Vijay Pandit Poet Sonnet

Amber Gleam of Summer's Eve

Unspoken dream glints summer’s amber eve
Caressing sweet musings longings appease
Where motifs of romance ecstasies weave
When requited desires strum twilight breeze

Buoyant blows season’s mirth lilting lush glee
When blazing rendezvous emotions churn
Courting heart’s appeal in indulgent plea
Where blossoms of bliss fond fantasies yearn

Beholden to your glance when heavens glow
How do the robins know to trill your song
And wooing night's fervor where passions go
Why does flirting moon always come along

Believe me, my dear, goddess of love knows
Though secrets of hearts she’ll never disclose

May 19, 2021
Placed 1st: Summer love sonnet contest
Sponsor: John Hamilton
Placed 1st: All yours (May 27) by Brian Strand

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Valsa George November 26, 2021 at 5:08 AM ' motifs of romance ecstasies weave'..... splendid image.... ! You are a master in all poetic forms ! Born to be a winner, carry on with your poetic safari... dear friend!

Kim Merryman May 28, 2021 at 4:27 PM Vijay, congrats on your win in Brian's contest with this romantic sonnet! Blessings, Kim M Vijay Pandit May 30, 2021 at 6:18 AM Thank you Kim--much appreciate your visit and comments.

Joanna Daniel May 26, 2021 at 8:43 AM Lovely and charming, Vijay, congratulations on top win:) well deserved:) Vijay Pandit May 26, 2021 at 11:39 AM Thank you Jo--much appreciate.

Ken Rone May 26, 2021 at 8:33 AM Vijay - You have scored big with this sonnet. Best of luck. "When requited desires strums twilight breeze"...let me get out my guitar- Ken Vijay Pandit May 26, 2021 at 11:39 AM Glad you stopped by with your kind remarks. Much appreciate, Ken--many thanks.

Supraja Kannan May 26, 2021 at 8:05 AM This is such a beautiful sonnet with amazing imagery... Lovely flow... Reads like a winner... Vijay Pandit May 26, 2021 at 11:38 AM Thank you Supraja--much appreciate.

Aniruddha Pathak May 25, 2021 at 6:12 AM An exquisitely chiseled sonnet and a winner all the way, congrats Vijay Pandit May 25, 2021 at 1:42 PM Much appreciate Aniruddha, your visit and kind remarks. Many thanks.

Andrea Dietrich May 24, 2021 at 3:53 PM VEry nice, Vijay. Such great alliteration too. Congrats. Vijay Pandit May 25, 2021 at 1:41 PM Thank you Andrea--much appreciate.

Unseeking Seeker May 24, 2021 at 8:04 AM Brilliant, melodious write, Vijay! Congrats on your top win! Vijay Pandit May 24, 2021 at 10:56 AM Much appreciate, US--many thanks.

John Hamilton May 24, 2021 at 7:53 AM Had a feeling this was you Vijay, thanks for another wonderful entry, and congrats on a shared top win! Vijay Pandit May 24, 2021 at 10:56 AM Much appreciate John, for your kind feedback. Many thanks for holding contests and a special thank you for the win.

Sotto Poet May 23, 2021 at 4:06 PM What a great lovely sonnet! Your writing and symbolism associated with a perfect wording, are truly exceptional From what I've seen, this should be in a high placement . May you have a wonderful evening. Vijay Pandit May 24, 2021 at 4:52 AM Much appreciate your words of encouragement, Lasaad. Many thanks for your visit and kind remarks.

Connie Marcum Wong May 22, 2021 at 4:45 AM This sonnet expresses the beauty of Mother Nature’s love as well as romantic love Vijay, in your lovely inimitable style. Beautiful my friend! Blessings Connie xxoo Vijay Pandit May 22, 2021 at 10:27 AM Thank you friend for your kind remarks. Much appreciate your visit and comments, Connie.

Liam Mcdaid May 20, 2021 at 3:14 PM your pen truly shines drawing beautiful pictures wishing you a blessed weekend Vijay Pandit May 20, 2021 at 4:15 PM Haven't seen you in a while. Much appreciate Liam your visit and kind remarks. Many thanks.

Heidi Sands May 20, 2021 at 2:52 PM So very nice Vijay! I love that 3rd stanza and ending too. Beautifully written. I hope you have a nice evening :) Vijay Pandit May 20, 2021 at 4:14 PM I know what you mean. I like the 3rd stanza as well. Much appreciate Heidi your kind remarks. Many thanks.

