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Amber Gleam of Summer's Eve

Unspoken dream glints summer’s amber eve Caressing sweet musings longings appease Where motifs of romance ecstasies weave When requited desires strum twilight breeze Buoyant blows season’s mirth lilting lush glee When blazing rendezvous emotions churn Courting heart’s appeal in indulgent plea Where blossoms of bliss fond fantasies yearn Beholden to your glance when heavens glow How do the robins know to trill your song And wooing night's fervor where passions go Why does flirting moon always come along Believe me, my dear, goddess of love knows Though secrets of hearts she’ll never disclose May 19, 2021 Placed 1st: Summer love sonnet contest Sponsor: John Hamilton Placed 1st: All yours (May 27) by Brian Strand

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Valsa George

Date: 11/26/2021 5:08:00 AM

' motifs of romance ecstasies weave'..... splendid image.... ! You are a master in all poetic forms ! Born to be a winner, carry on with your poetic safari... dear friend!

Kim Merryman

Date: 5/28/2021 4:27:00 PM

Vijay, congrats on your win in Brian's contest with this romantic sonnet! Blessings, Kim M

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/30/2021 6:18:00 AM

Thank you Kim--much appreciate your visit and comments.

Joanna Daniel

Date: 5/26/2021 8:43:00 AM

Lovely and charming, Vijay, congratulations on top win:) well deserved:)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/26/2021 11:39:00 AM

Thank you Jo--much appreciate.

Ken Rone

Date: 5/26/2021 8:33:00 AM

Vijay - You have scored big with this sonnet. Best of luck. "When requited desires strums twilight breeze"...let me get out my guitar- Ken

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/26/2021 11:39:00 AM

Glad you stopped by with your kind remarks. Much appreciate, Ken--many thanks.

Supraja Kannan

Date: 5/26/2021 8:05:00 AM

This is such a beautiful sonnet with amazing imagery... Lovely flow... Reads like a winner...

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/26/2021 11:38:00 AM

Thank you Supraja--much appreciate.

Aniruddha Pathak

Date: 5/25/2021 6:12:00 AM

An exquisitely chiseled sonnet and a winner all the way, congrats

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/25/2021 1:42:00 PM

Much appreciate Aniruddha, your visit and kind remarks. Many thanks.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/24/2021 3:53:00 PM

VEry nice, Vijay. Such great alliteration too. Congrats.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/25/2021 1:41:00 PM

Thank you Andrea--much appreciate.

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 5/24/2021 8:04:00 AM

Brilliant, melodious write, Vijay! Congrats on your top win!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/24/2021 10:56:00 AM

Much appreciate, US--many thanks.

John Hamilton

Date: 5/24/2021 7:53:00 AM

Had a feeling this was you Vijay, thanks for another wonderful entry, and congrats on a shared top win!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/24/2021 10:56:00 AM

Much appreciate John, for your kind feedback. Many thanks for holding contests and a special thank you for the win.

Sotto Poet

Date: 5/23/2021 4:06:00 PM

What a great lovely sonnet! Your writing and symbolism associated with a perfect wording, are truly exceptional From what I've seen, this should be in a high placement . May you have a wonderful evening.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/24/2021 4:52:00 AM

Much appreciate your words of encouragement, Lasaad. Many thanks for your visit and kind remarks.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 5/22/2021 4:45:00 AM

This sonnet expresses the beauty of Mother Nature’s love as well as romantic love Vijay, in your lovely inimitable style. Beautiful my friend! Blessings Connie xxoo

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/22/2021 10:27:00 AM

Thank you friend for your kind remarks. Much appreciate your visit and comments, Connie.

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 5/20/2021 3:14:00 PM

your pen truly shines drawing beautiful pictures wishing you a blessed weekend

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/20/2021 4:15:00 PM

Haven't seen you in a while. Much appreciate Liam your visit and kind remarks. Many thanks.

Heidi Sands

Date: 5/20/2021 2:52:00 PM

So very nice Vijay! I love that 3rd stanza and ending too. Beautifully written. I hope you have a nice evening :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/20/2021 4:14:00 PM

I know what you mean. I like the 3rd stanza as well. Much appreciate Heidi your kind remarks. Many thanks.

