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Along Came a Spider Contest

A tree spider sat waiting in the hollow of a trunk in ambush for her prey by stealth she would eat no web just camouflage patiently she waits along came a lizard she pounces on it Darting with her sting which starts dissolving the flesh of her prey she happily sups contest: Along Came A Spider written 06/02/2013

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Date: 2/6/2023 2:15:00 AM
superb and lovely write
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Date: 6/24/2013 8:14:00 PM
Nicely realistic poem, Shadow, congratulations on your win!
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Date: 6/21/2013 11:25:00 AM
Unique and creative winning work..Congrats on your win..Sara
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Date: 6/20/2013 4:34:00 PM
Shadow congratulations on your fine win, your poems put chills up my spine, do not like spiders in motion unless they're spinning a web. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 6/20/2013 5:01:00 PM
hi Connie good or bad ? Spiders I would also rather leave alone, I suppose as poets if we can thrill or chill its a half decent poem Shadow x smiles
Date: 6/20/2013 8:44:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A tree spider must be very deadly to eat a lizard. Love, Joyce
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 6/20/2013 2:08:00 PM
Ty Joyce appreciated congrats to you also Shadow x smiles
Date: 6/20/2013 12:28:00 AM
Congratulations and thank you for entering my competition, I enjoyed reading all the entries so much. Yours was outstanding. SuZ
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Date: 6/20/2013 2:10:00 PM
Ty so much SuZ very kind of you and ty for running it Shadow x smiles
Date: 6/3/2013 9:20:00 PM
great write here, thank you for liking my Ancient rain poem ;}
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 6/4/2013 6:03:00 AM
hi Debbie it was lovely. ty for liking mine Shadow
Date: 6/1/2013 8:54:00 PM
Arachnids are fascinating creatures, and your work accurately describes one.
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 6/2/2013 4:52:00 AM
hi Robert they are, so many different types of behaviour. ty Shadow
Date: 6/1/2013 8:23:00 PM
I can picture this! Best wishes for the contest...love,Deb
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Date: 6/2/2013 4:53:00 AM
hi Deb a poem should be like a picture I always think ty Shadow

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