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Alone..... I'M Not Really Here

Listening to the fan Blow my blues away, I drift off on a plain Of sightless hollow, Wondering..... If I'll ever find My home again, find, my home again.....

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Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/14/2009 3:39:00 PM

Love the way your poem "drifts off" as you fall to sleep. I hope the fan blows your blues away forever, James, and you "find" your home again -- right here on poetry soup! Great work, friend! Love, Carolyn

Sabrina Huggins

Date: 8/6/2009 12:34:00 PM

Catching title, its a great poem!...Sabrina

Brian Strand

Date: 8/4/2009 8:58:00 AM

Intriqing title Jim.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/4/2009 4:29:00 AM

What a sad and lonely poem you write. Love, Carol

Gert W. Knop

Date: 8/4/2009 1:47:00 AM

Hi, James, I used to live in different countries, but where do I really feel at home?! Really nice writing, James! And thanks for your comment on Autumn Winds. Gert

James Knox

Date: 8/3/2009 4:35:00 PM

i absolutely love this one :) great job james ... thank you for your comments , they inspire me to continue to write

Corinne Curcio

Date: 8/3/2009 9:37:00 AM

The imagery works wonderfully, as does the formatting of the poem itself. Well done Jim

Christopher Higgins

Date: 8/3/2009 6:17:00 AM

Wonderful writing my brother..the longing in the poem shines through..love the form and how it flows..well done.

Brian Strand

Date: 8/3/2009 12:27:00 AM

Excellent monku in the second stanza Jim,Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments

Jeff Smith

Date: 8/2/2009 11:15:00 PM

That's deep my friend very deep.

Charlene Bird

Date: 8/2/2009 10:40:00 PM

James, I wonder the same thing my friend, some heavy thoughts lie within these brilliant lines.

Jessica Arteaga

Date: 8/2/2009 10:01:00 PM

every bit gave a great visual! hope you do find it, very well done.