Mike Gentile

Date: 5/20/2021 4:37:00 AM

I can feel the emotion in your Summer Sonnet, Vijay, It is full of passion! Good Luck !! Happy Thursday1

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/20/2021 4:48:00 AM

So very kind of you Mike. Much appreciate your visit and comments. Many thanks.

Alexis Y.

Date: 5/19/2021 5:59:00 PM

WoW! Vijay, What a lovely romantic Sonnet. Your content and imagery are superb. I see this placing high. Congrats in advance. Have a wonderful day, my friend:-) Alexis

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/20/2021 4:47:00 AM

Thank you for your vote of confidence my friend. Much appreciate your comments, Alexis--many many thanks.

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 5/19/2021 3:00:00 PM

The goddess of love knows everything and her job is to send the moons glow over to the lovers, well written Vijay, thankyou for the soft pen, and the brush of gentle winds of word.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/19/2021 5:34:00 PM

Much appreciate my friend. Many thanks, Vienna.

Brandy Nicole

Date: 5/19/2021 2:10:00 PM

This is so beautiful and romantic, and I would have to agree- so dreamy. "Where blossoms of bliss, caress sweet musings" Such a delicate and beautiful thought. Magic is in the air and your words whisper "Summer Love" :) Brandy

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/19/2021 5:34:00 PM

Thank you Brandy for your supportive comments. Always a joy when you visit. Much appreciate.

Susan Lawrence

Date: 5/19/2021 11:27:00 AM

Dreamy ..lovely..enticing..in its beauty. "Beholden to your glance when heavens glow" Each line a gift ! all the best, Susan :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/19/2021 12:50:00 PM

Your visit is a special gift Susan. Enjoyed reading your comments. Many thanks.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/19/2021 8:31:00 AM

A beautiful romantic write, dear Vijay! Love: Summer’s amber Eve...warms us from the beginning :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/19/2021 12:49:00 PM

Thank you my dear friend for your visit and kind remarks. Much appreciate, Kim.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/19/2021 8:31:00 AM

A superb romantic sonnet, Vijay, just what John wants for his contest. The imagery is amazing and I enjoyed the well-placed alliteration too. Best wishes for a win! Hugs, Carolyn

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/19/2021 12:48:00 PM

That is so very kind of you my friend. Always a joy to read your comments. Much appreciate, Carolyn--many thanks.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 5/19/2021 5:33:00 AM

It is not easy to write a love poem one notch above the normal verses we read here. Most fail. You never do. Your verses are always sublime. I'm always curious about your academic studies.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/19/2021 12:46:00 PM

To hear such wonderful comments from a very talented poet is a very special treat. I always appreciate your support of my humble musings, Victor. Much appreciate as always. Many many thanks.

Besma Riabi Dziri

Date: 5/19/2021 5:26:00 AM

A majestic form in an amazing tune with a graceful state of a poet's soul and mind! You have displayed the epitome of beauty! Enabling your reader to see, feel and highly appreciate a wonder without disclosing its very core! A stunning poetry, dear Vijay! Definitely one of the best that deserves to be honoured and highly rated! A fave! Warmest wishes and best regards.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/19/2021 12:44:00 PM

Haven't seen you in a while, Besma. Delighted by your visit and kind remarks. Much appreciate as always. Many thanks. And a very special thank you for the FAVE.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 5/19/2021 5:20:00 AM

An explosion of beauty expressed through phantasmagoric verses that enchant the heart and uplift the soul, my dearest friend, Vijay! A winner! Good luck my dearest friend! Blessings.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/19/2021 12:43:00 PM

Much appreciate your vote of confidence my friend. Many thanks for your cheerful comments, Demetrios.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 5/19/2021 5:03:00 AM

Another gem from your gifted pen Vijay, written in your unique style. Best of luck. Tom

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/19/2021 12:42:00 PM

So very nice of you to say so, Tom. Always a delight to read your comments. Much appreciate --many thanks.