Always and Forever - the Lanturne Style

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~ Always And Forever ~ ( Lanturne Suite ) Hold You so Close always Your loves in my Heart Your Love makes Me happy With you my heart Sings Each Day I Desire more Your love dream of You You Are so Beautiful Through you I feel Love Each Day you're A blessing You're in my heart Thoughts I Love you Always and Forever my Love. Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2017 July.14.2017 “Kindness is a language which the deaf can hear and the blind can see.” - Mark Twain- ~Author's Notes: The "Lanturne or Lanterne" is a syllabic Japanese form or style shaped like a lantern.

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Gary Bateman

Date: 7/16/2017 11:05:00 AM

Hello D!! I must say that you are truly the master of these types of specialized poetic formats. These, as with other formats I've worked with, are highly restrictive and challenging, but the end result as with "Always and Forever" in this instance here is truly magical and most marvelous. Outstanding Work!! And an instant FAVE in my book!! Best Wishes from Ingrid and me, and I will likewise stay in touch!! Best Always, G!!

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 7/17/2017 7:34:00 AM

Hello G!:))Thank you ever so kindly my very dear friend Gary,for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my Lanturne love poem. I deeply appreciate it all.You're always so kind to me,G!:)) Well, I really hope that all is well for you and Ingrid and with your book on progress as well also .Looking forward to reading it when you release it.Sending my love n' prayers to you and Ingrid as always:)Take very good care of each other always,G.Best wishes to both of you too! Spill ink!:)Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light God bless you always!:))D.

Russell Sivey

Date: 7/15/2017 7:47:00 AM

This is a very beautiful series of Lanternes! You seem to have mastered the art of the form very nicely and fit what you wanted to say neatly within the confines of the restrictive form! This can be a very challenging form and you have done very well with in! I truly enjoyed reading your lovely poems here today, what a fabulous piece! Great Work!!

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 7/17/2017 7:36:00 AM

Thank you ever so kindly Russell, for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my love poem.Deeply appreciated it all!:))You're so very kind.Wishing you a very lovely week!In his light God bless you always!:))D