding sweet memories, treasured longingly, Revealing verses of love in ballad of setting sun Glittering autumn’s twilight on golden foothills As blazing meadows inflame yearnings of visions Beckoning us to horizon’s gamboge ebullience. You remind me how we snuggled in its essence When evening enchanted moonlit mountains Stealing zealous glance of seductive passions As tenor of desires rustled in crimson vistas And smitten eyes gleamed in ruby winds of fall Beneath millions of stars glinting heavens above. Slowly you uncover amour of lingering dreams Recalling fondly when we planted our seedlings Watching them grow into vibrant blossoming trees As spring of our lives bloomed scented flowers And burgeoning seasons tallied passage of time Reminiscing nostalgically in allure of bygone era. Faded are the photos we peruse through now, Amid falling leaves drifting on wings of eventide; Each floating leaf evokes moment from the past Inscribing its imprints upon autumnal canvas As resplendent panorama revels our happy hearts Swaying rhythms of night in your romantic aura. August 1, 2020 Placed 1st: Pick-A-Title, Vol 20 – Free Verse 3 – Poetry Contest Title chosen: Amid Falling Leaves Sponsor: Edward Ibeh

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Date: 1/7/2022 5:08:00 AM
This poem I love so much ! Definitely it goes into my Fav. I don't know how to do it. Slowly I am learning new techniques , how to upload a photo and change the font. Also new forms of poetry. "Slowly you uncover amour of lingering dreams Recalling fondly when we planted our seedlings Watching them grow into vibrant blossoming trees'" Can so well relate .
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Date: 10/12/2020 5:27:00 PM
A beautiful poem of autumn and love intertwined, Vijay! ~Angie
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Date: 8/16/2020 1:33:00 PM
very beautifully painted pictures in words vijay wishing you a blessed week
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/20/2020 5:08:00 AM
Thank you Liam.
Date: 8/5/2020 6:52:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning lines, Vijay. They're truly resplendent.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/20/2020 5:07:00 AM
Thank you Jenna.
Date: 8/5/2020 3:25:00 AM
You are a poetic star Vijay sir, Your poems are always remarkable on any form you choose.:-) It's nice to see couple's looking at the album and cherishing their lovely memories...!! Congratulations on your top win.:-)Keep inspiring and glowing.Take care.Warm regards:-)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/20/2020 5:07:00 AM
Thank you Deepa.
Date: 8/4/2020 3:19:00 PM
Back with my congratulations on your well deserved win, Vijay
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/20/2020 5:06:00 AM
Thank you Andrea.
Date: 8/4/2020 2:45:00 PM
The scenario you have brilliantly illustrated. I imagine a lot of time and soul were involved in creating the touching combined life stories.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/20/2020 5:06:00 AM
Thank you Sigrid.
Date: 8/4/2020 12:21:00 PM
Your muse is soaring in beautiful galaxies my friend. This is one exemplary and soothing one that takes me to another world with the painting you've created with your words. Congratulations on your win Vijay :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/20/2020 5:06:00 AM
Thank you Aditi.
Date: 8/4/2020 12:13:00 PM
Heartiest congratulations on winning 1st place in my contest with this excellent poem, Vijay:-)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/20/2020 5:06:00 AM
Thank you Edward.
Date: 8/4/2020 11:58:00 AM
Congratulations for your top win Vijay! :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/20/2020 5:05:00 AM
Thank you Heidi.
Date: 8/4/2020 4:54:00 AM
Very beautiful, Vijay, congratulations on your win:)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/20/2020 5:05:00 AM
Much appreciate Jo--many thanks.
Date: 8/2/2020 2:28:00 PM
Lyrical, romantic and soothing. An excellent entry, Vijay.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/2/2020 3:48:00 PM
Thank you Andrea--much appreciate.
Date: 8/2/2020 5:52:00 AM
So beautiful and comforting. Very well written Vijay :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/2/2020 12:16:00 PM
Much appreciate Heidi your visit and comments. Haven't seen much of you lately. Hope all is well. Many thanks my friend.
Date: 8/2/2020 3:11:00 AM
A song of a loving heart that delights the soul dearest friend, Vijay! Masterfully written. Good luck my friend. Have a glorious Sunday
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/2/2020 4:39:00 AM
So very kind of you my friend--much appreciate your valued feedback--many thanks, Demetrios.
Date: 8/1/2020 6:52:00 PM
Your words always wrap around me like a tender melody. I never wish for these moments to end. This is beautiful and tender, all at the same time. I am in complete awe. ~ Brandy
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/2/2020 4:38:00 AM
Much appreciate the kind remarks Brandy--many thanks my friend.
Date: 8/1/2020 10:23:00 AM
Good work. Kudos to you too.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/2/2020 4:37:00 AM
Thank you for your visit--many thanks, Kirsten.
Date: 8/1/2020 10:05:00 AM
So lovely and descriptive--nostalgia at its very best, Vijay. Janice
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/2/2020 4:36:00 AM
Much appreciate Janice--many many thanks.
Date: 8/1/2020 8:58:00 AM
Love is wriiten on each fallen leaf...and you described it well...
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/2/2020 4:36:00 AM
Thank you Arturo--much appreciate.
Date: 8/1/2020 7:54:00 AM
Such a lovely work of words, dear friend. I love this. My favorite season is Autumn and I enjoyed this immensely. Bless you
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/2/2020 4:35:00 AM
So very kind of you Gina--much appreciate--many thanks.
Date: 8/1/2020 7:28:00 AM
I can relate to the motions of this poem, sitting with a loved one and going through the memories.... A beautiful reflective poem..
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/2/2020 4:35:00 AM
Thank you my friend--appreciate your visit and comments, Silent one.
Date: 8/1/2020 7:06:00 AM
Those old photos certainly bring those both happy and sad memories to the surface. Good luck in the contest and enjoy your weekend. Tom
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/2/2020 4:34:00 AM
Sometimes we live in those memories. Much appreciate your visit and comments, Tom--many thanks.

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