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Always on my mind:

Silhouettes dancing in a midnight moon, As the stars join in with their twinkling lights, Hearing their melodies playing in tune, My spirit is soaring with glee gained heights. I turned to face where you would be laying, To find darkness instead of you was there, Then I found myself amidst of saying, How much I loved you and always would care. Hollow these sentiments without you near, This darkness now filled my every thought too, Only the moon and stars above were clear, For in truth, this heart still doth ache for you. So alone I am with the stars tonight, With you on my mind but not in my sight. /|\

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Date: 4/15/2017 3:40:00 PM
Somehow I missed reading this superb sonnet my friend. Stars , romance and the epic sadness of a broken heart. You created a gem of a sonnet my talented friend!! And I know a bit about sonnets..... A7 and a fav...
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Date: 4/16/2017 5:24:00 PM
Yes, you do indeed! And thank you for the wonderful compliment, Robert! Hope you have had a blissful weekend mate /|\
Date: 4/12/2017 12:39:00 AM
Beautiful and painfully sad <3 My heart goes out to you Budgie <3
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Date: 4/12/2017 12:44:00 AM
Memories hey! Thanks so much, Sara /|\
Date: 4/11/2017 8:32:00 AM
Nice work.I loved the two last lines. Then hollow these sentiments... Longing is clearly brought out.
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Date: 4/11/2017 6:56:00 PM
Thank you so much, Bawa /|\
Date: 4/11/2017 1:09:00 AM
Budgie my friend, that makes me want to hug you. HUG.
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Date: 4/11/2017 1:12:00 AM
A big cyberspace hug! Haha. Thanks mate /|\
Date: 4/10/2017 10:32:00 AM
Alone but inspired, Rick:) great sonnet, a 7 from me:)
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White Wolf
Date: 4/10/2017 7:00:00 PM
Thank you very much for popping in and commenting, Jo /|\
Date: 4/10/2017 10:19:00 AM
Wolf, you wrote this to the stars and back! Willie can eat his heart out!! Deep purple pain! My best to you, chuck
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White Wolf
Date: 4/10/2017 6:59:00 PM
Thanks a whole bunch, Chuck /|\
Date: 4/10/2017 8:50:00 AM
Sadly beautiful my friend. This one seeps in slowly and deeply to the heart.
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Date: 4/10/2017 6:58:00 PM
I'm glad you liked it, Chris /|\
Date: 4/10/2017 8:27:00 AM
lovely rhythm in this sonnet- beautiful imagery WW...
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Date: 4/10/2017 6:57:00 PM
Thank you very much, Laura /|\
Date: 4/10/2017 7:21:00 AM
Pull sadness into my chest... Painfully Beautiful
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Date: 4/10/2017 6:56:00 PM
Thanks Tim /|\
Date: 4/10/2017 6:11:00 AM
Good Morning White Wolf. For beauty and inspiration alone this is a 7. And may I say when someone or something is within you deeply and strongly they are always in sight. Your words are marvelous. Once again you deliver timeless thoughts. Well done entirely.
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White Wolf
Date: 4/10/2017 6:55:00 PM
Good morning Lisa, you are always welcome to grace my pages with such lovely reviews! Thank you /|\
Date: 4/10/2017 1:35:00 AM
Sonnet of celestial beauty my friend, WW. A 7!
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White Wolf
Date: 4/10/2017 1:41:00 AM
Thank you very much for your words, Demetrios /|\
Date: 4/10/2017 1:24:00 AM
An emotive sonnet that touched my heart. Well written White Wolf and a seven
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Date: 4/10/2017 1:29:00 AM
Thank you for your visit and comment /|\