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Along the Water In Marseille

A charming town, with bobbing boats And restaurants or small cafes, Finds us all bundled in our coats On this, the gloomiest of days. The rain, though, takes a little break; The Ferris wheel goes 'round and 'round. At booths with crafts that people make We see what items can be found. A market filled with fish for sale Attracts us with its fresh array Of creatures stretched from teeth to tail, A strange and glistening display. The locals mingle, doing chores, With tourists taking in the scene As traffic flows and all the stores Compete as customers convene. I'd hoped for sun, but I'll admit That clouds and raindrops couldn't dent The dazzle of Marseille, for it Has charm you couldn't circumvent.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 12/4/2018 4:43:00 PM
what wonderful imagery Ilene i don;t need a picture to visualise the scene:-) hope you are having a wonderful time:-) hugs Janx x
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Date: 11/30/2018 1:22:00 PM
I admire your verses and ability to see the bright side even when the sun does not shine! Aloha! Rico
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Date: 11/30/2018 9:20:00 AM
Ok now you are just rubbing it in. :) Nice one Ilene and it sounds like you are having a fantastic trip and that is wonderful, even if I am stuck sitting here behind a mountain of paperwork on my desk. : ) Oh great, I just noticed the Captcha to validate my comment is BAR. Another thing I can't partake of because I am at work. :)
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