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AM I ? AM I JUST STANDING HERE OR AM I JUST DEAD AM I SO FULL OF FEAR I LOST MY SELF INSTEAD AM I NOBODY THAT YOU CAN'T DEFEND ME OR AM I JUST INVISIBLE THAT YOU REALLY DON'T PRETEND AM I BLIND OR I JUST DON'T WISH TO SEE THE LOVE I CAN NOT FIND IS RIGHT IN FRONT OF ME AM I HEARING THE TRUTH OR HAVE I JUST BEEN DECIEVED WHO DO I TRUST WHO CAN I BELIEVE AM I SO MAD I JUST CAN'T UNDERSTAND OR AM I SO SAD I NEED A SHOULDER OR A HAND IS IT JUST ME OR AM I ALL ALONE I.T. S.K.A.T. POETRY Re-DO

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Michaela Johnson

Date: 7/9/2016 8:15:00 AM

I can really relate to your words. Very nice.

Abimbola Mosobalaje Davis

Date: 3/8/2016 11:35:00 AM

Lovely poem.

Dalia Shahein

Date: 1/4/2016 8:15:00 PM

Pretty wirds my friend , great write, enjoyed reading it.....hugs / / :) dalia

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/7/2013 12:29:00 AM

yes! :-)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/18/2013 12:52:00 AM

Sidney, thanks so much for the placement in your contest. I appreciate you and PD hosting so many contests for us!

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 4/6/2013 6:07:00 PM

This sure is drametic, but let me tell you - you are not alone. Jesus is right there, smiling at you - so smile back. OK.... Many blessings you have recieved today...... Lucilla

Dinda Minardi

Date: 6/18/2011 8:33:00 AM

So deep and dark... I like dark poems..

Irene Komu

Date: 5/26/2011 6:13:00 AM

powerful poem...I love it. U r a good poet SKAT!

Michelle Converse

Date: 6/30/2010 9:14:00 PM

i can definitely relate to that--great read!! by the way, thanks for your comments on my poems.--chelle

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 6/1/2010 10:18:00 PM

wow, you really said it like it is, Irma & I can't help but be able to relate to this--I think I've asked some of these questions myself...btw I hope you don't mind, I included your name in my parody, The Passionate Souper to the Soup--it was like a lightbulb moment when I was thinking of what rhymes with "that"--thanks for a having such a cool name! :) enjoy your day!

Lynette Chachere

Date: 5/17/2010 11:22:00 AM

i will enter your contest Irma(: i've got a poem of free verse or of tanka form in mind and i've never written one. this will be fun. take care.always your friend, -Always&Forever Lynn[lynette]

Patty Lane

Date: 5/17/2010 9:27:00 AM

And so you asked the ultimate question just in your title alone. That's one we are all looking for the answer to. Nice work! And thanks for the congrats! Patty

Edward Orozco

Date: 5/8/2010 9:28:00 AM

I am here for you, i thy verse of written affection! beautiful talent you have

Rachel W

Date: 5/4/2010 2:48:00 PM

So many questions. This journey throughout life, that we all take to find ourselves is so intriguing, and a journey indeed. Please don't feel alone--there's a world full of people feeling the same. *Smiles* to you Irma.

Billy Thekidster

Date: 5/4/2010 1:05:00 PM

You're not alone. Ya still got me, my little Irma Hole S.K.A.T. poetry. Your Kiddy-Poo, theKidster, Billy, that's who.

Saeedah Johnson

Date: 5/2/2010 7:24:00 PM

well ithink itz perfect....

Ravindra K Kapoor

Date: 4/30/2010 11:23:00 AM

A lovely and profound introspection into one's own self that too in very simple beautiful words. Great write my friend. It always needs courage to look into our own self. Thanks and many thanks for your beautiful and precious comments on my today's Angel spirit poem Neelkanth. Love and best wishes, ...Ravindra... Irma Hole

Jay Loveless

Date: 4/27/2010 11:05:00 AM

i think this needs a few more lines added to it

Phil Boy

Date: 4/27/2010 10:05:00 AM

This ones deep, sad to say i feel like that at times,(Baby boy)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/25/2010 11:14:00 PM

Nowhere else for me to go but to a poem I've already seen.Thanks so much, Irma, for commenting on several of my poems. I hopt you enjoyed your big "day off" of the week. I know I did (mostly). Luv ya, andrea

Destiny Orschell

Date: 4/25/2010 11:36:00 AM

Wonderful. Loved the poem. I look forward to reading more of your poems. -Destiny

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/25/2010 8:29:00 AM

Beautiful expressive words and many questions to ponder in your write Irma Bff and believe me as long as u post on Soup u are never alone... but a wonderful asset to this site and to me personally as my BFF...luv.. Linda-Marie..

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 4/24/2010 3:10:00 PM

One thing I found out is you are as alone as you want to be. There are so many clubs, and churches, and schools with classes and hospitals that need helpers and schools which need teachers aids and pets who have love to give. Shhhoooooooo now go make a new friend! Light and Love (Give love and you will get love)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/23/2010 4:51:00 PM

I hope just a topic and not that you are so alone..Keep the creative pen flowing..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara

Faleshia Murphy

Date: 4/23/2010 12:13:00 PM

hi irma no you are not alone you have and will always have your poetry soup family who loves you dearly keep your head up and thanks for all your kind comments faleshia