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summers afternoon ~ bees drink nectar from flowers the royal queen awaits ~

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Pat Adams

Date: 3/12/2018 3:57:00 PM

Very well put for another great Haiku!.........80)

Tom Cunningham
Date: 3/12/2018 4:06:00 PM

Thank you Pat, before I joined soup I'd never heard of them.

Line Gauthier

Date: 3/12/2018 2:13:00 PM

Lovely imagery, Tom. I'd like to be that Queen sitting on my throne awaiting. LOL

Tom Cunningham
Date: 3/12/2018 2:50:00 PM

Buzzing over to you now your majesty, with a pot of liquid gold.

Sneha Rv

Date: 3/12/2018 12:35:00 PM

We visited a beekeeping lab once, the keepers make little spots of different colours on the bees' backs to identify them. :)) What a haiku, I think this is a nice way to put it!

Tom Cunningham
Date: 3/12/2018 12:53:00 PM

Thank you Sneha, wow, that is some task marking the bees I never knew they did that. Fascinating creatures and of course I love honey. Tom

Jan Allison

Date: 3/12/2018 10:06:00 AM

excellent haiku Tom:-) hugs jan xx

Tom Cunningham
Date: 3/12/2018 11:11:00 AM

Thank you Jan, hope we get a decent summer this year.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 3/12/2018 8:01:00 AM

You are very good at these short forms Tom.

Tom Cunningham
Date: 3/12/2018 8:19:00 AM

Thank you very much Richard.

Maria Williams

Date: 3/12/2018 8:00:00 AM

Ah - Your haiku is nectar indeed Tom. It sums up the bees cycle so well. Maria

Tom Cunningham
Date: 3/12/2018 8:20:00 AM

Thank you Maria, sweet of you to say, pun intended lol. Tom

Heidi Sands

Date: 3/12/2018 7:35:00 AM

Beautifully written Tom :)

Tom Cunningham
Date: 3/12/2018 8:21:00 AM

Thank you Heidi.

Silent One

Date: 3/12/2018 6:47:00 AM

Nice one Tom...

Tom Cunningham
Date: 3/12/2018 7:12:00 AM

Thanks S.O., Love to see them on a hot summers day.