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Amaryllis Stood

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                                                     Amaryllis stood
                                            Erect like a straight soldier
                                                 Red feminine bloom

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 5/7/2011 2:20:00 PM
very creative,,, and firm...p.d.
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Date: 4/12/2011 11:55:00 PM
wow, how did I miss this colorful little gem??
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Date: 4/12/2011 8:04:00 AM
beautiful! a wonderful image in only a few words.
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Date: 4/8/2011 3:46:00 AM
Wonderful imagery here Sara!Enjoyed.
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Date: 4/7/2011 11:33:00 PM
Very nice image you paint here with this haiku, Sara :) Thank you for the info about your contest :) I'll see what I can do :) enjoy your weekend :)
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Date: 4/7/2011 8:22:00 PM
This was one of my mothers favourite flowers, so of course, I love this, and thanks for the comment on my poem~~
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Date: 4/7/2011 8:41:00 AM
Hi there! I hope you are feeling better. I am a bit slow with comments at times, it is because of all the meds i a on. Anyway, I really like "Amaryllis Stood" I is such a beautiful flower. You painted a beautiful picture here. Take care, Jancarl.
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Date: 4/7/2011 7:57:00 AM
oh sara, a remarkable piece that strikes a beautiful contrast between " soldier" and " feminine bloom".... awesome for me! to good health and more poetry..:) huggs, nette
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Date: 4/7/2011 6:33:00 AM
Spectacular vision in this piece Sara my friend.. amazing imagery presents the lovely picture in the readers mind.. enjoyed with luv.. hope u are feeling much better today ..
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Date: 4/6/2011 9:10:00 PM
Magnificent flowers, Sara, and I like the way you compare them to a "red feminine bloom. Beautiful haiku! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/6/2011 8:37:00 PM
Sara- My first amaryllis poem...your 17 lil syllables say so much! Blessings. Gwendolen
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Date: 4/6/2011 6:11:00 PM
beautiful expressions with nice images, Sara
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Date: 4/6/2011 5:02:00 PM
enjoyede this read Sara, short but sweet.
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Date: 4/6/2011 4:16:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your excellent poetry today. Looking forward to reading more. Take care of yourself.
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