Nette Onclaud Poet Sapphic stanza

Amber Prints

Lady fair meandering verdant hillside
Tracing amber prints of a night that glimmers
With the vintage lace from a rosy springtime
Breathless her senses.





Sapphic Stanza # 3 of Craig Cornish
3/22/15

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Carrie Richards May 8, 2015 at 2:45 PM For sure, this is deserving the highest of placements !! So beautiful, the personification of nature !! Congratulations on a perfect winning poem!

Nandita Das May 8, 2015 at 3:44 AM Beautiful. Congratulations on your win.

Andrea Dietrich May 7, 2015 at 4:38 PM so beautiful, lovely nette! Congrats on the win.

Edward Ebbs May 7, 2015 at 7:10 AM Good Job Nette, Congrats :)

Laura Leiser May 6, 2015 at 2:33 PM Beautifully imagery in this difficult poem format, Nette! Congrats on your win :)

Skat A May 6, 2015 at 9:45 AM Congrats Nette....SKAT LOVE

Carrie Richards May 6, 2015 at 9:44 AM Breathless are my own senses, after reading this beauty !! Congratulations to you, dear Nette !

Poet Destroyer A May 6, 2015 at 8:51 AM Nette, amazing :) Congratulations on your awesome win. Love Linda

Rob Carmack May 6, 2015 at 8:23 AM Congrats Nette!

Mark Ackerson May 5, 2015 at 9:39 PM Entrancing imagery, Nette. Congrats!

Kp Nunez March 27, 2015 at 5:38 AM Such a treat to the senses here, Nette. You have the eye for beauty and are able to convey them in words. A 7 again. Hugs!

Charmaine Chircop March 26, 2015 at 3:28 PM So so beautiful and I love the last line most !!!Charma

Bl Devnath March 24, 2015 at 11:01 AM An excellent beauty of springtime night adorned with amber color. 7+...My fav. poem too. Loved always, my lovely friend,bl

M. L. Kiser March 24, 2015 at 9:26 AM Great imagery that pops right off of the page.

Connie Marcum Wong March 24, 2015 at 1:39 AM How lovely this is Nette. You never cease to amaze! 7

Ravi Sathasivam March 23, 2015 at 5:43 AM Beautiful. Enjoyed. Tfs

Liam Mcdaid March 23, 2015 at 4:20 AM wow nette quite the picture you paint excellent pen dear friend

Emile Pinet March 22, 2015 at 5:25 PM The author uses good imagery and maintains a poetic flow through the whole piece. Emile.

Manny Paras March 22, 2015 at 1:08 PM An exceptional write here from a really exceptional poet. This one will be enjoyed by many, I'm sure.My eyes adore it, Nette.

Monterey Sirak March 22, 2015 at 7:17 AM Classical perfection dear Nette!

Anne-Lise Andresen March 22, 2015 at 6:58 AM - Me, speechless ..... beautifully, dear Nette - hugs & <3 // Anne-Lise :)

Dorian Petersen Potter March 22, 2015 at 2:50 AM A very nice pen Nette! Enjoyed your poetic piece. A 7 from me! Wishing you a very wonderful Sunday! In His light! God bless you! :) D.

James Peranteau March 22, 2015 at 2:28 AM I am amazed at this write dear poet....and the soul who you write about in this write sounds though she will have lingering thoughts from this journy ! Wonderful Nette ! Have a wonderful Sunday.......much love, james