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Amazing Autumn

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I adore kicking through crisp crunchy leaves of gold, red and brown carpeting the damp ground Biting winds chill our bones pumpkin soup warms us and we’ll snuggle up by a blazing fire MERSE - Beauty Of Fall Poetry Contest Sponsored by Malabika Ray Choudhury Syllable count 1,2,3,4,5,6 6,5,4,3,2,1 checked with how many syllables 09/10/21

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Susan Ashley

Date: 10/24/2021 8:40:00 PM

Absolutely exhilarating and heartwarming, Jan. You capture the fun and cozy beauty of Autumn with poetic and artistic ease. Congratulations for your wonderful win in Mala's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Arthur Vaso

Date: 10/10/2021 11:49:00 PM

You are a very good poet!

Nancy Kaufman

Date: 10/10/2021 12:25:00 PM

congratulations Jan. enjoyed it

Bj Legros Kelley

Date: 10/6/2021 10:01:00 AM

Congratulations Jan! Such a warming, cozy autumn poem, I love it! <3

Tom Wright

Date: 10/5/2021 1:45:00 AM

Congrats Jan, will be one of my fav's. good job and God bless you and yours. Tom

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 9/29/2021 4:37:00 AM

I love this tribute to fall in all its beauty Jan. Pumpkin soup is my favorite. Congratulations on your worthy win. Blessings xxoo

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 9/28/2021 5:49:00 AM

Lovely Autumn vision. I love it. God bless you always, Love, Gina

Jenna Logan

Date: 9/28/2021 4:21:00 AM

Lovely scenes to go with your Autumn verse, Jan.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 9/26/2021 12:23:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. What a beautiful story/write and pictures. Can I have a mug of your pumpkin soup as I walk through the trees/leaves above???? Have a blessed day

Eve Roper

Date: 9/26/2021 11:04:00 AM

Great cool brisk feeling and imagery , Jan. To snuggle once again would be nice, besides my grandbaby :) Congratulations on your win in Malabika's contest! Hugs Eve

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 9/26/2021 6:50:00 AM

A nice scene you’ve created! Congratulations!

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 9/26/2021 6:14:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. Beautiful Merse - enjoyed ~ Mala

Natasha L Scragg

Date: 9/19/2021 7:05:00 AM

Cool.. I can hear those leaves crunching. Your poem truly transports us readers to the moment. All the best in the contest it's a very strong contender :-) (thumbs up)