Alone With God

For five long days I've been snowbound.
My home with blanket pulled around
is quiet as the distant hill
that nestles in its white surround.
My world is still.

No small birds trill to break the spell,
all vanished with the flakes that fell.
Electric voice immobilized,
marooned in solitary cell
my world's disguised.

The morning sun sending his rays
to sparkle up the frosty days
in glowing opalescence,
so bright I must avert my gaze 
in awed defense.

No noisome  creature to intrude
on beauty of the quietude.
No foot on yielding snow has trod,
suspended in rare interlude,
alone with God.



Written for   Deborah's "Beauty" contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Aka Avatar
July 16, 2023 at 3:20 AM
Lovely words, thank you for sharing, Joyce.
Watt Avatar
July 9, 2023 at 3:48 PM
Joyce, this is beautiful and lovely and surreal in its solitude.
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December 18, 2008 at 4:03 PM
The beauty of it all is captured so well in this well written piece of art. I can hear the silence in your poems and it sounds lovely.
Richards Avatar
December 17, 2008 at 5:30 PM
Oh my..yes this a beauty for sure. All snug inside, while all white outside. Lovely lovely! ~Good luck, Joyce!! ~ Carrie
Winter Avatar
December 17, 2008 at 3:51 PM
Wow. You are completely amazing. A most talented poetess with each poem better than the next! This poem is simply awe-inspiring. Breathtaking. Cannot say enough. An absolute winner. Love, shar
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December 17, 2008 at 1:33 PM
Nice poem Joyce, loved it till the end...Raul
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