Amid Falling Leaves

Sitting next to me, you turn pages of our album
Unfolding sweet memories, treasured longingly,
Revealing verses of love in ballad of setting sun
Glittering autumn’s twilight on golden foothills
As blazing meadows inflame yearnings of visions
Beckoning us to horizon’s gamboge ebullience.

You remind me how we snuggled in its essence
When evening enchanted moonlit mountains
Stealing zealous glance of seductive passions
As tenor of desires rustled in crimson vistas
And smitten eyes gleamed in ruby winds of fall
Beneath millions of stars glinting heavens above.

Slowly you uncover amour of lingering dreams
Recalling fondly when we planted our seedlings
Watching them grow into vibrant blossoming trees
As spring of our lives bloomed scented flowers
And burgeoning seasons tallied passage of time
Reminiscing nostalgically in allure of bygone era.

Faded are the photos we peruse through now,
Amid falling leaves drifting on wings of eventide;
Each floating leaf evokes moment from the past	
Inscribing its imprints upon autumnal canvas
As resplendent panorama revels our happy hearts
Swaying rhythms of night in your romantic aura.

August 1, 2020
Placed 1st: Pick-A-Title, Vol 20 – Free Verse 3 – Poetry Contest
Title chosen: Amid Falling Leaves
Sponsor: Edward Ibeh
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George Avatar
January 7, 2022 at 5:08 AM
This poem I love so much ! Definitely it goes into my Fav. I don't know how to do it. Slowly I am learning new techniques , how to upload a photo and change the font. Also new forms of poetry. "Slowly you uncover amour of lingering dreams Recalling fondly when we planted our seedlings Watching them grow into vibrant blossoming trees'" Can so well relate .
Crabtree Avatar
October 12, 2020 at 5:27 PM
A beautiful poem of autumn and love intertwined, Vijay! ~Angie
Mcdaid Avatar
August 16, 2020 at 1:33 PM
very beautifully painted pictures in words vijay wishing you a blessed week
Pandit Avatar
August 20, 2020 at 5:08 AM
Thank you Liam.
Logan Avatar
August 5, 2020 at 6:52 AM
Congratulations on your winning lines, Vijay. They're truly resplendent.
Pandit Avatar
August 20, 2020 at 5:07 AM
Thank you Jenna.
Deepa Avatar
August 5, 2020 at 3:25 AM
You are a poetic star Vijay sir, Your poems are always remarkable on any form you choose.:-) It's nice to see couple's looking at the album and cherishing their lovely memories...!! Congratulations on your top win.:-)Keep inspiring and glowing.Take care.Warm regards:-)
Pandit Avatar
August 20, 2020 at 5:07 AM
Thank you Deepa.
Dietrich Avatar
August 4, 2020 at 3:19 PM
Back with my congratulations on your well deserved win, Vijay
Pandit Avatar
August 20, 2020 at 5:06 AM
Thank you Andrea.
Ermine Avatar
August 4, 2020 at 2:45 PM
The scenario you have brilliantly illustrated. I imagine a lot of time and soul were involved in creating the touching combined life stories.
Pandit Avatar
August 20, 2020 at 5:06 AM
Thank you Sigrid.
Mishra Avatar
August 4, 2020 at 12:21 PM
Your muse is soaring in beautiful galaxies my friend. This is one exemplary and soothing one that takes me to another world with the painting you've created with your words. Congratulations on your win Vijay :)
Pandit Avatar
August 20, 2020 at 5:06 AM
Thank you Aditi.
Ibeh Avatar
August 4, 2020 at 12:13 PM
Heartiest congratulations on winning 1st place in my contest with this excellent poem, Vijay:-)
Pandit Avatar
August 20, 2020 at 5:06 AM
Thank you Edward.
Sands Avatar
August 4, 2020 at 11:58 AM
Congratulations for your top win Vijay! :)
Pandit Avatar
August 20, 2020 at 5:05 AM
Thank you Heidi.
Daniel Avatar
August 4, 2020 at 4:54 AM
Very beautiful, Vijay, congratulations on your win:)
Pandit Avatar
August 20, 2020 at 5:05 AM
Much appreciate Jo--many thanks.
Dietrich Avatar
August 2, 2020 at 2:28 PM
Lyrical, romantic and soothing. An excellent entry, Vijay.
Pandit Avatar
August 2, 2020 at 3:48 PM
Thank you Andrea--much appreciate.
Sands Avatar
August 2, 2020 at 5:52 AM
So beautiful and comforting. Very well written Vijay :)
Pandit Avatar
August 2, 2020 at 12:16 PM
Much appreciate Heidi your visit and comments. Haven't seen much of you lately. Hope all is well. Many thanks my friend.
Trifiatis Avatar
August 2, 2020 at 3:11 AM
A song of a loving heart that delights the soul dearest friend, Vijay! Masterfully written. Good luck my friend. Have a glorious Sunday
Pandit Avatar
August 2, 2020 at 4:39 AM
So very kind of you my friend--much appreciate your valued feedback--many thanks, Demetrios.
Nicole Avatar
August 1, 2020 at 6:52 PM
Your words always wrap around me like a tender melody. I never wish for these moments to end. This is beautiful and tender, all at the same time. I am in complete awe. ~ Brandy
Pandit Avatar
August 2, 2020 at 4:38 AM
Much appreciate the kind remarks Brandy--many thanks my friend.
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August 1, 2020 at 10:23 AM
Good work. Kudos to you too.
Pandit Avatar
August 2, 2020 at 4:37 AM
Thank you for your visit--many thanks, Kirsten.
Canerdy Avatar
August 1, 2020 at 10:05 AM
So lovely and descriptive--nostalgia at its very best, Vijay. Janice
Pandit Avatar
August 2, 2020 at 4:36 AM
Much appreciate Janice--many many thanks.
Michael Avatar
August 1, 2020 at 8:58 AM
Love is wriiten on each fallen leaf...and you described it well...
Pandit Avatar
August 2, 2020 at 4:36 AM
Thank you Arturo--much appreciate.
Mcintosh Avatar
August 1, 2020 at 7:54 AM
Such a lovely work of words, dear friend. I love this. My favorite season is Autumn and I enjoyed this immensely. Bless you
Pandit Avatar
August 2, 2020 at 4:35 AM
So very kind of you Gina--much appreciate--many thanks.
One Avatar
August 1, 2020 at 7:28 AM
I can relate to the motions of this poem, sitting with a loved one and going through the memories.... A beautiful reflective poem..
Pandit Avatar
August 2, 2020 at 4:35 AM
Thank you my friend--appreciate your visit and comments, Silent one.
Cunningham Avatar
August 1, 2020 at 7:06 AM
Those old photos certainly bring those both happy and sad memories to the surface. Good luck in the contest and enjoy your weekend. Tom
Pandit Avatar
August 2, 2020 at 4:34 AM
Sometimes we live in those memories. Much appreciate your visit and comments, Tom--many thanks.
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