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Always Aware

Note the golden morning sun, red and orange, blue aeonian sky Silver reflections of moonlight cast on dead of night still waters Window light that shines so bright welcoming you at night The way your smile reaches all the way up into your eyes Smell the boulevards rain-washed and bitter-sweet, hot coffee Spicy, earth-rich pipe smoke and baking chocolate chip cookies Lovers embrace with musky skin, a dozen roses perfume is heady That unique scent the very first time inside your brand new Chevy The good sheets - 600 count - fresh from a hot dryer Sitting in the window seat basking in the sunlight's heat Long or short, with every stroke, snuggle-soft is kitten's fur Favorite faded holey jeans, shoes no one else would wear Good morning songs from birds nearby, kitten's rumble purr Soothing rain patters on the roof then booming rolls of thunder Chirping frogs and bugs in grasses, the chattering leaves in trees Waves that lap upon the sand, a sexy spoken please This group of friends who share with open minds that care Patiently listening Always there may I always be aware.

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Date: 6/17/2017 10:13:00 AM
Hello friend. Its been a while. LORD! This is just vintage you! Excellent, Awesome and a master in this covetous craft of writing. Keep on flowing the ink of your mind. A 7 for sure.
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Sara Ella
Date: 6/18/2017 11:17:00 PM
Thank you Funom Makama :)
Date: 5/13/2017 4:52:00 PM
Lovely poem, Sara. And, yes, I'd say you are well aware.
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Sara Ella
Date: 5/13/2017 4:57:00 PM
:) Thank you Carole. <3
Date: 4/29/2017 8:47:00 PM
Sara you did well a great write.
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Sara Ella
Date: 4/29/2017 11:06:00 PM
Thank you Darlene :D
Date: 4/25/2017 11:56:00 PM
A wonderful write Sara. :)
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Sara Ella
Date: 4/26/2017 8:13:00 AM
Thank you Amy :)
Date: 4/11/2017 12:30:00 AM
Wow, Sara! Extraordinary work here! Well worth the wait! Can't wait for more from you mate!
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Sara Ella
Date: 4/11/2017 8:13:00 PM
Thank you Budgie :) You are an inspiration, my friend <3
Date: 4/5/2017 7:26:00 AM
- Enjoy reading this, Sara - A lovely poem :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Sara Ella
Date: 4/5/2017 8:48:00 PM
Thank you Anne-Lise :) Hugs back! <3
Date: 4/4/2017 5:42:00 AM
Good Morning Sara. It was wonderful to see a post by you. Allow me to say if you can express words such as this you are aware and are blessed. You have wonderful and marvelous poetic expressions. I loved the incorporation of the 600 count sheets. That was clever. And yes PoetrySoup members are always there. Have a wonderful morning Sara. Well done
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Sara Ella
Date: 4/4/2017 7:25:00 AM
Good Morning Lisa and thank you for your kind words :) PS friends <3 I hope you have an awesome day too!
Date: 4/3/2017 12:29:00 AM
Such nice words, friends as this are priceless.
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Sara Ella
Date: 4/3/2017 5:08:00 AM
Thank you Aurore. :) Friends are the best-yes!
Date: 4/2/2017 8:42:00 PM
I came to read this again, and still "simply beautiful"
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Sara Ella
Date: 4/2/2017 8:57:00 PM
Blushing here for your complement. Thank you Arthur <3
Date: 4/1/2017 1:25:00 PM
Soft, warm, and inviting Sara...very beautiful. Those sheets right out of the dryer are like a little slice of heaven.
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Sara Ella
Date: 4/1/2017 1:53:00 PM
Thank you Tim :) and thank you too for your help on this! <3
Date: 4/1/2017 12:34:00 PM
Wonderful Sara! I love it how you changed your poem :) And yes, we care! <3
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Sara Ella
Date: 4/1/2017 1:50:00 PM
Thank you Darren! :D Your advise was perfect and your friendship is priceless <3
Date: 4/1/2017 12:57:00 AM
Simply beautiful!
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Sara Ella
Date: 4/1/2017 9:06:00 AM
Thank you Arthur :)