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6th July 2023

Always With Me Always With You

They say you never forget your first love, and I guess I never did. You were so grown up and I was just a kid. I felt so proud walking by your side. You telling everyone I was your girl, with pride. We went everywhere together; everyone knew us as a pair. I sure did love you. When I was with you, I didn’t have a care. Other girls would chat to you and try to get between Nothing could split us up even though I was only sixteen. You wanted me to come with you to that wedding interstate. It was the marriage of your very good mate. I had to work, and so I couldn’t come, I had to stay. If I was with you, you might not have been killed that day. I would have stopped you from crossing that road. That huge truck had such a heavy load. It couldn’t stop in time. That day it took your life, but you were mine. I waited for your return. My eyes began to burn. When I heard the news, I just couldn’t cope. The end of happiness, the end of all my hope. You became my secret love, and I love you to this day. Why I can’t mention you, I really cannot say. I visit your grave sometimes and the places we used to go. But it’s my only secret that my dear husband doesn’t know. He just wouldn't understand that I could love you too. Knowing about you, would just make him feel blue. I am careful not to let my teardrops start. As I keep the poem that you wrote me, deep inside my heart. Yes, you are my secret and it’s so very true. Always with me Always with you.
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July 9, 2023 at 12:35 PM
Authentic love possesses extraordinary resilience and originates solely from a singular source. Your profoundly moving verse captivated my senses, and I extend my heartfelt congratulations on your well-deserved recognition as the recipient of the prestigious POTD honor. May you relish in the glory of this accomplishment, while also expressing my sincere wishes for the well-being of both you and your esteemed brother.
Volumes Avatar
July 9, 2023 at 12:51 PM
Sigh, you are such a sweet, thoughtful gentleman. Thank you for acknowledging some merit in my poem Lasaard. Your entry in the Secret Love contest absolutely took my breath away. It should have been the POTD. It is an exquisite piece of poetry.
Roper Avatar
July 9, 2023 at 12:22 PM
Real love is so strong, it only comes from one place. A heartfelt verse, I enjoyed reading.
Volumes Avatar
July 9, 2023 at 12:46 PM
Thank you Eve. I am nowhere near strong enough as a poet to write a Crown of Sonnets, in order to enter a contest, but I wanted to use secret love as a topic of my poem anyway. I really appreciate your comment.
Mcintosh Avatar
July 8, 2023 at 3:41 AM
Just love this... so beautifully done, awesome job. God bless you. Love, Gina
Volumes Avatar
July 8, 2023 at 7:23 PM
Thank you Regina. I appreciate your kind comment. You are a lovely lady.
Richards Avatar
July 6, 2023 at 11:35 PM
The closing lines are reminiscent of e.e. cummings' "i carry your heart with me". A lovely write, my friend. I have sent you soup-mail. :)
Volumes Avatar
July 7, 2023 at 5:41 PM
Thanks so much Suzette, appreciated my friend.
Cantu Avatar
July 6, 2023 at 7:05 PM
Well written, taking a sudden unexpected turn, making the impact more profoundly felt.
Volumes Avatar
July 7, 2023 at 5:41 PM
Thanks so much Ann
Nicole Avatar
July 6, 2023 at 6:06 PM
Dear SV, your thoughts touch my heart so deeply. I'm so sorry for your loss. I understand if you don't wish to share this part of your life with your husband, some moments should stay hidden. (I feel as though he would understand, because you were brought into each other's life for a reason.) He will always be a part of you. I'm holding your words so close. Congratulations on Poem of the Day. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy
Volumes Avatar
July 7, 2023 at 5:42 PM
Thanks so much Brandy. Such a nice comment.
Tor Avatar
July 6, 2023 at 5:20 PM
Im touched by Such a heartfelt piece. Congratulations on receiving POTD...
Volumes Avatar
July 7, 2023 at 5:43 PM
Thanks so much Michael.
Lawrence Avatar
July 6, 2023 at 3:25 PM
Beautiful love and memories, heartfelt loss and poignant emotions . Such a story . Thank you for sharing your pain dear S. V. Big congratulations on POTD! Susan :)
Volumes Avatar
July 7, 2023 at 5:44 PM
Thanks so much Susan for your lovely comment.
Kauffman Avatar
July 6, 2023 at 12:37 PM
Such a plaintive melody that sings in your heart SV. Love is truly amazing as it has so many facets and the ability to be applied to many people equally. And, it doesn't have a shelf life or expiration date. Congratulations on your POTD filled with irony of life and so vividly shows truly love never dies. Blessings.
Volumes Avatar
July 7, 2023 at 5:44 PM
Thanks so much Sam for your thoughtful comment
Gorelick Avatar
July 6, 2023 at 8:51 AM
Loss, grief, and wisdom painfully earned~Some secrets must be shielded, lest they wilt and crumble in the harsh sunlight. Congratulations on POTD! Robert
Volumes Avatar
July 7, 2023 at 5:47 PM
Thanks so much Robert. Your comment is appreciated my friend.
Wolf Avatar
July 6, 2023 at 8:40 AM
You're right. First love is never forgotten... Yet 'you can't go back' applies too. Congrats on POTD. Love and Luminescence, Gershon
Volumes Avatar
July 7, 2023 at 5:51 PM
Thanks so much Gershon.
