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Along the Shore of Evermore

I STEP down from the boardwalk and into a land  moved by the forces of the universe.

I feel the earth move under my feet as I walk on mountains crushed to grains of sand by these forces and the passing of time since the birth of planet Earth.

Ringing in my ears, beating in my heart, running through my veins -  the thunder of an ancient drum as the ocean rises  and falls to the will of the wind.

I mark my passing with footprints in the sand while my mind  empties itself of everything but  this moment.

 I walk toward a purple line in the distance, yearning  to know what is there...yearning to touch it.

I lean against a warm wind  that blows away the ribbons from my hair and all the troubles  of a world gone mad.


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Moment-by-moment... time becomes a thing of the past as I reach for that purple line. 


On and on and on - I walk to the beat of that ancient drum - through the wind and ocean brine - through the setting of the sun -  ON AND ON AND ON. Still,  its seems I'm no closer to that line.

~~~

As the moon begins to rise, I turn back.
~~~

My morning footprints have all disappeared. The forces of the universe have erased  every trace,  I was ever here.

I STOP... and look up at the moon and all the  uncountable stars that hang there ... motionless among the endless galaxies, over an ocean now at rest.

AND IN THIS MOMENT... I AM  ONE WITH ALL THERE IS...AS I STARE INTO
THE FACE OF GOD.


~~~

Written:  February 17th, 2016

Elaine Cecelia George of Canada
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Roberts Avatar
February 26, 2017 at 6:46 PM
Powerful images, enjoyed. I did one on the shore for what I think was a pastoral request.
George   Avatar
February 28, 2017 at 2:48 PM
Thank you for stopping by, Donna...and for your kind and most appreciated comments. Elaine
Duet Avatar
January 2, 2017 at 2:55 AM
Beautiful poem, Elaine. Carole Duet
George   Avatar
January 17, 2017 at 6:22 AM
Thank you for stopping by and for your kind comments, Carole. Elaine
Anish Avatar
June 27, 2016 at 1:03 PM
Reminds me of the song by Led zeppelin "The Battle of Evermore". Powerful work!! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
Horsman Avatar
April 18, 2016 at 11:11 AM
Wow love the imagery. read this twice, it is so good.
George   Avatar
April 29, 2016 at 4:44 AM
Thank you for stopping by, Harry, and for your comments...much appreciated. Elaine
Deschler Avatar
April 3, 2016 at 9:51 PM
Such wonder and beauty in these moving words and images... An exquisite poem, Elaine!
George   Avatar
April 4, 2016 at 5:29 PM
Thank you for stopping by and for your much appreciated comments, Kelly.
Austin Avatar
March 25, 2016 at 11:57 AM
Ooooowwwww, this trip is wonderful! Becoming one is the truth of existence to my mind. "The forces have erased every trace." Yes! Love, daver
Marcum Wong Avatar
March 21, 2016 at 1:11 PM
Feeling one with the creator is a blessing your poem expresses so beautifully Elaine! #7
George   Avatar
April 29, 2016 at 4:46 AM
Thank you for stopping by, Connie, and for your much appreciated comments. Elaine
Dunn Avatar
March 20, 2016 at 6:41 PM
Dear Elaine Powerful and brilliant, you have set a new mark for inspirational verse here my friend, wow the last lines are awe swept, marvelous work, cheri
George   Avatar
April 29, 2016 at 4:45 AM
Thank you for your kind comments, Cheri. Elaine
Tudor Avatar
February 24, 2016 at 10:51 AM
I am from the desert southwest, and I have had many of these moments while walking beneath the grand expanses of mesa and mountain. A wonderful and enjoyable piece.
George   Avatar
March 20, 2016 at 8:39 AM
Thank you for stopping by and for your kind comments, J. Tudor. Much appreciated! Elaine
Emu Avatar
February 23, 2016 at 7:33 PM
You hold the power of imagery here in this poem. Very touching piece. Kindly Craig
George   Avatar
February 28, 2016 at 5:28 PM
Thank you so much for your kind comments, Craig. Elaine
Williams Gault Avatar
February 23, 2016 at 7:33 AM
Such peace in this, the ebb and flow of nature, and you being as one with it. Wonderful write.
George   Avatar
February 23, 2016 at 12:15 PM
Thank you for stopping by and for your kind comments, Dineen. Much appreciated. Elaine
Bugnacki Avatar
February 19, 2016 at 4:03 AM
Beautiful poem!-KB <3
George   Avatar
February 20, 2016 at 4:57 AM
Thank you so much for dropping by and for your kind comments, Katie. Much appreciated. Elaine
Fleming Avatar
February 19, 2016 at 3:52 AM
I think every mortal being looks up at the great sprawling firmaments from their little corner of the universe, and thinks to themselves: "What is this place"? Beautifully expressed, Elaine! A seven. My very best regards :-) john
George   Avatar
February 20, 2016 at 4:55 AM
Thank you so much for dropping by and for your kind comments, John. Much appreciated. Elaine
Lindley Avatar
February 18, 2016 at 11:58 AM
Truly well written free verse with a very inspiring message my friend. "AND IN THIS MOMENT... I AM ONE WITH ALL THERE IS...AS I STARE INTO INFINITY." That infinity is God. A7
George   Avatar
February 20, 2016 at 4:53 AM
Thank you so much for dropping by and for your kind comments, Robert. Much appreciated. Elaine
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 17, 2016 at 5:44 PM
This is really a beautiful poem Elaine! I read it out loud and my granddaughter said how pretty it was. It makes me happy that she appreciates poetry. Hugs, Connie
George   Avatar
February 17, 2016 at 10:42 PM
Thank you, Connie , and thank you to your granddaughter. How nice that you share the love of poetry together. You are truly blessed. Elaine
Dietrich Avatar
February 17, 2016 at 3:18 PM
this is amazing, dear. Wow, one of your very best!! I love it.
George   Avatar
February 17, 2016 at 3:40 PM
Thank you so much Andrea. That means a lot to me. Elaine
Bickerstaffe Avatar
February 17, 2016 at 2:57 PM
Simply gorgeous Elaine! Powerful phrasing and outstanding imagery. '...the ocean rises and falls to the will of the wind,' '...as I stare into infinity,' marvelous!! Well done Elaine! Best wishes Keith
George   Avatar
February 17, 2016 at 3:04 PM
Thank you for stopping by and for your valued comments, Keith. Elaine
Smith Avatar
February 17, 2016 at 2:33 PM
Was the purple line the sun setting on the horizon? I imagined taking each step along side you.
George   Avatar
February 17, 2016 at 2:38 PM
Thank you so much, Tim. That line changes color depending of the mood of the day. Elaine
Andresen Avatar
February 17, 2016 at 2:10 PM
- Sounds like a "living dream ", a lovely poem dear Elaine :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
George   Avatar
February 17, 2016 at 2:17 PM
Thank you Anne Lise. Elaine
Callus Avatar
February 17, 2016 at 2:03 PM
Full marks for a wonderful outlook on captivating moments in time, Elaine. You had me there following in your footsteps while tasting some of your own emotions. I shall be reading this again before I move on...! [just a thought...this could be transformed into a haibun by inserting a couple of haiku in the right places...] Regards // paul
George   Avatar
February 17, 2016 at 2:06 PM
Yes it could. I will give it some thought once I tend to all my soup comments. Thanks for all your so valued support, Paul. It is much appreciated. Elaine
Dahlusion Avatar
February 17, 2016 at 11:35 AM
Yes, you are one with all. A lovely write.
George   Avatar
February 17, 2016 at 12:09 PM
Thank you, Dah. Elaine
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