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Photographer: arion kudasz

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Alone Z

Alone

	bleak
no color in my heart
	sad

   hidden
	behind doors

still exposed
	to all the cruelty
		of the wind
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Roper Avatar
October 26, 2019 at 11:00 PM
Beautiful verse, Arthur, lonely but still exposed to the outside world
Warrior Avatar
March 6, 2019 at 9:52 AM
Late Congrats!!! on your POTD!! Arthur...cool little gem...love & light...^WW^
Y. Avatar
March 6, 2019 at 2:19 AM
Hi Arthur, Great job! Congratulations on getting the poem of day:-) Alexis
Ifeanyichukwu Avatar
March 5, 2019 at 11:00 PM
The cruelty and secretive nature of life is endless.... Congratulations Alone Z, on your POTD.
Fairchild Avatar
March 5, 2019 at 7:19 PM
OO! This is good! Love 'still exposed to all the cruelty of the wind'. Loneliness IS kind of an exposed feeling! Congratulations on your poem being selected POTD!
Nicole Avatar
March 5, 2019 at 7:14 PM
The photo is heartbreaking. Your thoughts touch me deeply. No one should ever feel this way. Congratulations Arthur, on Poem of the Day. ~ Brandy
Marcum Wong Avatar
March 5, 2019 at 5:31 PM
The metaphor in this poem astounds Arthur. Congratulations on having this brilliant poem honored with POTD! : )
Roper Avatar
March 5, 2019 at 2:04 PM
Alone is not a very good place to be my friend. Congratulations on poem of the day.
Proxenos Avatar
March 5, 2019 at 1:55 PM
An amazing poem Arthur, creative and expressive! Congratulations on being awarded POTD. Poetry Hugs, Jennifer.
Smith Avatar
March 5, 2019 at 11:28 AM
Excellent, my friend, congratulations for POTD honors...
Wanter Avatar
March 5, 2019 at 9:26 AM
How unusual! How true! Congratulations! P.S I didn't get the picture on the POTD page and went to your own page! I don't know how to express what I feel from that picture!
Sharp Avatar
March 5, 2019 at 9:07 AM
Very emotive, and expressed with very effective restraint. Well done on a worthy POTD, Arthur.
Messina Avatar
March 5, 2019 at 8:10 AM
This is awesome, Arthur. Congratulations on being awarded POTD. Well-deserved. Charlie
Pigeon Tart Avatar
March 5, 2019 at 7:47 AM
Potent powerful little poem. Perfect. Congrats on POTD my friend, xomo
Allison Avatar
March 5, 2019 at 7:06 AM
Ok so I didn't get POTD (joke) but am so so so delighted this write has been honoured:-) hugs Jan xx
Pandit Avatar
March 5, 2019 at 6:52 AM
Congrats on poem of the day, Arthur.
May Avatar
March 5, 2019 at 6:19 AM
Congrats on POTD Arthur
Andresen Avatar
March 5, 2019 at 3:59 AM
- Awesome - Congratulations on yours p.o.t.d., Arthur :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Cunningham Avatar
March 5, 2019 at 3:42 AM
Powerful verse Arthur, congrats on POTD. Tom.
May Avatar
March 4, 2019 at 3:02 PM
A sad and powerful write Arthur...
Devonshire Avatar
March 4, 2019 at 12:46 PM
If only there were "doors" that could protect us from every type of win, Arthur. Profound message here. Great writing! Hugs, Carolyn
Onclaud Avatar
March 4, 2019 at 12:43 PM
when will we ever be safe?...a bold write reminding us to honor man's dignity... huggs
Callus Avatar
March 4, 2019 at 7:08 AM
Striking and expressive words....poem and accompanying picture a faithful reflection of one another. Regards // paul
Allison Avatar
March 4, 2019 at 1:59 AM
now that is so powerful so sad Art, adding this gem to my faves - its real poetry:-) hugs Jan xx
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