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Alone With God

For five long days I've been snowbound. My home with blanket pulled around is quiet as the distant hill that nestles in its white surround. My world is still. No small birds trill to break the spell, all vanished with the flakes that fell. Electric voice immobilized, marooned in solitary cell my world's disguised. The morning sun sending his rays to sparkle up the frosty days in glowing opalescence, so bright I must avert my gaze in awed defense. No noisome creature to intrude on beauty of the quietude. No foot on yielding snow has trod, suspended in rare interlude, alone with God. Written for Deborah's "Beauty" contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 7/16/2023 3:20:00 AM
Lovely words, thank you for sharing, Joyce.
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Date: 7/9/2023 3:48:00 PM
Joyce, this is beautiful and lovely and surreal in its solitude.
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Date: 12/18/2008 4:03:00 PM
The beauty of it all is captured so well in this well written piece of art. I can hear the silence in your poems and it sounds lovely.
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Date: 12/17/2008 5:30:00 PM
Oh my..yes this a beauty for sure. All snug inside, while all white outside. Lovely lovely! ~Good luck, Joyce!! ~ Carrie
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Date: 12/17/2008 3:51:00 PM
Wow. You are completely amazing. A most talented poetess with each poem better than the next! This poem is simply awe-inspiring. Breathtaking. Cannot say enough. An absolute winner. Love, shar
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Date: 12/17/2008 1:33:00 PM
Nice poem Joyce, loved it till the end...Raul
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