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Amergin- Paradox

I am unique : yet still humane I am different : and yet the same I am male : yet, my tears hide I am old : yet young inside I am weak : yet am made strong I am equal : yet complement I am open : yet introspect I am open-eyed : who but I Sees life contrariwise

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Jay Loveless

Date: 2/7/2009 2:42:00 PM

Good read..i like it very much...i see life through unique eyes too...and your welcome for supporting your contest...

Robin L. Gass

Date: 2/5/2009 5:07:00 AM

The title is perfect. I would say being a paradox is a beautiful thing because not being one would be flat, one dimensional and in turn, boring. Great thought provoking write, Brian! Love, Robin

Michael Jordan

Date: 2/4/2009 10:10:00 AM

Brian I reckon you are all those things yet so much more - You are an inspiration my friend - God Bless, MJ

Sharon Winter

Date: 2/4/2009 8:49:00 AM

So unique with perfect title. Beauty in the truth and balancing qualities of you. Love, Shar

Christopher Higgins

Date: 2/4/2009 5:44:00 AM

wonderfully done Brian. This is full of life and vigor. Great job.

Michael Degenhardt

Date: 2/4/2009 4:45:00 AM

I agree with Christie, for a line like that reveals much about the poet, the man who's not afraid to be a man. Very well written my friend. Michael

Kristin Reynolds

Date: 2/4/2009 3:31:00 AM

Beautiful yin/yang, poem of balance and the perfection of such, we must have balance, beautiful, love, Kristin

Sean Kelly

Date: 2/4/2009 3:22:00 AM

Great piece and well constructed , as ever ...You,re dead-right ; Big boys don't cry !!! ... sob , sob!!! , well just a little sniffle ( conversely ) ...

Raul Moreno

Date: 2/4/2009 3:12:00 AM

Excellent work Brian, sometimes I see life contrariwise too. This one is a nice balanced poem...Raul