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AMELIORATE. not a word used in haiku ~ just crossword fodder The earth worm startled. In panic it moved in its full extension, leaving behind its earthen cloak, to reveal it’s glistening self, spotless and shimmering in the sun. It accordioned itself in two second intervals, covering a full foot across the ground in a half minute, evoking its full fight or flight. Can an earth worm be startled? It has a brain and thus has survived eons helping to amend the earth’s crust into the self-perpetuating fertile richness that feeds the planet. I will use AMEND it will sidestep the clutter ~ tongue and mind at ease It senses threat without eyes or ears. I am tormented by moles and vigilant to their presence, ready to attack. Robins tip me off, arriving at the first presence of the mole’s movement to feast on earth worms who nearly leap from the fresh soil, signaled by the moles vibrations into the soil that surrounds it. Nature’s recycler, composter , aerator, master ameliorator, food-chain participant and harmless companion to the gardener. Rest easy my friend, I mean you no harm. Entry: Moments Of Reflections - Haibun Poetry Contest. Sponsored by: Malabika Ray Choudhury Date created: 4/30/21

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Date: 5/18/2021 8:46:00 AM
Enjoyed the oft-overlooked plight of an earthworm lyrically presented, Ken! nicely done!
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Ken Rone
Date: 5/18/2021 10:54:00 AM
Thank you James. I'm glad (and surprised) it caught your eye. I appreciate the comment.
Date: 5/12/2021 2:20:00 PM
A honest and earthy write i read, oh humble Worm, you garner a worthy re-preise I see a picture poststamp small I sense the universe overall Enjoyed this piece Ken, I hope you can forgive My long delay in responding to your comment On my piece, all the best all the time'
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Ken Rone
Date: 5/18/2021 11:01:00 AM
Thank you Joe....i appreciate you stumbling across it and taking the time to reply.
Date: 5/3/2021 8:33:00 PM
There's no *Clutter* in here. In fact, you have created a "Masterpiece" with this simple, yet exceptional Haibun. My mind is certainly at ease. :) Brandy
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Date: 5/12/2021 6:54:00 PM
Thank yo so much for taking the time to write. I love you light touch, as you would get from a friend. - Ken
Date: 5/3/2021 5:56:00 AM
clever word play especially with the title:-) hugs jan xx
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Ken Rone
Date: 5/3/2021 8:05:00 AM
Thanks Jan. I'm still undecided. With your endorsement I leave it up for a while. Ken

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