White Wolf Poet Sonnet

Always On My Mind:

Silhouettes dancing in a midnight moon,
As the stars join in with their twinkling lights,
Hearing their melodies playing in tune,
My spirit is soaring with glee gained heights.

I turned to face where you would be laying,
To find darkness instead of you was there,
Then I found myself amidst of saying,
How much I loved you and always would care.

Hollow these sentiments without you near,
This darkness now filled my every thought too,
Only the moon and stars above were clear,
For in truth, this heart still doth ache for you.

So alone I am with the stars tonight,
With you on my mind but not in my sight.
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Robert Lindley April 15, 2017 at 3:40 PM Somehow I missed reading this superb sonnet my friend. Stars , romance and the epic sadness of a broken heart. You created a gem of a sonnet my talented friend!! And I know a bit about sonnets..... A7 and a fav... White Wolf April 16, 2017 at 5:24 PM Yes, you do indeed! And thank you for the wonderful compliment, Robert! Hope you have had a blissful weekend mate /|\

Sara Ella April 12, 2017 at 12:39 AM Beautiful and painfully sad <3 My heart goes out to you Budgie <3 White Wolf April 12, 2017 at 12:44 AM Memories hey! Thanks so much, Sara /|\

Bawa Talwar April 11, 2017 at 8:32 AM Nice work.I loved the two last lines. Then hollow these sentiments... Longing is clearly brought out. White Wolf April 11, 2017 at 6:56 PM Thank you so much, Bawa /|\

Darren White April 11, 2017 at 1:09 AM Budgie my friend, that makes me want to hug you. HUG. White Wolf April 11, 2017 at 1:12 AM A big cyberspace hug! Haha. Thanks mate /|\

Joanna Daniel April 10, 2017 at 10:32 AM Alone but inspired, Rick:) great sonnet, a 7 from me:) White Wolf April 10, 2017 at 7:00 PM Thank you very much for popping in and commenting, Jo /|\

Chuck Melugin April 10, 2017 at 10:19 AM Wolf, you wrote this to the stars and back! Willie can eat his heart out!! Deep purple pain! My best to you, chuck White Wolf April 10, 2017 at 6:59 PM Thanks a whole bunch, Chuck /|\

Chris Green April 10, 2017 at 8:50 AM Sadly beautiful my friend. This one seeps in slowly and deeply to the heart. White Wolf April 10, 2017 at 6:58 PM I'm glad you liked it, Chris /|\

Beautiful Scars April 10, 2017 at 8:27 AM lovely rhythm in this sonnet- beautiful imagery WW... White Wolf April 10, 2017 at 6:57 PM Thank you very much, Laura /|\

Tim Smith April 10, 2017 at 7:21 AM Pull sadness into my chest... Painfully Beautiful White Wolf April 10, 2017 at 6:56 PM Thanks Tim /|\

Lisa Ricci April 10, 2017 at 6:11 AM Good Morning White Wolf. For beauty and inspiration alone this is a 7. And may I say when someone or something is within you deeply and strongly they are always in sight. Your words are marvelous. Once again you deliver timeless thoughts. Well done entirely. White Wolf April 10, 2017 at 6:55 PM Good morning Lisa, you are always welcome to grace my pages with such lovely reviews! Thank you /|\

Demetrios Trifiatis April 10, 2017 at 1:35 AM Sonnet of celestial beauty my friend, WW. A 7! White Wolf April 10, 2017 at 1:41 AM Thank you very much for your words, Demetrios /|\

Elizabeth Kinch April 10, 2017 at 1:24 AM An emotive sonnet that touched my heart. Well written White Wolf and a seven White Wolf April 10, 2017 at 1:29 AM Thank you for your visit and comment /|\