Along My Back Roads

In the backstreets of my mind I find passages anew Along diverging paths, I often see my way through There are places I can ramble or find myself rather lost But there my thoughts can stumble at no damage or cost As I rehearse new ideas in my own private hullabaloo Then along some back roads not often taken or sought Sometimes hard-earned battles are wearily fought Am I good enough to give it a try? What if I should fail? It is sometimes quite hard to allow myself to set sail As my devils and angels ride by to espouse till I’m fraught So I walk through my alleyways to hole up in a safety redoubt Weighing each option before I’m ready to shout and come out I choose to plunge in to move toward the road that continues on For there’s no foreseeing the obstacles this path will then spawn But I’ll use the streets in my mind and my “figuring it out” route written: 9-25-2019 In the backstreets of my mind Poetry Contest 2nd place Sponsored by: Silent One

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Date: 9/28/2019 11:17:00 PM
G'day Jeanne … the back roads we travel in our minds determines our future and sometimes we find some of these start with good intentions but fall away to potholes and erosion - a nicely constructed verse Jeanne - Lindsay
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Date: 9/27/2019 9:54:00 PM
wonderfully written Jeanne...congratulations on your win with this great poem :) hugs
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Date: 9/27/2019 3:36:00 AM
- Congratulations on your winning poem, so well written Jeanne :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/27/2019 1:07:00 AM
Congratulations on a hearty win!
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Date: 9/26/2019 10:46:00 PM
Congratulations, Jeanne on a big win!!
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Date: 9/26/2019 4:02:00 PM
Jeanne congratulations on your win in the contest with this terrific write !
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Date: 9/25/2019 8:55:00 PM
This is a great inspiration.. I enjoyed reading it and have to figure things out along the way, too. God bless you and all my best wishes for the contest
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Date: 9/25/2019 3:14:00 PM
Great one Jeanne. I like the ending about figuring things out. I can relate to that. Very nice poem :)
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 9/25/2019 7:29:00 PM
Hey Heidi, thanks for the read...we're along our life's path for sure.
Date: 9/25/2019 2:00:00 PM
Really nicely done Jeanne. This has a song-like quality that makes it easy to read with its soft flowing cadence. I think this will do well in the contest because it is very creative and the message of your journey is wonderful.
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 9/25/2019 2:17:00 PM
Thank you Chris...I do work hard on the cadence and flow.
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