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American Dream

AMERICAN DREAM

George Washington – father of our nation,
remember him in this generation,
and founders, for leading the causation
which led to signing a declaration,

that our freedom would not have cessation,
our votes would keep up the conversation,
strong thoughts would not lead to degradation
and people would have fair legislation,

as they give honest examination
to the precepts, giving affirmation,
to promote prodigious augmentation,
by and for the people, long duration.

2nd place winner
8/24/2016
Contest: Monorhyme Mania
Sponsored by: John Hamilton

Copyright © Kim Rodrigues | Year Posted 2016

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Sandra Haight Date: 8/30/2016 8:21:00 PM Great tribute to the 'American Dream', Kim. Congratulations on your fine placement in the contest. Hugs, Sandra Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 8/30/2016 9:00:00 PM Thank you, Sandra!

Beautiful Scars Date: 8/30/2016 3:25:00 PM Kim, perfect for this contest! congrats on your placement lovely lady :)-luloo Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 8/30/2016 9:00:00 PM Thank you, Luloo!

Alexis Y. Date: 8/29/2016 7:11:00 PM Hi Kim, This was a well written monorhyme with good content. Congratulations on your 2nd place win. It was well deserved: -) Alexis Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 8/29/2016 7:30:00 PM Thank you, Alexis!

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 8/29/2016 6:35:00 PM Wow, this is a splendid example of a monorhyme Kim! Congratulations on your second placement. ; ) 7 Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 8/29/2016 7:30:00 PM Thank you, Connie!

Lin Lane Date: 8/29/2016 6:32:00 PM Well done rhymer, Kim. Congratulations. Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 8/29/2016 7:29:00 PM Thank you, Lin!

John Hamilton Date: 8/29/2016 2:38:00 PM Kim, although I don't get involved in politics, I can respect the quality of this poem, an exceptional write, congrats on your win! Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 8/29/2016 7:29:00 PM I don't usually write politically either. Hopefully this came off as fair. I was inspired to write because I met two people in the same day that did not know George Washington was the first USA president.