Along the Water In Marseille

A charming town, with bobbing boats
And restaurants or small cafes,
Finds us all bundled in our coats 
On this, the gloomiest of days.

The rain, though, takes a little break;
The Ferris wheel goes 'round and 'round.
At booths with crafts that people make
We see what items can be found.

A market filled with fish for sale 
Attracts us with its fresh array
Of creatures stretched from teeth to tail,
A strange and glistening display.

The locals mingle, doing chores,
With tourists taking in the scene 
As traffic flows and all the stores
Compete as customers convene.

I'd hoped for sun, but I'll admit 
That clouds and raindrops couldn't dent
The dazzle of Marseille, for it
Has charm you couldn't circumvent.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Allison Avatar
December 4, 2018 at 4:43 PM
what wonderful imagery Ilene i don;t need a picture to visualise the scene:-) hope you are having a wonderful time:-) hugs Janx x
Leffanta Avatar
November 30, 2018 at 1:22 PM
I admire your verses and ability to see the bright side even when the sun does not shine! Aloha! Rico
Green Avatar
November 30, 2018 at 9:20 AM
Ok now you are just rubbing it in. :) Nice one Ilene and it sounds like you are having a fantastic trip and that is wonderful, even if I am stuck sitting here behind a mountain of paperwork on my desk. : ) Oh great, I just noticed the Captcha to validate my comment is BAR. Another thing I can't partake of because I am at work. :)
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