Notes About The Poem

Am I on mute?

does no one hear me
are my words merely empty space
does no one speak my language
am i just a stranger in a crowd
alone in this sea of bodies
that perpetually pass me by




AP: Honorable Mention 2025
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Wolf Avatar
May 17, 2025 at 8:48 PM
Interesting angle there, Line. ~ Mum's the Word
Gauthier Avatar
May 18, 2025 at 5:16 AM
that's sometimes how it feels ~
Lane Avatar
May 17, 2025 at 3:48 PM
That’s a feeling that could take place anywhere and sometimes even here.
Gauthier Avatar
May 17, 2025 at 7:43 PM
I hear you ~ thanks for the visit and comment, Lin
La France Avatar
May 17, 2025 at 2:32 PM
Line, very deep, life can be like this unless a person takes the chance and reaches out to people, its a choice we make, blessings ~
Gauthier Avatar
May 17, 2025 at 3:44 PM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Constance ~
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