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Premiere Contest: 2022 Poetry Marathon - Mile 13
Sponsor: Mark Toney

Amid Falling Leaves

Amid falling leaves, my thoughts wander far,
as, gracefully, they cascade through the air.
From long winter sleep, they awoke with spring;
unfolded their fullness at the summer peak.

Yes, what a journey their venture provides-
in very few months, each life is fulfilled.
For them, time is fathomed by seasons of days-
unlike my much longer, well-measured years.

Oh, falling leaves, like my autumn of life-
you slowly drift down on faded green lawns.
Red-orange-gold colors boast your last hurrah,
as they calmly, peacefully, twirl to the ground.

A calm ride from branches to blanket the earth;
yet, you weathered storms on long, windy nights.
You shielded the nests upon fine, sturdy limbs
and honored your seasons as best as you could.

My feelings unfold as each lone leaf descends-
reminiscing my own, long, well-seasoned years;
from green, tender bud to full burnished art-
my thoughts wander far, amid falling leaves.

Yet, hang on the hope of the next new Spring;
with awakened birth, new life will begin.
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Ashley Avatar
September 14, 2022 at 6:55 PM
Dear Sandra, I enjoyed this metaphorical gem. As the year ages in seasons, so do we from "from green, tender bud to full burnished art" - simply splendid! Congratulations for your excellent win in Mark's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Haight Avatar
September 18, 2022 at 9:02 PM
Thank you, Susan, for your visit, supportive comments, and congratulations. I appreciate them so much. Hugs, Sandra
La France Avatar
September 12, 2022 at 10:07 AM
Sandra, beautifully penned and congratulations on your win in the contest , blessings~
Horsman Avatar
September 12, 2022 at 1:54 AM
Love the relativity to ones own life, the poetry is wonderful, Sandra, congratulation on your win.
Toney Avatar
September 11, 2022 at 8:47 PM
Sandra, you write about my favorite time of year as a metaphor for our "long, well-seasoned years; from green, tender bud to full burnished art ..." Now that I'm able to see it, I also like the GIF you chose to illustrate the poem. Congratulations on your win on Mile 13 of my 2022 Poetry Marathon Contest. Keep your running shoes on, because Mile 14 has already started!
Haight Avatar
September 18, 2022 at 8:57 PM
Mark, thank you for the lovely, supportive comments on this poem and for my placement. I am so pleased that you enjoyed my metaphor. Sandra
Ibeh Avatar
September 8, 2020 at 3:03 PM
Back with congratulations on your top win Sandra!:-)
Logan Avatar
August 5, 2020 at 7:03 AM
Tranquility transcends each line of your winning lines, Congrats, Sandra.
Ibeh Avatar
August 4, 2020 at 12:32 PM
Congratulations on your win in my contest with this great poem, Sandra:-) Well-done!
Allison Avatar
July 28, 2020 at 8:20 AM
a delightful autumnal extravaganza, ive got the music 'the autumn leaves' going round in my head:-) hugs jan xx
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