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gilt leaves are falling at the last thrill of summer life is filled with change sunshine fills the noon scattering leaves cars go by on a tree lined street brisk winds whip my hair red cardinal is staying for the joys of snow a spongy carpet on a path that goes for miles ending in the spring

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Date: 11/3/2020 3:09:00 AM
I love the imagery and how you describe things, you switch between rhyme and none rhyme perfectly... these are lovely haiku
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 11/3/2020 11:06:00 AM
My deepest thanks. :)
Date: 11/3/2020 12:54:00 AM
From summer to spring. Lovely haikus. ~~
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 11/3/2020 11:06:00 AM
Many thanks, Victor. :)
Date: 11/2/2020 5:14:00 PM
Really love the imagery in the third stanza, Evelyn: The wind whipping your hair, and the red cardinal staying on for winter snows. Glad they do, as they stand out so well and provide a much-needed splash of color in a colorless season. Nicely penned! :) gw
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 11/2/2020 5:44:00 PM
Exactly, Gershon. That is the reason cardinals are among my favorite birds. I am so glad you liked it. I appreciate your comment. :)
Date: 11/2/2020 4:38:00 PM
I liked this haiku stanza poem. I enjoyed the sense of time captured by specific images.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 11/2/2020 5:41:00 PM
Thank you very much, Jim.