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Ambitious

I can feel you with your clutches grasping with fever Royal red and a fiery blue flames I can picture you with a heart of need Intense with desire Eagerly ready to rescind Aching with humanity I reach for your hand Written for John Rhinem

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John Rhinem

Date: 4/6/2009 5:20:00 PM

Smile~Yes, I am completely flattered as I reread this wonderful write~Smile~"Thank You Laura!!!":):)~Here, here's my hand~Smile~now don't let go!!!:):)...."Beautiful Thoughts Dear~Just Like You!!!":):)~Again, "My Love To 'You' Always, And All Whom 'You' Love, Forever, John!!!":):)~"Sweet Dreams To 'You' Always!!!"~"And, 'Thank You Again,' Sincerely!!!":):)~"Goodnight Precious Laura!!!":):) Bye ~

John Rhinem

Date: 4/6/2009 5:11:00 PM

Smile~Ohh, I am glad that I decided to stop by for one more read of "Yours" today~but only because I loved the first two of Yours which I read~and now, "I Am Extremely Flattered Beautiful Laura Mckenzie!!!":):)~That someone as wonderful as "Yourself," would even take the time of day, to honor someone such as I with even one of "Your Many Gifted Words!!!?":):)....cont....

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/2/2009 6:51:00 PM

A great tribute to John, Laura. Indeed, his work is born of great passion. And his soul is so kind as well! Has he seen this yet? He'll love it!

Brian Strand

Date: 4/1/2009 12:50:00 AM

Nice thoughful write Laura.Thanks for your kind words today.Rgds Brian

Mary Duhart

Date: 3/31/2009 8:21:00 PM

Very nicely done. Great write and thank you for the lovely review..Mary

Date: 3/31/2009 12:12:00 PM

The vivid imagery conveys your thoughts powerful way. Nice dedication. Thank you for stopping by to comment on my poem and for your prayers for the area. It's been snowing pretty heavily on and off since yesterday afternoon. The river was going down but who knows what will happen now. I appreciate your concern. Blessings to you. Karen

Carrie Richards

Date: 3/31/2009 7:06:00 AM

Yes, Laura....you have done him justice with this lovely poem. The Royal red, fiery blue flames...perfect description...he has such passion in his poetry as well as his loving comments. A wonderful dedication. ...

Robin L. Gass

Date: 3/30/2009 9:35:00 PM

This is a beautiful poem and dedication John! He is such a wonderful person and writer! He has a beautiful heart! Excellent piece, Laura! Love, Robin

Lena Townsend

Date: 3/30/2009 8:38:00 PM

So beautifully written. Your words are passionate and vivid images bounce off the page. So well written. Thank you for your kind words on my poetry. You are one of my favorites as well. Smiles from Lolita