Always and Until

It lies chilling in his freezer, 
tucked away and in repose, 
always ready with an answer, 
like a soothsayer who knows 

his reckless need for distilled spirits, 
vodka is his danger zone, 
alcohol's his habit 
and he always drinks alone. 

Spending all his welfare dough 
on substitutes for nourishment, 
the cheapest brands, with shaking hands 
he squanders his entitlement. 

Simple, yet so complicated, 
joy and sorrow flow so fast, 
like water off a penguin's back, 
until the die be cast. 

It never was to take the edge off, 
gulp, the medicine goes down, 
empty bottle, he's not breathing, 
takes his final trip downtown.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 12/12/2015 2:07:00 PM
Splendidly penned... a sad tale!!!
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Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 12/13/2015 5:13:00 PM
Thanks so much... Best wishes, Keith
Date: 12/12/2015 12:50:00 AM
Nice postscript of a drunk. Good job keith
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Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 12/12/2015 6:21:00 AM
Many thanks my friend... Keith
Date: 12/11/2015 7:06:00 PM
Dear Keith The sad part is I know a whole family like this, there whole world is nothing but the bottle everyday, they live off the elderly ladies check to full fill there addition and drag her down with them, what a life to live great poem here, you've put down, so honestly written, so sad of a truth, what a world some people live without meaning except for there fix, take care and thanks also for your review of my poems as well, cheri
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Date: 12/11/2015 5:37:00 PM
Dealing with any addiction must be so so difficult - I've a friend who is an alcoholic it is ruining her marriage and their business. The third stanza is so true - sadly people lose their jobs, marriages and dignity as a result of the demon drink :-( fabulous write Keith:-) hugs Jan xx7
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Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 12/11/2015 6:34:00 PM
Thanks Jan... I was going to give him a redeeming feature, something that would pull him through, but then it wouldn't be the same poem, would it? Best wishes, Keith
Date: 12/11/2015 9:46:00 AM
A good poem that highlights the pain and misery brought about by the abuse of alcohol. The demon drink has been responsible for more heartaches than anything else in our times. Well written. Emile.
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Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 12/11/2015 9:51:00 AM
Thanks so much for your insightful commentary my friend. Best wishes, Keith
Date: 12/11/2015 8:54:00 AM
Powerful stuff! Thanks for sharing! ~ Micilo
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Date: 12/11/2015 9:10:00 AM
Thanks so much... your comment is much appreciated. Keith
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