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Photographer: arion kudasz

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Alone

	bleak
no color in my heart
	sad

   hidden
	behind doors

still exposed
	to all the cruelty
		of the wind

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Eve Roper

Date: 10/26/2019 11:00:00 PM

Beautiful verse, Arthur, lonely but still exposed to the outside world

Winged Warrior

Date: 3/6/2019 9:52:00 AM

Late Congrats!!! on your POTD!! Arthur...cool little gem...love & light...^WW^

Alexis Y.

Date: 3/6/2019 2:19:00 AM

Hi Arthur, Great job! Congratulations on getting the poem of day:-) Alexis

Okonkwo Ifeanyichukwu

Date: 3/5/2019 11:00:00 PM

The cruelty and secretive nature of life is endless.... Congratulations Alone Z, on your POTD.

Andrew Fairchild

Date: 3/5/2019 7:19:00 PM

OO! This is good! Love 'still exposed to all the cruelty of the wind'. Loneliness IS kind of an exposed feeling! Congratulations on your poem being selected POTD!

Brandy Nicole

Date: 3/5/2019 7:14:00 PM

The photo is heartbreaking. Your thoughts touch me deeply. No one should ever feel this way. Congratulations Arthur, on Poem of the Day. ~ Brandy

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 3/5/2019 5:31:00 PM

The metaphor in this poem astounds Arthur. Congratulations on having this brilliant poem honored with POTD! : )

Eve Roper

Date: 3/5/2019 2:04:00 PM

Alone is not a very good place to be my friend. Congratulations on poem of the day.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 3/5/2019 1:55:00 PM

An amazing poem Arthur, creative and expressive! Congratulations on being awarded POTD. Poetry Hugs, Jennifer.

Charlie Smith

Date: 3/5/2019 11:28:00 AM

Excellent, my friend, congratulations for POTD honors...

Sunlite Wanter

Date: 3/5/2019 9:26:00 AM

How unusual! How true! Congratulations! P.S I didn't get the picture on the POTD page and went to your own page! I don't know how to express what I feel from that picture!