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Always and Forever - the Lanturne Style

~ Always  And  Forever ~
( Lanturne  Suite )



Hold
You  so
Close   always
Your  loves  in my
Heart

Your 
Love  makes
Me  happy
With  you my heart
Sings

Each 
Day I
Desire more
Your  love  dream  of
You

You
Are  so
Beautiful
Through  you  I  feel
Love

Each 
Day you're
A  blessing 
You're in my heart
Thoughts

I 
Love you
Always  and
Forever my
Love.



Dorian  Petersen  Potter
aka ladydp2000
copyright@2017



July.14.2017


“Kindness is a language which the deaf can hear and the blind can see.” 
- Mark Twain- 


~Author's Notes:

The "Lanturne or Lanterne" is a syllabic Japanese form or style shaped like a lantern.

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Gary Bateman Date: 7/16/2017 11:05:00 AM Hello D!! I must say that you are truly the master of these types of specialized poetic formats. These, as with other formats I've worked with, are highly restrictive and challenging, but the end result as with "Always and Forever" in this instance here is truly magical and most marvelous. Outstanding Work!! And an instant FAVE in my book!! Best Wishes from Ingrid and me, and I will likewise stay in touch!! Best Always, G!! Login to Reply Dorian Petersen Potter Date: 7/17/2017 7:34:00 AM Hello G!:))Thank you ever so kindly my very dear friend Gary,for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my Lanturne love poem. I deeply appreciate it all.You're always so kind to me,G!:)) Well, I really hope that all is well for you and Ingrid and with your book on progress as well also .Looking forward to reading it when you release it.Sending my love n' prayers to you and Ingrid as always:)Take very good care of each other always,G.Best wishes to both of you too! Spill ink!:)Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light God bless you always!:))D.

Russell Sivey Date: 7/15/2017 7:47:00 AM This is a very beautiful series of Lanternes! You seem to have mastered the art of the form very nicely and fit what you wanted to say neatly within the confines of the restrictive form! This can be a very challenging form and you have done very well with in! I truly enjoyed reading your lovely poems here today, what a fabulous piece! Great Work!! Login to Reply Dorian Petersen Potter Date: 7/17/2017 7:36:00 AM Thank you ever so kindly Russell, for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my love poem.Deeply appreciated it all!:))You're so very kind.Wishing you a very lovely week!In his light God bless you always!:))D