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Along Our Path

Along our path, I've scattered seeds around,
so when the songs of meadowlarks resound,
sweet violets will soon spring from the ground.

As if inside a dream, we'll softly tread
along that path now blossom-carpeted
and make sweet love on a violet bed.

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Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 4/18/2017 8:34:00 PM

This I remember Andrea..love it! : ) 7

Caryl Ramsdale

Date: 9/20/2011 11:28:00 AM

Your words formed lifelike images in my mind as I read. Great job! *Soup Mail* CR

Judy Ball

Date: 8/27/2011 4:24:00 PM

Very nice Andrea. Beautiful imagery. God Bless, JB

Judy Ball

Date: 8/20/2011 2:58:00 PM

Beautifully done my friend with great imagery. Loved it. God Bless, JB

Sunflower Poetess

Date: 8/19/2011 12:14:00 PM

Andrea, Congrats on your first place win in Rams contest. God Bless ~Glenna

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 8/18/2011 10:52:00 PM

Can see those flowers along the path an hear the meadowlarks singing sweetly. love phyl

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/18/2011 1:01:00 AM

me and Nathan, just talked about violets that other day... good luck in contest,..p.d.

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 8/17/2011 5:55:00 PM

congrats on a superb 1st place poem, lovely romantic imagery :-)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/16/2011 10:56:00 PM

oh so sweet and fragrant Andrea.. a wonderful entry full of lovely visuals ..good luck luv..

James Peranteau

Date: 8/16/2011 5:48:00 PM

Beautiful write dear poet, and congratulations with your win ! Until later my friend....much love, james

Joyce Johnson

Date: 8/16/2011 11:03:00 AM

A great one as I said before and I am glad it reached the top. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/16/2011 7:49:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Dr. Ram Mehta's "Triplet" contest Andrea. Love, Carol

Wilma Neels

Date: 8/16/2011 7:47:00 AM

Who wouldn't be smiling while reading this Andrea, awesome and congratulations on your great win, love Wilma

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/16/2011 7:40:00 AM

Congrats on your win..Thanks for letting me know that I placed..Sara

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/16/2011 4:52:00 AM

Andrea, Your poem conjurs romantic dreams to form. What great imagery. No wonder it took first place. Your poetry always inspires me.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/15/2011 11:12:00 PM

Congrats Andrea on your numbero uno win luv.. super words for this contest..my friend..

John Freeman

Date: 8/15/2011 11:03:00 PM

Sweet violet bed, zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzmy, zzzzzzzzmy. Great to see your poem take first place Andrea. Agape, Mose

Nancy Jones

Date: 8/15/2011 10:00:00 PM

Dreamy, dear Andrea. Congrats!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/15/2011 9:56:00 PM

Great to see you at the top, Andrea. I really love this poem! Congratulations, Carolyn

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/15/2011 9:23:00 PM

Congratulations on the first place win in my contest, Andrea

Randy Biffany

Date: 8/15/2011 5:53:00 PM

This is incredibly lovely, sweet and tender; you must be sinomenous with your words. Awesome. I'll be reading more of you. Biffany

Randy Biffany

Date: 8/15/2011 5:49:00 PM

I enjoy your poetry, but I am sending a belated response to a comment you made on one of my poems which left me feeling, "Man, this woman actually gets my writing." You can get plenty of feedback on P.S. (which I love). However, there was something so sincere and helpfull about your feedback. Biffany

Jack Horne

Date: 8/15/2011 2:57:00 PM

What a lovely piece, Andrea. Hope all's well with your shoulder - and hubby

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/15/2011 2:34:00 PM

Lovely description of the lovers walking through the "blossom-carpeted" path as if in a dream. Very nice use of imagery, dear. Best wishes in Dr. Ram's contest! Love, Carolyn