Jan Allison Poet Verse

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Amazing Autumn

I 
adore
kicking through
crisp crunchy leaves
of gold, red and brown
carpeting the damp ground


Biting winds chill our bones
pumpkin soup warms us
and we’ll snuggle
up by a
blazing 
fire

MERSE - Beauty Of Fall Poetry Contest

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Malabika Ray Choudhury 

Syllable count 1,2,3,4,5,6 6,5,4,3,2,1 checked with how many syllables

09/10/21

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Susan Ashley October 24, 2021 at 8:40 PM Absolutely exhilarating and heartwarming, Jan. You capture the fun and cozy beauty of Autumn with poetic and artistic ease. Congratulations for your wonderful win in Mala's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Arthur Vaso October 10, 2021 at 11:49 PM You are a very good poet!

Nancy Kaufman October 10, 2021 at 12:25 PM congratulations Jan. enjoyed it

Bj Legros Kelley October 6, 2021 at 10:01 AM Congratulations Jan! Such a warming, cozy autumn poem, I love it! <3

Tom Wright October 5, 2021 at 1:45 AM Congrats Jan, will be one of my fav's. good job and God bless you and yours. Tom

Connie Marcum Wong September 29, 2021 at 4:37 AM I love this tribute to fall in all its beauty Jan. Pumpkin soup is my favorite. Congratulations on your worthy win. Blessings xxoo

Regina Mcintosh September 28, 2021 at 5:49 AM Lovely Autumn vision. I love it. God bless you always, Love, Gina

Jenna Logan September 28, 2021 at 4:21 AM Lovely scenes to go with your Autumn verse, Jan.

Paula Goldsmith September 26, 2021 at 12:23 PM Congratulations on your win. What a beautiful story/write and pictures. Can I have a mug of your pumpkin soup as I walk through the trees/leaves above???? Have a blessed day

Eve Roper September 26, 2021 at 11:04 AM Great cool brisk feeling and imagery , Jan. To snuggle once again would be nice, besides my grandbaby :) Congratulations on your win in Malabika's contest! Hugs Eve

Kim Rodrigues September 26, 2021 at 6:50 AM A nice scene you’ve created! Congratulations!

Malabika Ray Choudhury September 26, 2021 at 6:14 AM Congratulations on your win. Beautiful Merse - enjoyed ~ Mala

Natasha L Scragg September 19, 2021 at 7:05 AM Cool.. I can hear those leaves crunching. Your poem truly transports us readers to the moment. All the best in the contest it's a very strong contender :-) (thumbs up)

Delice Arleen Skelly September 13, 2021 at 2:37 AM Sounds amazing, I Love Autumn...Delice

JC Brul September 12, 2021 at 7:04 AM Very heartwarming!! A fav for me!

Tania Kitchin September 12, 2021 at 5:00 AM Ahh that sounds wonderfully cozy Jan! hugs

Harry Horsman September 11, 2021 at 9:55 PM Springtime for me, Jan, but can so well relate to your wonderful poem. Good luck in contest.

James Peranteau September 11, 2021 at 8:17 PM i just broke out the fall vestments dear poet....you make it sound so appealing! Have a great Autumn....much love, james

M. L. Kiser September 11, 2021 at 4:34 PM Ah yes, we'll soon be having that Pumpkin soup; squash soup, all sorts of warm goodies. Enjoyed and well crafted.

Michelle Faulkner September 11, 2021 at 1:57 PM Very descriptive, fall is so beautiful, (and pumpkin soup, yes please!)

Rico Leffanta September 11, 2021 at 10:41 AM Entering all the contests has certainly increased your skill - and speed - in coming up with these little masterpieces!

Judy Ball September 11, 2021 at 7:05 AM Absolutely lovely. Well Done. Good Luck In The Contest. God Bless, JB

Mike Gentile September 11, 2021 at 4:51 AM Indeed a beautiful snapshot of Fall Jan! You've definitely captured its essence, well done xxoo Happy Saturday !

Brian Strand September 11, 2021 at 12:45 AM Pic 1Reminds me Jan of local beechwood setting.Have a good weekend

Tony Hargreaves September 11, 2021 at 12:37 AM Hi Jan. Enjoyed this one - the topic, the shape, the syllable count. Yes, autumn is on its way once again. Tony

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