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Am Waldrand / At Forest's Fringe

Als ich Krokusse pflückte im 1. Jahr, waren meine Gedanken so sonderbar. Ich schaute zum Himmel ohne Scheu und suchte nach Äpfeln im Wiesenheu. Spazierte dann durch den schon dämmrigen Wald und plötzlich kam Wind auf, es wurde mir kalt. Ein Reh schaute von ferne zu mir, ein wirklich schönes so edles Tier. Dann ging ich nach Hause mit schnellem Schritt, fand am Wegrand auch noch Pilze und nahm sie mit. ---------------------------------------- When I picked crocuses in 2001, my thoughts were strange, some memories gone. I looked to the sky without being shy and looked for apples and hay. I crossed the forest, the air was still warm, but sudden cold winds brought me shiver and turned into storm. A deer looked at me from its shelter behind. I did not disturb it and returned back home. found even some mushrooms of different kind.

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Date: 5/1/2010 5:33:00 AM
Great write in this one...Sounds like a great day in tune with nature..Keep the creative pen flowing...Thanks for stopping by and commenting on all my poems,etc..Sara
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Date: 4/30/2010 12:39:00 PM
I love this small capsule in time....It feels as if I had been in this peaceful place..eye to eye with the deer, a crocus in my hand. Lovely poem,....such a peace about it. Love, Carrie You are so kind with your comments...I am very grateful ! Thank you!
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Date: 4/30/2010 9:02:00 AM
very nice write and thanks for sharing in my childs broken heart In NY school starts i sept But I moved to IN where it starts in AUG because they get out the end of MAY feel like moving back but cost of living to high take care faleshia
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Date: 4/30/2010 8:20:00 AM
An interesting little slice of time there!! (that contest was already judged, my little caterpillar came up empty. haha) Luv, andrea
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