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I have borrowed the first line of this piece from the"unknown scribe" , which I read many years ago.... The rest is for ALL the great mothers who are SOUPER. Who took me from my cosy cot And sat me on an ice cold pot . To make me pee ,when I could not.......... My mother Who fed me from the very start With bosomed milk , straight from the heart Then burped me, 'till I'd belch and fart...... My mother Who warmed me from the Winter breeze Dried the blood from my skinned knees But told me "fibs" 'bout birds'n bees..........My mother Who healed me when I had a chill And nursery rhymed me Jack and Jill But lied to Dad , about being on the pill...... My mother Who coaxed me past the school day bell Smiled and said .. all would be well But then went home and cried like Hell.......My mother Who was protector from life's curse Was doctor , dentist , priest and nurse Friendly Bank ,with open purse...................My mother Who lies beneath this cold grey stone In peace ,at last , and all alone The first true love that I had known.................. Mam x

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Date: 4/17/2015 6:08:00 PM
Love it! Thanks
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Date: 4/15/2013 9:31:00 PM
Sean, a nice and awesome win... Congratulations with your awesome #1. I love many of Andrea's favorite poems. always~ Good Night* PD
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Date: 4/15/2013 2:03:00 PM
Congrats Sean... on your beautiful win.
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Date: 4/14/2013 5:58:00 PM
This is beautiful j
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Date: 4/14/2013 5:07:00 PM
Sean this is wonderful. You have won the heart of every mother on this site. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 4/14/2013 11:45:00 AM
This is really very beautiful! Big warm congratulations on your grand win my dear Sean! love/hugs, Leonora
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Date: 4/14/2013 10:34:00 AM
many congratulations on your double win Sean, first as a fave and now this xx
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Date: 4/14/2013 10:04:00 AM
i absolutely LOVE this poem! it is so tender and powerful but also beautifully rhymed in a very clever way. congratulations on your win - very well-deserved!
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Date: 2/3/2013 6:57:00 AM
Sean, I've been looking 'back' and found this delightful piece! Lucky me... Terry
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Date: 12/7/2012 1:29:00 PM
An oldie but a goodie. Light & Love
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Date: 4/6/2010 1:45:00 PM
My congratulations on this winning poem, a charmer, tender, cheerful, funny, and sad...all rolled into one lovely tribute to all mothers. Great work!! ~ Love, Carrie
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Date: 4/5/2010 9:53:00 PM
Congrats for the win. Nice tribute
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Date: 4/5/2010 8:51:00 PM
wow, this is really cool. The funniest and most entertaining in the bunch. Don't get me wrong, the other winners are amazing. But I gotta fav this one becuase a few parts made me giggle. LUv, andrea
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Date: 4/5/2010 6:23:00 AM
Congrats Sean on your winning poem in Debbie's contest.. a lovely write and brilliant lines of luv and a wonderful well deserved win..luv.. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 2/18/2009 7:35:00 PM
Sean, this is an awesome poem. It's funny and endearing with that ending that tugs the heartstrings. Love this brilliant write. QR
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