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Alpine Meadow

High in the alpine meadow, as flat on my back I lie, My privacy is absolute, surrounded by the sky. The blue lupines around me, in wild abandon grow. Loveliness so unearthly must be Heaven's over-flow. My horse is grazing near me, tethered only by his bell. He needs no rope, he is under ultimate beauty's spell. My body feels as weightless as when I was a child. My mind is empty of all care, in this place undefiled. A waterfall comes trickling down for all the drink I need. Must I go back to life below, with all its frantic speed? I try to push the thought away, returning to the thrill Of being in this paradise, with all this time to kill. The deer have been here all alone, before I wandered in. They show know fear of me at all, I feel as though we're kin. They have no knowledge of the way we've treated earth below. I am careful not to tell them, it is better they don't know. I'll leave no trace of being here to mar this pristine place, But will keep its lovely memory to calm and help me face The mundane worries of each day that feed my daily grind And hold the wonder in my heart of this my secret find.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 4/29/2012 4:34:00 PM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week, Joyce! You have written a beautiful Narrative told with thrilling emotion, joy and nostalgia! I love the Alpine landscape with the blue lupines and deer. It's an escape from the mundane living. I quote your last line, " And hold the wonder in my heart of this my secret find. " Thanks for your comments on my poetry. Have a wonderful Sunday. Hugs, Andrew.
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Date: 4/29/2012 3:42:00 PM
I've read many poems destining other places, but very few ever hit a stride or caliber as this serene subtle piece. Thanks for sharing it with us.
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Date: 4/29/2012 7:26:00 AM
Absolutely love this! Reminds me of some of my favorite childhood memories :)
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Date: 4/28/2012 7:14:00 PM
Hi Joyce, I enjoyed this poem very much. The words are lovely and the rhythm is perfect! Beautiful ...Samia
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Date: 4/27/2012 6:38:00 AM
congrats on feature and nice poem...Patrick
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Date: 4/26/2012 2:50:00 PM
I'd like to visit that place you describe so well. Congrats on the selection. daver
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Date: 4/26/2012 8:45:00 AM
Congratulations on your featured poem!
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Date: 4/24/2012 7:08:00 PM
Congrats Joyce on the featuring of "Alpine Meadow."
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Date: 4/22/2012 11:10:00 PM
What a joy to be able to visit "Heaven's overflow" with you. Delightfully crafted. - Chuck
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Date: 11/18/2008 10:42:00 AM
What a wonderful place to be and beauty to witness. This is indeed a place of comfort and serenity all presented in a beautiful read. Love this! Michael
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