Along the Riverbank

The luminescence of low hanging mist whirls
Agitated winds shiver the tall cottonwoods
The ever present sound of the old river passing
She stands on the small rustic pier daydreaming

Watching the waters carry an old tugboat south
She waves as the captain sounds his sad horn
A breeze catches the hem of her dress, lifting it upward
Her long slender legs and bare feet exposed to morning rays

 A single teardrop falls from her troubled eye
She knows she will soon be leaving this magical place
Traveling far to the western desert, and away from her folks
She turns and leaves, making her way up the wet path

She ponders her anxious future amid the vines of honeysuckle
The smell of bacon soon fills her senses as her home appears
Smoke curling down from the antique stone chimney
Porch steps squeak, the screen door slaps, she has decided  

© Copyrights G. Jones 2006
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Buys Avatar
September 18, 2008 at 4:24 PM
Congratulations on having this very vivid and visual poem featured this week. Well done. Regards Heidie
Jordan Avatar
September 15, 2008 at 8:23 AM
Gary what an amazing poem - congrats on having it featured
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September 15, 2008 at 7:08 AM
Long time no hear. Congrats Gary, on "Along the Riverbank" being featured this week on Poetry Soup. Vince
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September 15, 2008 at 6:15 AM
Congratulations Gary on your amazing poetry being featured this week. Love this write. Love, Shar
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September 14, 2008 at 11:45 PM
Congrats on your deserved feature write this week Gary.One for my favourites listing I think.Rgds Brian
Mason Avatar
September 14, 2008 at 9:35 PM
A painted picture in words here for sure, Gary. Makes me want to know what she decided ... LOL ... congratulations on a very well-deserved selection as a favorite this week!
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