Mike Gentile May 20, 2021 at 4:37 AM I can feel the emotion in your Summer Sonnet, Vijay, It is full of passion! Good Luck !! Happy Thursday1 Vijay Pandit May 20, 2021 at 4:48 AM So very kind of you Mike. Much appreciate your visit and comments. Many thanks.

Alexis Y. May 19, 2021 at 5:59 PM WoW! Vijay, What a lovely romantic Sonnet. Your content and imagery are superb. I see this placing high. Congrats in advance. Have a wonderful day, my friend:-) Alexis Vijay Pandit May 20, 2021 at 4:47 AM Thank you for your vote of confidence my friend. Much appreciate your comments, Alexis--many many thanks.

Mystic Rose Rose May 19, 2021 at 3:00 PM The goddess of love knows everything and her job is to send the moons glow over to the lovers, well written Vijay, thankyou for the soft pen, and the brush of gentle winds of word. Vijay Pandit May 19, 2021 at 5:34 PM Much appreciate my friend. Many thanks, Vienna.

Brandy Nicole May 19, 2021 at 2:10 PM This is so beautiful and romantic, and I would have to agree- so dreamy. "Where blossoms of bliss, caress sweet musings" Such a delicate and beautiful thought. Magic is in the air and your words whisper "Summer Love" :) Brandy Vijay Pandit May 19, 2021 at 5:34 PM Thank you Brandy for your supportive comments. Always a joy when you visit. Much appreciate.

Susan Lawrence May 19, 2021 at 11:27 AM Dreamy ..lovely..enticing..in its beauty. "Beholden to your glance when heavens glow" Each line a gift ! all the best, Susan :) Vijay Pandit May 19, 2021 at 12:50 PM Your visit is a special gift Susan. Enjoyed reading your comments. Many thanks.

Carolyn Devonshire May 19, 2021 at 8:31 AM A superb romantic sonnet, Vijay, just what John wants for his contest. The imagery is amazing and I enjoyed the well-placed alliteration too. Best wishes for a win! Hugs, Carolyn Vijay Pandit May 19, 2021 at 12:48 PM That is so very kind of you my friend. Always a joy to read your comments. Much appreciate, Carolyn--many thanks.

Kim Rodrigues May 19, 2021 at 8:31 AM A beautiful romantic write, dear Vijay! Love: Summer’s amber Eve...warms us from the beginning :) Vijay Pandit May 19, 2021 at 12:49 PM Thank you my dear friend for your visit and kind remarks. Much appreciate, Kim.

Victor Buhagiar May 19, 2021 at 5:33 AM It is not easy to write a love poem one notch above the normal verses we read here. Most fail. You never do. Your verses are always sublime. I'm always curious about your academic studies. Vijay Pandit May 19, 2021 at 12:46 PM To hear such wonderful comments from a very talented poet is a very special treat. I always appreciate your support of my humble musings, Victor. Much appreciate as always. Many many thanks.

Besma Riabi Dziri May 19, 2021 at 5:26 AM A majestic form in an amazing tune with a graceful state of a poet's soul and mind! You have displayed the epitome of beauty! Enabling your reader to see, feel and highly appreciate a wonder without disclosing its very core! A stunning poetry, dear Vijay! Definitely one of the best that deserves to be honoured and highly rated! A fave! Warmest wishes and best regards. Vijay Pandit May 19, 2021 at 12:44 PM Haven't seen you in a while, Besma. Delighted by your visit and kind remarks. Much appreciate as always. Many thanks. And a very special thank you for the FAVE.

Demetrios Trifiatis May 19, 2021 at 5:20 AM An explosion of beauty expressed through phantasmagoric verses that enchant the heart and uplift the soul, my dearest friend, Vijay! A winner! Good luck my dearest friend! Blessings. Vijay Pandit May 19, 2021 at 12:43 PM Much appreciate your vote of confidence my friend. Many thanks for your cheerful comments, Demetrios.

Tom Cunningham May 19, 2021 at 5:03 AM Another gem from your gifted pen Vijay, written in your unique style. Best of luck. Tom Vijay Pandit May 19, 2021 at 12:42 PM So very nice of you to say so, Tom. Always a delight to read your comments. Much appreciate --many thanks.