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Ambrosia of First Bliss

It’s July … fragrant honeysuckles remind me Of summers young when innocent passion bloomed; Unearthing glances, confidences --- a throb my heart first held Until desire turned into precious love, we ignited The ambrosia of moist lips, the blush of intimacy: Many a time, I wonder about him… fondling our space While in eves quite , his kind laughter drifts now and then. Written for Silent One's Seven lines of romantic heaven 6/23/2018

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Date: 6/25/2018 11:58:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this sweet story told in 7 lines. Well done!
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Date: 6/25/2018 4:23:00 PM
So very romantic dear Nette.It feels so good to read you onceagain.
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Date: 6/25/2018 7:23:00 AM
Congratulations for your win Nette :)
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Date: 6/25/2018 7:04:00 AM
Loved the honeysuckles line.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Date: 6/25/2018 3:12:00 AM
I really do admire your poetry, Nette...I am going to ensure I make time to read more of it; it has that undefinable quality that I mentioned earlier. Wonderful writing! My very warmest regards as ever of course! :) john
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Date: 6/25/2018 2:32:00 AM
Excellent poem to remember past love. Sweet memories. Thanks for sharing it.
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Date: 6/24/2018 6:12:00 AM
Seven lines of bliss, you capture the theme so well, your poetry amazing, and so sincere.
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Date: 6/23/2018 11:24:00 AM
Nette, a beautiful poem remembering a love from the past. We never forget our first love. John
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Date: 6/23/2018 9:04:00 AM
Romance weaves through your soul, the distant thoughts lingering from a love expressed
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Date: 6/23/2018 7:31:00 AM
Beautiful Nette. Wonderful expression with a dreamy quality to it. Lovely. God Bless, JB PS I'm finally back. My eye surgeries are all done and so far no more headaches. Seeing much more clearly now. Thanks for your loyal support.
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Date: 6/23/2018 7:17:00 AM
Nette, your romantic lines and my fresh cup of coffee make a wonderful morning pair. They both go down so smooth. A master artist paints in ways that transcends the canvas.. in the mind the painting mixes with your emotion and history and it continues. Here you extract a contagious muse that does just that. I've finished your lines but not your poem.. that's what makes you who you are. Incredible!
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Date: 6/23/2018 6:12:00 AM
Sweet memories of romance..lovely recall..beautiful poem..best for a top win, nette.
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Date: 6/23/2018 4:59:00 AM
Beautiful, so happy for you! I think you just beat me in making the last entry, hope you win! Mick
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