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Amber Gleam of Summer's Eve

Unspoken dream glints summer’s amber eve
Caressing sweet musings longings appease
Where motifs of romance ecstasies weave
When requited desires strum twilight breeze

Buoyant blows season’s mirth lilting lush glee
When blazing rendezvous emotions churn
Courting heart’s appeal in indulgent plea
Where blossoms of bliss fond fantasies yearn

Beholden to your glance when heavens glow
How do the robins know to trill your song
And wooing night's fervor where passions go
Why does flirting moon always come along

Believe me, my dear, goddess of love knows
Though secrets of hearts she’ll never disclose

May 19, 2021
Placed 1st: Summer love sonnet contest
Sponsor: John Hamilton
Placed 1st: All yours (May 27) by Brian Strand

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Valsa George Date: 11/26/2021 5:08:00 AM ' motifs of romance ecstasies weave'..... splendid image.... ! You are a master in all poetic forms ! Born to be a winner, carry on with your poetic safari... dear friend! Login to Reply

Kim Merryman Date: 5/28/2021 4:27:00 PM Vijay, congrats on your win in Brian's contest with this romantic sonnet! Blessings, Kim M Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 5/30/2021 6:18:00 AM Thank you Kim--much appreciate your visit and comments.

Joanna Daniel Date: 5/26/2021 8:43:00 AM Lovely and charming, Vijay, congratulations on top win:) well deserved:) Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 5/26/2021 11:39:00 AM Thank you Jo--much appreciate.

Ken Rone Date: 5/26/2021 8:33:00 AM Vijay - You have scored big with this sonnet. Best of luck. "When requited desires strums twilight breeze"...let me get out my guitar- Ken Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 5/26/2021 11:39:00 AM Glad you stopped by with your kind remarks. Much appreciate, Ken--many thanks.

Supraja Kannan Date: 5/26/2021 8:05:00 AM This is such a beautiful sonnet with amazing imagery... Lovely flow... Reads like a winner... Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 5/26/2021 11:38:00 AM Thank you Supraja--much appreciate.

Aniruddha Pathak Date: 5/25/2021 6:12:00 AM An exquisitely chiseled sonnet and a winner all the way, congrats Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 5/25/2021 1:42:00 PM Much appreciate Aniruddha, your visit and kind remarks. Many thanks.

Andrea Dietrich Date: 5/24/2021 3:53:00 PM VEry nice, Vijay. Such great alliteration too. Congrats. Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 5/25/2021 1:41:00 PM Thank you Andrea--much appreciate.

Unseeking Seeker Date: 5/24/2021 8:04:00 AM Brilliant, melodious write, Vijay! Congrats on your top win! Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 5/24/2021 10:56:00 AM Much appreciate, US--many thanks.

John Hamilton Date: 5/24/2021 7:53:00 AM Had a feeling this was you Vijay, thanks for another wonderful entry, and congrats on a shared top win! Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 5/24/2021 10:56:00 AM Much appreciate John, for your kind feedback. Many thanks for holding contests and a special thank you for the win.

Sotto Poet Date: 5/23/2021 4:06:00 PM What a great lovely sonnet! Your writing and symbolism associated with a perfect wording, are truly exceptional From what I've seen, this should be in a high placement . May you have a wonderful evening. Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 5/24/2021 4:52:00 AM Much appreciate your words of encouragement, Lasaad. Many thanks for your visit and kind remarks.

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 5/22/2021 4:45:00 AM This sonnet expresses the beauty of Mother Nature’s love as well as romantic love Vijay, in your lovely inimitable style. Beautiful my friend! Blessings Connie xxoo Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 5/22/2021 10:27:00 AM Thank you friend for your kind remarks. Much appreciate your visit and comments, Connie.

Liam Mcdaid Date: 5/20/2021 3:14:00 PM your pen truly shines drawing beautiful pictures wishing you a blessed weekend Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 5/20/2021 4:15:00 PM Haven't seen you in a while. Much appreciate Liam your visit and kind remarks. Many thanks.

Heidi Sands Date: 5/20/2021 2:52:00 PM So very nice Vijay! I love that 3rd stanza and ending too. Beautifully written. I hope you have a nice evening :) Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 5/20/2021 4:14:00 PM I know what you mean. I like the 3rd stanza as well. Much appreciate Heidi your kind remarks. Many thanks.

