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Amaryllis Stood

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                                                     Amaryllis stood
                                            Erect like a straight soldier
                                                 Red feminine bloom

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/7/2011 2:20:00 PM

very creative,,, and firm...p.d.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/12/2011 11:55:00 PM

wow, how did I miss this colorful little gem??

Black Eyed Susan

Date: 4/12/2011 8:04:00 AM

beautiful! a wonderful image in only a few words.

Kash Poet

Date: 4/8/2011 3:46:00 AM

Wonderful imagery here Sara!Enjoyed.

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 4/7/2011 11:33:00 PM

Very nice image you paint here with this haiku, Sara :) Thank you for the info about your contest :) I'll see what I can do :) enjoy your weekend :)

Constance La France

Date: 4/7/2011 8:22:00 PM

This was one of my mothers favourite flowers, so of course, I love this, and thanks for the comment on my poem~~

Jancarl Campi

Date: 4/7/2011 8:41:00 AM

Hi there! I hope you are feeling better. I am a bit slow with comments at times, it is because of all the meds i a on. Anyway, I really like "Amaryllis Stood" I is such a beautiful flower. You painted a beautiful picture here. Take care, Jancarl.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 4/7/2011 7:57:00 AM

oh sara, a remarkable piece that strikes a beautiful contrast between " soldier" and " feminine bloom".... awesome for me! to good health and more poetry..:) huggs, nette

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/7/2011 6:33:00 AM

Spectacular vision in this piece Sara my friend.. amazing imagery presents the lovely picture in the readers mind.. enjoyed with luv.. hope u are feeling much better today ..