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Alone In the Ruins of a Chapel

Note: Norwegians are proud of many things, but above all, they are endlessly proud of Sissel Kyrkjebø, the Voice of Norway! International singer. ______________________________________________________________ I live in a deserted chapel, Buffeted and corroded by harsh winds, And yet to me it is a godsend haven Away from hazards of fellow men. Dry from incessant downpours But cold and damp and forlorn, I rest in a forsaken sheltered corner, As my thoughts linger on you. For I can never forget you Though you prefer me no more. Instinctively I rise from my sad corner Hobble towards the broken altar, There I light a candle small In loving memory of you. Its feeble light shines wanly A lonely shadow it throws Down to the depth of my isolated soul, A little faint flame of hope. Soon a turbulent wind violently Blows its way across the plain. Like a horde of evil demons Sweeping all that's in its way, The candlelight is snuffed off At least for this desolate night. Is love so fickle that It can be stifled so quickly? Is love so petty and trivial That it's comparable to a candle wick? But such a light can be renewed, The wax ignites into life once more. So let the gusty winds blow For I know deep within me, My love will never be stifled That I should lose all hope.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




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Date: 4/4/2021 9:27:00 AM
A beautiful poem Victor, love never dies it glows in the hearts of those on whom love was bestowed... Belle
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Date: 3/25/2021 2:12:00 PM
So sad... nostalgic and filled with painful emotion. God bless you always with love, Gina
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Date: 3/20/2021 8:48:00 PM
Wow Victor! I can just picture this scene in the old chapel. I like the hope at the end. Excellent poem!
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Date: 3/20/2021 1:24:00 PM
This one will ring out through the ages I should think, as you have written it in indelible ink for all who are heavy burdened to stop and drink. Glad to see you are still able to produce such gem in these troubled times. Best regards David in NZ
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Date: 3/15/2021 4:01:00 AM
WoW! Victor, What a sad yet well-written verse. Well done:-) Alexis
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Date: 3/14/2021 9:36:00 PM
Beautiful poem, Victor, you always amaze me on your talented writes. Hugs
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Date: 3/14/2021 5:03:00 PM
Very nice poem, Victor. I like the candle used as a metaphor.
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Date: 3/14/2021 3:35:00 PM
A great poem with a perfect song to go with it. Hope you have a great week :)
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Date: 3/14/2021 9:41:00 AM
Your tale of undying love is captivating in its beautiful telling, Victor. True love never dies. :=)
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Date: 3/13/2021 8:44:00 PM
Your poem, relights the candle, Victor and carries on to the spotlight of true poetic classics
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Date: 3/13/2021 8:29:00 PM
She sounds great and you have penned a beautiful but deep poetry... Great imagery! I loved it...
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Date: 3/13/2021 7:38:00 PM
Victor, Like the chapel ruins, dark and brooding is this poem, perhaps. I love it still. My kindest regards to the one known as Sissel Kyrkjebø. -Richard
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Date: 3/13/2021 10:15:00 AM
Another gem from your pen Victor, beautiful but sad and I love the accompanying song:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 3/13/2021 10:04:00 AM
I do believe we are reunited with our mates in the afterlife, Victor. Such a sensitive and tender poem. Love the metaphor of the candle wick! Hugs, Carolyn
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Date: 3/13/2021 5:56:00 AM
The last three lines very inspiring. Enjoyed reading your work. Thanks your presence at my page. Sara
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Date: 3/13/2021 5:47:00 AM
This is so sad but a beautiful read. Love to you and prayers to. God bless you, Love, Gina
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Date: 3/13/2021 3:37:00 AM
Victor, the loneliness and feeling of despair is overwhelming, but so is your ability to describe it so poetically. You've chosen the perfect song for accompaniment.
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Date: 3/13/2021 2:05:00 AM
Great imagery with emotion... specially the second stanza, and you ended it in a positive note Victor. God bless. Have a great day.. ~ Ani
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Date: 3/13/2021 12:50:00 AM
Wow! This is a fave for me, Victor, loved every bit of it:)
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Date: 3/12/2021 3:39:00 PM
wow, I see why you wanted me to see this one. Awesome poetry, Victor.
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Date: 3/12/2021 3:07:00 PM
Seems that with all that is going on in the world although some good happening now This is just such a beautiful poem.
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Date: 3/12/2021 2:30:00 PM
I agree with Kim, it’s worthy of multiple reads. I also enjoyed the Video.
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Date: 3/12/2021 12:50:00 PM
What a sad and lonely piece this is. A rejected lover who no longer wants to be around people. Beautifully written and so well expressed as always. God Bless my friend. JB
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Date: 3/12/2021 11:35:00 AM
Nice penning Victor, a lovely write indeed! Blessings,Gordon
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Date: 3/12/2021 8:08:00 AM
Begs to be read multiple times! Love this!
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