Mike Gentile Date: 5/20/2021 4:37:00 AM I can feel the emotion in your Summer Sonnet, Vijay, It is full of passion! Good Luck !! Happy Thursday1 Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 5/20/2021 4:48:00 AM So very kind of you Mike. Much appreciate your visit and comments. Many thanks.

Alexis Y. Date: 5/19/2021 5:59:00 PM WoW! Vijay, What a lovely romantic Sonnet. Your content and imagery are superb. I see this placing high. Congrats in advance. Have a wonderful day, my friend:-) Alexis Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 5/20/2021 4:47:00 AM Thank you for your vote of confidence my friend. Much appreciate your comments, Alexis--many many thanks.

Mystic Rose Rose Date: 5/19/2021 3:00:00 PM The goddess of love knows everything and her job is to send the moons glow over to the lovers, well written Vijay, thankyou for the soft pen, and the brush of gentle winds of word. Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 5/19/2021 5:34:00 PM Much appreciate my friend. Many thanks, Vienna.

Brandy Nicole Date: 5/19/2021 2:10:00 PM This is so beautiful and romantic, and I would have to agree- so dreamy. "Where blossoms of bliss, caress sweet musings" Such a delicate and beautiful thought. Magic is in the air and your words whisper "Summer Love" :) Brandy Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 5/19/2021 5:34:00 PM Thank you Brandy for your supportive comments. Always a joy when you visit. Much appreciate.

Susan Lawrence Date: 5/19/2021 11:27:00 AM Dreamy ..lovely..enticing..in its beauty. "Beholden to your glance when heavens glow" Each line a gift ! all the best, Susan :) Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 5/19/2021 12:50:00 PM Your visit is a special gift Susan. Enjoyed reading your comments. Many thanks.

Kim Rodrigues Date: 5/19/2021 8:31:00 AM A beautiful romantic write, dear Vijay! Love: Summer’s amber Eve...warms us from the beginning :) Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 5/19/2021 12:49:00 PM Thank you my dear friend for your visit and kind remarks. Much appreciate, Kim.

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 5/19/2021 8:31:00 AM A superb romantic sonnet, Vijay, just what John wants for his contest. The imagery is amazing and I enjoyed the well-placed alliteration too. Best wishes for a win! Hugs, Carolyn Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 5/19/2021 12:48:00 PM That is so very kind of you my friend. Always a joy to read your comments. Much appreciate, Carolyn--many thanks.

Victor Buhagiar Date: 5/19/2021 5:33:00 AM It is not easy to write a love poem one notch above the normal verses we read here. Most fail. You never do. Your verses are always sublime. I'm always curious about your academic studies. Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 5/19/2021 12:46:00 PM To hear such wonderful comments from a very talented poet is a very special treat. I always appreciate your support of my humble musings, Victor. Much appreciate as always. Many many thanks.

Besma Riabi Dziri Date: 5/19/2021 5:26:00 AM A majestic form in an amazing tune with a graceful state of a poet's soul and mind! You have displayed the epitome of beauty! Enabling your reader to see, feel and highly appreciate a wonder without disclosing its very core! A stunning poetry, dear Vijay! Definitely one of the best that deserves to be honoured and highly rated! A fave! Warmest wishes and best regards. Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 5/19/2021 12:44:00 PM Haven't seen you in a while, Besma. Delighted by your visit and kind remarks. Much appreciate as always. Many thanks. And a very special thank you for the FAVE.

Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 5/19/2021 5:20:00 AM An explosion of beauty expressed through phantasmagoric verses that enchant the heart and uplift the soul, my dearest friend, Vijay! A winner! Good luck my dearest friend! Blessings. Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 5/19/2021 12:43:00 PM Much appreciate your vote of confidence my friend. Many thanks for your cheerful comments, Demetrios.

Tom Cunningham Date: 5/19/2021 5:03:00 AM Another gem from your gifted pen Vijay, written in your unique style. Best of luck. Tom Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 5/19/2021 12:42:00 PM So very nice of you to say so, Tom. Always a delight to read your comments. Much appreciate --many thanks.