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Ambiguity

So you think because my tongue lance The eye of devils To hide my children from their teeth I cannot feel how quickly your heart beat Against my breast with longingness For me to move my hands Slowly as the wind move the sands Against the softness of your breast. I want to slake this tongue In the mouth of your understanding And drink from your lips Of deep forgiveness If I spoke abrupt against your need For my time to give the moon the moon to rise Undressing the desire of your eyes. I am a lover Unsealing virgin gardens of blood To plant the seed Filled with the dreams of sensuous happiness.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 4/6/2009 7:45:00 AM
Wow. I am certain I begin all my comments to you with that word. You take a situation and empower it with your words. And should that not always be done when one can do it as well as you? Invade, explain, emphasize, beautify every emotion in life, every sparkle of sunlight upon the sea as well as every shadow? In awe of every poem you write. If you have a book out, you should let us all know. Thanks for your beautiful comments. Love, Shar
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Date: 4/3/2009 12:44:00 AM
Thank you for your blog comment today L'nass.Good question you pose.In Japanese haiku/& in imagist form it is often those 'as is moments' we see or hear/Rgds Brian. Many of my earlier blogs of padt two years give some insight on this dilemma.
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Date: 4/2/2009 1:14:00 PM
re comment:thanks dear friend,tnks for your support and prayers
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Date: 4/2/2009 12:24:00 PM
WOW! the 'ambiguity' is ever so subtle! just a brush here and there! love this!!!! Jim
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