Goldsmith Avatar
July 6, 2023 at 8:28 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. WOW!!! What A story/write. A wonderful yet sad write. One never forgets their first love. Your ending said it all. Have a blessed day writing away.
Volumes Avatar
July 7, 2023 at 5:50 PM
Thank you so much Paula you kind comment is appreciated.
Anaya Avatar
July 6, 2023 at 8:20 AM
A secret held in your heart is for you alone to keep deep inside. I know he would be proud that you are a sensitive and genuine poet, most deserving is your POTD Congratulations S.V.! :)
Volumes Avatar
July 7, 2023 at 5:49 PM
You are too sweet my friend, but thank you.
Goyal Avatar
July 6, 2023 at 7:47 AM
The poem has a great emotion of sadness, congrats on POTD, this was truly a great poem to read
Volumes Avatar
July 7, 2023 at 5:49 PM
Thank you very much Arastu
Read Avatar
July 6, 2023 at 7:26 AM
Ah that's so sad,I'm sure the memories don't make it any easier.
Volumes Avatar
July 7, 2023 at 5:56 PM
The giver of love is the lucky one John. I think its wonderful to love someone. To be lucky enough in my life to have met two men to have loved. One when I was only 16 and the one I married nearly 52 years ago. Thank you for your comment.
Baker Avatar
July 6, 2023 at 6:24 AM
Tragic loss of the one you love, held forever in your heart. Endearing poetry,SV. Congratulations on your POTD. Bill
Volumes Avatar
July 7, 2023 at 5:57 PM
Thanks Bill really appreciate your comment.
Cassell Avatar
July 6, 2023 at 6:20 AM
My heart went from joy to deep sadness as I read about your loss. Congatulations on poem of the day.
Volumes Avatar
July 7, 2023 at 5:59 PM
It was bitterly sad at the time, but I was left with love. Thank you for your comment Rev. Catherine.
Rodrigues Avatar
July 6, 2023 at 6:13 AM
The heart drops reading this! I can imagine many have that “secret love” the one so deep they cannot speak about him/her. Though no one knows what might have been, stuck in a moment of time. A worthy POTD! Congratulations, SV!
Volumes Avatar
July 7, 2023 at 8:46 PM
Thank you so much Kim
Ray Choudhury Avatar
July 6, 2023 at 5:48 AM
A love - true and pure - that's why we write poems. Your love is safe in your heart...heartfelt, although heartbreaking story. Dear Poet, you have expressed your love and your pain in an amazing rhyming poem. Congratulations on receiving the honour of POTD.
Volumes Avatar
July 7, 2023 at 8:46 PM
Thank you So much Malabika
Eslinger Avatar
July 6, 2023 at 4:49 AM
Oh, goodness! A True poem of Heart! 1st, yes, do Not tell your husband. I don’t think even the bible says to be Completely honest with spouse re: everything. This is a tragedy of fate, speaking volumes of emotion. I am always amazed by the paths God has us (All involved) travel in order to find our spouses! Your 1st love no doubt gave U lessons re: cherishing U know in your marriage. Thank U for sharing your beautifully written story! & thanks 4 ur read & words on my poem. HUGS!
Volumes Avatar
July 7, 2023 at 8:47 PM
Thank you sweet Sally
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July 6, 2023 at 4:22 AM
So moving Speaks Volumes, a sad ending to your first love, the memory is a treasure that belongs to only you. You’ve found happiness again, for that you are truly blessed. Congratulations on receiving the honour of poem of the day… Belle
Volumes Avatar
July 7, 2023 at 8:48 PM
Thank you so much Belle
Gentile Avatar
July 6, 2023 at 4:05 AM
I am so moved by the story of your secret love! It is so very worthy of your POTD honors! Enjoy your day !!
Volumes Avatar
July 7, 2023 at 8:49 PM
Thank you Mike
Seeker Avatar
July 6, 2023 at 3:38 AM
An amazing saga of love ~ beautifully penned, captivating! Warmest congratulations on POTD, SV
Volumes Avatar
July 7, 2023 at 5:40 PM
Thanks so much U.S.
Andresen Avatar
July 6, 2023 at 1:42 AM
- A love that must be kept hidden...but lives in your heart...heartbreaking poem...lovely written - Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. :) - hugs
Volumes Avatar
July 7, 2023 at 5:39 PM
Thanks so much Anne-Lise, I appreciate your comment my friend.
Poet Avatar
July 5, 2023 at 2:42 PM
With its breathtaking imagery and subject matter, this piece captivates the reader from the very beginning. Your distinct style infuses each word with a vibrant essence that resonates deeply within. One finds transfixed, consuming the profound spirit within these lines, akin to savoring the most delectable morsels of wisdom. The poem, with its poignant message, strikes a personal chord with the reader with its charming and dramatic subject, This is in my fave.
Volumes Avatar
July 5, 2023 at 3:09 PM
My goodness you are way too kind !. You have my promise that I shall strive to one day live up to the praise you so generously bestow. In the meantime, my heart felt thanks.
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