Along With The Thunder

I am chaos,
the storm that shatters silence —
thunder rolling through the wreckage,
still breathing, still burning, still me.

They hurt me.
Often.
And I stayed.
Not because I was weak —
but because I believed people were more
than their wounds.

I saw the hidden cracks no one else did.
I loved anyway.

But the tether snapped.
No longer do I chase the lightning
that scars but never warms.

I care — but I don’t cling.
I remember — but I don’t return.

No hatred resides here —
only a quiet goodbye
to the thousand selves who thought love meant bleeding.

I am the fire,
the lightning’s flash —
the storm’s calm eye.

I am Chaostrude.
Not a title.
A becoming.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025



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Date: 6/2/2025 12:24:00 PM
Becoming, heartiest congratulations on your win in my contest with this wonderful debut write! Welcome to Poetrysoup!
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Date: 6/3/2025 12:51:00 AM
Thank you so much, Edward! I’m truly honored and thrilled that "Along With The Thunder" resonated with you. Winning your contest with my very first entry means a lot. I'm grateful for the warm welcome—looking forward to growing and sharing more poetry here on PoetrySoup!
Date: 5/26/2025 4:05:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 5/26/2025 4:20:00 AM
Thank you so much for your kind words and warm welcome! I truly appreciate the love and encouragement you've shared. Your reminder from John 3:16 is deeply touching—faith, love, and the beauty of the human spirit are at the heart of what I write. Wishing you blessings and light on your journey as well. Grateful to be part of this community.
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