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Alone With God

For five long days I’ve been snowbound. My home with blanket pulled around Is quiet as the distant hill That nestles in its white surround. My world so very still. No small birds trill to break the spell. All vanquished with the flakes that fell. Electric voice immobilized, Marooned in solitary cell, My world strangely disguised. No noisome birdsong to intrude On absolute of quietude. No foot on yielding snow has trod. Suspended in rare interlude Alone, alone with God. The snow remover coming through, The telephone and power crew. Although their efforts I applaud I miss the peaceful time I knew Alone, alone with God. By: Joyce 12/30/02 We all won first in this one.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 6/30/2011 5:10:00 AM
A belated congratulations Joyce on your win in Brian Strand's "One Off" contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/25/2011 3:02:00 PM
So quiet and peaceful. I FLOWS WITH SILENCE
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Date: 6/20/2011 7:37:00 PM
Nice descriptive write sharing your experience,Congrats on your win.
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Date: 6/18/2011 6:11:00 AM
yes something of a vacation without all that constant business! Nice win, congrad's Joyce! Light & Love
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Date: 6/17/2011 9:43:00 PM
wow, I see why you chose this one for your showcase poem. It is very very good, dear lady. Congratulations on your win!!
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Date: 6/17/2011 6:16:00 AM
Congrats Joyce on your first place win in this contest ..another elegant entry my friend.. we are all first place winners in this one luv..enjoy..
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Date: 6/17/2011 12:10:00 AM
sunny congrats om your top win in brian's "off , one" , joyce. we are all no.1 here in the contest! :) huggs
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Date: 6/12/2011 9:23:00 PM
Cute write, Joyce! We do all need that alone time with God, forced by the elements or not! :) Well written. Thanks for sharing and thank you for your congrats on my 5th place winner in P.D.'s contest. Best wishes, Caroline.
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Date: 6/12/2011 2:55:00 PM
Drat those snow plows, Joyce. I was feeling close to God as well as I read your beautiful description of the pristine snow. Get the same feeling at sea. This is definiely a favorite for me. So eloquent. You know, sometimes I get headaches trying to figure out what writers are trying to say. Then I read your work and know why I enjoy visiting this site. Thank you! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 6/12/2011 12:48:00 PM
Enjoyed this one that speaks of your faith..I am glad that I chose this one to read this afternoon..Sara
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Date: 6/11/2011 11:59:00 PM
What a very inspiring write, Joyce- yes sometimes we definitely just have to take away all the distractions and ind that alone time with God-- thank you for this beautiful reminder :)
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Date: 6/11/2011 9:32:00 PM
this piece you wrote was so vivid, so real, i could see the snow coming down. one time this girl and i were stranded on this lonely road with ten foot snow drifts on both sides of the road, we had to stay there until morning when a snow plow came and dug us out, and the car was almost out ouf gas. so i can realate to this poem. thank you for commenting on Bring on summer.
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Date: 6/11/2011 8:59:00 PM
a most lovely inspirational write Joyce .. good luck if for any contest.. being alone with God is a treasure and a treat to enjoy luv.. superbly penned my friend..
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