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strolling all alone at the ocean shore embracing the cold breeze of a new sunrise I feel the freshness of the soft and gentle wind touching tenderly my whole being as you again fill my mind I hear the yodel of the small waves every melody conveys message leaving behind the memories I’ll forever cherish once in a while, waves walk towards me I can feel the tenderness of their kisses they wrap around with soft sand on my feet great relief and happiness I feel the scent of the peaceful ocean wafted on air I smell its therapeutic power for all my pains as I start to see a new sunshine I’m sure tomorrow I’ll be fine only scars are left behind to remind me to keep stronger as I’ll move on in my life
Nov. 25, 2012 First Place Contest: Any Poem Goes Judged:3/6/13 Poet Sponsor: My Greatest Poet PD Fourth Place Contest: Synesthesia Judged: 5/26/13 Sponsor: Nette Onclaud

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Date: 5/27/2013 4:32:00 PM
Congrad's on your win Light & Love
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Date: 5/27/2013 12:36:00 PM
It brings alive the senses on a seaside walk with you. Congratulations on your win. Love SuZ
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Date: 5/27/2013 5:01:00 AM
Many Congratulations leo lovexx
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Date: 5/26/2013 7:09:00 PM
big congrats on this great write and win Leonora
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Date: 5/26/2013 6:33:00 PM
Leonora congratulations on your win. The ocean definable has therapeutic powers. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 3/7/2013 10:23:00 AM
Congrats Leo luv what a cracking write this is xx
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Date: 3/7/2013 9:03:00 AM
Congrats my deaR friend on your great win....good luck to all your entries :) God bless you always!!
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Date: 3/7/2013 8:18:00 AM
Congrats on a wonderful write.
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Date: 3/7/2013 1:45:00 AM
Leonora congrats on you win. Connie
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Date: 3/6/2013 9:45:00 PM
I could not help it but love your poem, once again. Leonora, my favorite and dearest sis... thank you for taking the time in entering my contest... xox~pd
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Date: 3/6/2013 7:42:00 PM
congrats on your win LG...
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Date: 3/6/2013 4:53:00 PM
Very nice. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 2/16/2013 4:49:00 AM
just amazing
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Date: 2/14/2013 4:49:00 PM
I see you are sea lover, Leonora...Me too!...Like you I believe it has healing powers, both physical and mental...Wonderful poem, my friend - Tim
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Date: 2/9/2013 12:06:00 PM
such an Inspiring and free feeling write Leonora, I had a strong sense of your emotional input through the lines you have crafted here; I must also thank you for giving me the winning placement in your contest many thanks Joe..
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Date: 1/28/2013 12:26:00 PM
A beautiful morning for tender thoughts. You have done a great job on this one.
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Date: 12/5/2012 3:32:00 AM
What a lovely poem you have penned here. Brings back fond memories from Myrtle Beach. From your line "only scars are left behind" I visualize getting the scars only when in the wrong waters and getting in too deep. Great write!
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Date: 12/5/2012 12:56:00 AM
Liked this poignant write, Leonora, thnx for the visit!!Jag
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Date: 12/4/2012 8:12:00 AM
hey, sweetie, I have to go off now but I just wanted to say hello. Hoping to see a new post from you soon. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 12/4/2012 4:41:00 AM
This Poem is a Gem created by you my friend. While reading its beautiful lines I was feeling the touch of the wind and the sound of the waves roaring on the surface of the sea. Great write Leonora. The cool effect of this Poem is no less than a mild pain balm for those who feel a joy in the lap of Nature and thank you for your valuable appreciations of my PINK PINK PINK poem. Love and best wishes always...Ravindra K..... Leonora Galinta
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Date: 12/3/2012 9:27:00 AM
Leonara, it must be very relief to be in the place where you stood and spilled the beauty on your sole. I found some sadness in here, but for your brave heart said everything are going to be alright, indeed you are. You are the independent soul whose strong and well grown in your maturity of mind, all written clear among your verses dear Leo, I wish you will regained your spirit back stitch by stitch, soon- Hug, Yanny
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Date: 12/1/2012 9:25:00 AM
Beautiful scene and thoughts are packed with nice words here,Lenora
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Date: 11/30/2012 7:52:00 PM
Hello Leo... missing you... are you okay?? Have not heard from you... sending you soup mail...xox~pd
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Date: 11/30/2012 4:28:00 PM
Great write Leonora, i love seaside strolls, gets the creative juices flowing, blessings, Carl
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Date: 11/29/2012 1:52:00 PM
this is wonderfulll Leonora, such emotions brings this poem to life...
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