Nette Onclaud Poet Romanticism

Ambrosia of First Bliss

It’s  July … fragrant  honeysuckles  remind me
Of  summers young when innocent passion bloomed;
Unearthing glances,  confidences  --- a  throb my heart first held
Until  desire turned into precious  love,   we ignited
The ambrosia of moist lips, the blush  of intimacy:

Many a time, I wonder about him… fondling our space
While in  eves quite , his kind laughter drifts    now and then. 



Written for Silent One's Seven lines of romantic heaven 
6/23/2018

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Susan Gentry June 25, 2018 at 11:58 PM Congratulations on your win with this sweet story told in 7 lines. Well done!

Charmaine Chircop June 25, 2018 at 4:23 PM So very romantic dear Nette.It feels so good to read you onceagain.

Heidi Sands June 25, 2018 at 7:23 AM Congratulations for your win Nette :)

Silent One June 25, 2018 at 7:04 AM Loved the honeysuckles line.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..

John Fleming June 25, 2018 at 3:12 AM I really do admire your poetry, Nette...I am going to ensure I make time to read more of it; it has that undefinable quality that I mentioned earlier. Wonderful writing! My very warmest regards as ever of course! :) john

Ravi Sathasivam June 25, 2018 at 2:32 AM Excellent poem to remember past love. Sweet memories. Thanks for sharing it.

Harry Horsman June 24, 2018 at 6:12 AM Seven lines of bliss, you capture the theme so well, your poetry amazing, and so sincere.

John Gondolf June 23, 2018 at 11:24 AM Nette, a beautiful poem remembering a love from the past. We never forget our first love. John

Frederic Parker June 23, 2018 at 9:04 AM Romance weaves through your soul, the distant thoughts lingering from a love expressed

Judy Ball June 23, 2018 at 7:31 AM Beautiful Nette. Wonderful expression with a dreamy quality to it. Lovely. God Bless, JB PS I'm finally back. My eye surgeries are all done and so far no more headaches. Seeing much more clearly now. Thanks for your loyal support.

Lyric Man June 23, 2018 at 7:17 AM Nette, your romantic lines and my fresh cup of coffee make a wonderful morning pair. They both go down so smooth. A master artist paints in ways that transcends the canvas.. in the mind the painting mixes with your emotion and history and it continues. Here you extract a contagious muse that does just that. I've finished your lines but not your poem.. that's what makes you who you are. Incredible!

Vijay Pandit June 23, 2018 at 6:12 AM Sweet memories of romance..lovely recall..beautiful poem..best for a top win, nette.

Mick Talbot June 23, 2018 at 4:59 AM Beautiful, so happy for you! I think you just beat me in making the last entry, hope you win! Mick