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I adore kicking through crisp crunchy leaves of gold, red and brown carpeting the damp ground Biting winds chill our bones pumpkin soup warms us and we’ll snuggle up by a blazing fire MERSE - Beauty Of Fall Poetry Contest Sponsored by Malabika Ray Choudhury Syllable count 1,2,3,4,5,6 6,5,4,3,2,1 checked with how many syllables 09/10/21

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Date: 10/24/2021 8:40:00 PM
Absolutely exhilarating and heartwarming, Jan. You capture the fun and cozy beauty of Autumn with poetic and artistic ease. Congratulations for your wonderful win in Mala's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 10/10/2021 11:49:00 PM
You are a very good poet!
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Date: 10/10/2021 12:25:00 PM
congratulations Jan. enjoyed it
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Date: 10/6/2021 10:01:00 AM
Congratulations Jan! Such a warming, cozy autumn poem, I love it! <3
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Date: 10/5/2021 1:45:00 AM
Congrats Jan, will be one of my fav's. good job and God bless you and yours. Tom
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Date: 9/29/2021 4:37:00 AM
I love this tribute to fall in all its beauty Jan. Pumpkin soup is my favorite. Congratulations on your worthy win. Blessings xxoo
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Date: 9/28/2021 5:49:00 AM
Lovely Autumn vision. I love it. God bless you always, Love, Gina
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Date: 9/28/2021 4:21:00 AM
Lovely scenes to go with your Autumn verse, Jan.
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Date: 9/26/2021 12:23:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. What a beautiful story/write and pictures. Can I have a mug of your pumpkin soup as I walk through the trees/leaves above???? Have a blessed day
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Date: 9/26/2021 11:04:00 AM
Great cool brisk feeling and imagery , Jan. To snuggle once again would be nice, besides my grandbaby :) Congratulations on your win in Malabika's contest! Hugs Eve
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Date: 9/26/2021 6:50:00 AM
A nice scene you’ve created! Congratulations!
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Date: 9/26/2021 6:14:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Beautiful Merse - enjoyed ~ Mala
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Date: 9/19/2021 7:05:00 AM
Cool.. I can hear those leaves crunching. Your poem truly transports us readers to the moment. All the best in the contest it's a very strong contender :-) (thumbs up)
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Date: 9/15/2021 12:41:00 PM
Lovely Jan. Gives me a warm cozy feeling. A beautiful season.
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Date: 9/13/2021 2:37:00 AM
Sounds amazing, I Love Autumn...Delice
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Date: 9/12/2021 7:04:00 AM
Very heartwarming!! A fav for me!
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Date: 9/12/2021 5:00:00 AM
Ahh that sounds wonderfully cozy Jan! hugs
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Date: 9/11/2021 9:55:00 PM
Springtime for me, Jan, but can so well relate to your wonderful poem. Good luck in contest.
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Date: 9/11/2021 8:17:00 PM
i just broke out the fall vestments dear poet....you make it sound so appealing! Have a great Autumn....much love, james
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Date: 9/11/2021 4:34:00 PM
Ah yes, we'll soon be having that Pumpkin soup; squash soup, all sorts of warm goodies. Enjoyed and well crafted.
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Date: 9/11/2021 1:57:00 PM
Very descriptive, fall is so beautiful, (and pumpkin soup, yes please!)
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Date: 9/11/2021 10:41:00 AM
Entering all the contests has certainly increased your skill - and speed - in coming up with these little masterpieces!
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Date: 9/11/2021 7:05:00 AM
Absolutely lovely. Well Done. Good Luck In The Contest. God Bless, JB
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Date: 9/11/2021 4:51:00 AM
Indeed a beautiful snapshot of Fall Jan! You've definitely captured its essence, well done xxoo Happy Saturday !
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Date: 9/11/2021 12:45:00 AM
Pic 1Reminds me Jan of local beechwood setting.Have a good weekend
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