Although You'Re Not Here

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These are some thoughts on how I would feel if I was not with the one that I cared a whole lot about. Enjoy:-) Alexis

Although you’re not here I can feel you I can feel you Although you're not here I can see “you” in your written words I can see “you” in your written words Although you're not here When I hear your voice it's like you're wrapping your arms around me When I hear your voice it's like you’re wrapping your arms around me Although you're not here The tone of voice says I love The tone of voice says I love 4-1-17 Alexis Y.

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Eileen Manassian

Date: 4/7/2017 5:32:00 AM

How romantic, dear one....how romantic. :) Sending hugs...

Paul Callus

Date: 4/4/2017 5:23:00 PM

This can be put to music, Alexis. There is no doubt that these words will sound as music to the person they're addressed to! ~ Regards // paul

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 4/2/2017 2:42:00 PM

Very spiritual poem, Alexis. Such a serene meditative quality about this piece of poetry. It's like a soulful chant, very pleasing to read. Wonderful poem. A 7! Love and hugs to you, dear.