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Amid falling leaves, my thoughts wander far, as, gracefully, they cascade through the air. From long winter sleep, they awoke with spring; unfolded their fullness at full summer's peak. Yes, what a journey their venture provides- in very few months, their life is fulfilled. For them, time is fathomed by seasons of days- unlike my much longer, well-measured years. Oh, falling leaves- like my autumn of life- you slowly drift down upon faded green lawns. Red-orange-gold colors boast your last hurrah, as they calmly, peacefully, twirl to the ground. A calm ride from branches to blanket the earth; yet, you weathered storms on long, windy nights. You shielded the nests upon fine, sturdy limbs and honored your seasons as best as you could. My feelings unfold as each lone leaf descends- reminiscing my own, long, well-seasoned years; from green, tender bud to full burnished art- my thoughts wander far, amid falling leaves. July 28, 2020 Premiere Contest: 2022 Poetry Marathon - Mile 13 Sponsor: Mark Toney

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Date: 9/14/2022 6:55:00 PM
Dear Sandra, I enjoyed this metaphorical gem. As the year ages in seasons, so do we from "from green, tender bud to full burnished art" - simply splendid! Congratulations for your excellent win in Mark's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Sandra Haight
Date: 9/18/2022 9:02:00 PM
Thank you, Susan, for your visit, supportive comments, and congratulations. I appreciate them so much. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 9/12/2022 10:07:00 AM
Sandra, beautifully penned and congratulations on your win in the contest , blessings~
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Date: 9/12/2022 1:54:00 AM
Love the relativity to ones own life, the poetry is wonderful, Sandra, congratulation on your win.
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Date: 9/11/2022 8:47:00 PM
Sandra, you write about my favorite time of year as a metaphor for our "long, well-seasoned years; from green, tender bud to full burnished art ..." Now that I'm able to see it, I also like the GIF you chose to illustrate the poem. Congratulations on your win on Mile 13 of my 2022 Poetry Marathon Contest. Keep your running shoes on, because Mile 14 has already started!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 9/18/2022 8:57:00 PM
Mark, thank you for the lovely, supportive comments on this poem and for my placement. I am so pleased that you enjoyed my metaphor. Sandra
Date: 9/8/2020 3:03:00 PM
Back with congratulations on your top win Sandra!:-)
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Date: 8/5/2020 7:03:00 AM
Tranquility transcends each line of your winning lines, Congrats, Sandra.
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Date: 8/4/2020 12:32:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in my contest with this great poem, Sandra:-) Well-done!
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Date: 7/28/2020 8:20:00 AM
a delightful autumnal extravaganza, ive got the music 'the autumn leaves' going round in my head:-) hugs jan xx
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